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Finally got the first page done for my first sprite comic ever. This first page is not much, since it only about introducing the main characters.
Anyway, here is page one!
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Looking forward to the next chapters, i love your sprite works, by the way.
Hey, is it okay if i audition one of my OCs as a witness?
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Warning, though, he'll be annoying as hell. >_>
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I like how it is so far!
Van Detta? I wonder who the criminal is...
XDDD
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Warning, though, he'll be annoying as hell. >_>
All the more reason he should be a witness.
Yes, and for anyone who can guess correctly where Athena's last name originated from, I'll give them a life time supply of pies!
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So, Athena may come from Athenes... ^^'
Cross might have something to do with... Christ? he was hung on a cross and DIED. A referance to dying?
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Second...sorry, but no. Here's a hint. There are actually two things about her name, the latter only came to me when I thought about it. Her last name is a referent to a character in a series of books written my James Patternson.
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^^'
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Another reason it fits is because of her occupation, Athena has to Cross-examine the witness.
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*what the hell do I have with the Yogi smilie?*
PS: Ben looks a lot with Hwoarang from Tekken xD
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Current update on the comic. I'm working on the witnesses and detective for the case, all of which are original characters. Also be sure to welcome the Rookie Killer when he makes his entrance.
My biggest problem is trying to make a perfect detective. Her name is Dixie Wesson, a cowgirl similar to Marshal Law in personality. I have her concept in my head, but it would require a LOT of editing.
I also see that it is a bit difficult to read the typing, so I'll try and fix that.
Again, thank you for the input. It'll make this comic so much better.
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I really like the Ben sprite too.~
Also, Ooo Witness Submissions? 8DDD -Has a young Jade sprite-
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I need to get the proper Jade Edgeworth Older sprite done. D:
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It's okay if you don't use it^^
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It's okay if you don't use it^^
No you did. : >
Its just I'm trying to make one styled around young!Jade. Like LOTS of franken dolling. xD
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So you'd be maintain her good name in your fanworks, pal?
Hmmmm... whatever, it is time to 
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But still.. it's pretty good so far. I think it has some potential.
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Keep it up! :O
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But still.. it's pretty good so far. I think it has some potential.
Yeah, I'm pretty much going with the tradition of using Payne as the starting prosecutor. It better this way, though since he doesn't stand out, and I can focus more on the witnesses.
Thank you, Mia. I was kind of part way through it, as you could see, and got the feedback about the text, so I fixed it mid-work. Looks much better now. Yeah, the Credable/Credible think was a bit inspired by Donald Serrot and the Family Tree. I never voiced to him about the mistake, since it wasn't important. But I thought it would make a good joke for Ben.
Also, I am opening an audition for an OC prosecutor. This prosecutor won't be around for a while, but I plan to stage out the trial before hand. Simply post a pic of your prosecutor (drawing, or sprite edit, either is good), and write their name, personality, and sprites that could be use to make them.
Alright, current update.
I've...well I haven't been working on the comic for a while....a month to be exact. I just needed to get my evidence, profiles and such in order before I continue. Plus...It's hard working trying to get the right look of the up and coming witnesses.
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