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This is my first fan-trial, so please be gentle with the comments.

People;
Defense Lawyer : Johnathan Darkly *Todog*
Defense Lawyer Aide : Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger *Naruhodou*
Prosecutor: Serge Edgeworth *ArcanaFang*
Victim : Victor Tysons *Mii*
Defendant : Kirk Edmundson *Dofa*
Judge : Judge's Brother *bluebadger*
Witness 1 : Ike Tylers *ajerban*
Witness 2 : Jason Lochar *Xero Wright*
Witness 3 : Sky Kilki *Dahlia*
Witness 4 : Nick Wright *Slezak*
Witness 5 : Olrich Richardson *me*

Court Records:

Evidence:
Attorney's badge : Shows that you're a defense attorney OR prosecutor.
White Knight Order Ensignia : Belonged to the defendant. Found next to the body of the victim. Fingerprints on necklace belong to victim.
Broken Cell Phone : Belonged to victim. Last call made with Nick Wright. Spoken about murdur.
Wallet: Nick Wright's wallet. Found next to victim's door.
Rapier: Murdur Weapon. Found lodged in victim's skull.
Dorm Check In: Check In list on front desk of dorm doors. Shows Nick and Olrich come in at 11:45 PM
Crime Photo: Shows a shadow walk into Tyson's room
Dorm Check Out: Check out list near front door. Shows Nick out on 11:49 PM. SHows Ike out on 11:52 PM
Glasses: Found outside of dorms. Belong to Jebidiah



Profiles:
Johnathan Darkly: Rookie defense attorney who wants to follow in Phoenix Wright's footsteps.
Kirk Edmundson : Ultra rich kid. Leader of a rich kid faternaty. Always is amazed with knights and medievil times.
Serge Edgeworth : Prosecutor presiding over this case. Son of Miles Edgeworth, so he is determined to get the defendant guilty.
Ike Tylers: Witnesses the murdur. Called the cops
Jebidiah Oarinski : Claims to have seen Victor murdured. Got into a fight with the murdurer.
Sky Kilki: Works as a janitor in the dorms. Found the body in Victor's room.
Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger : Saw the murdurer escape.
Olrich Richardson: Was in the victim's room and witnessed the murdur from the victim's closet.
Victor Tysons : Victim of this case, was on bad terms with the defendant. Betrayed Kirk and joined uo with Olrich's clan.
Gabriel Wright : Uri's aide. Studied law and medicine and earned a M.D., J.D., and a P.H.D. The grandson of Phoenix Wright

Why was Edmundson accused? His handprint was found on the ensignia that belonged to the victim that was found near the fireplace.
Also, he knew the victim, and was on bad terms with him.

The murdur takes place in a private school called Torrington University. One of the students is murdered. He is stabbed in the head, and died of blood loss. Also, signes of struggle shows that the victim was punched 5 times.

I planned this trial to be... quite long. Not absurdly long, but not short either. The trial will launch directly after all characters are filled in. And... be the first to "reservate" a role in the trial, first bidder is first buyer.

Please post any wanted changes in the plot, names, or even add characters.

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...

:welly: Image :welly:
Hmm, I can't see my name in the story...
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Naruhodou wrote:
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:welly: Image :welly:
Hmm, I can't see my name in the story...


wat do you mean?????

do you want to be in it???
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:welly: Image :welly: Image :welly:
Yeah.... count me in for this story (as the good guy of course), the name's
:acro: :redd: :javado: Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger
:javado: :redd: :acro:
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NOW TAKE IT TO THE LAUNCH PAD!

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I'm witness #4 then.... :nick-sweat:
:keylady: Hmmmm... whatever, it is time to fly return~ :edgy:

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It's Godot backwards.

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Defense Attourney. Only.. please change the name to Johnathan Darkly.
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I'm sticking to the name Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger as Witness #4! You heard that right.
:keylady: Hmmmm... whatever, it is time to fly return~ :edgy:

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I'll be the Prosecutor lol
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so whose left?
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ArcanaFang wrote:
so whose left?



Defense Lawyer Aide : Gabriel Wright *no change*
Defendant : Kirk Edmundson
Judge : Username, otherwise "Judge"
Witness 1 : Ike Tylers
Witness 2 : Jebidiah Oarinski
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Oh. In that case, I wanna change my role & this time it's final.

Defense Lawyer Aide: Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger

Thanks!
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so basically were missing wittnesses and a judge now...
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I'll be Witness 2, and change his name to Jason Lochar please.
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TailsBell wrote:
This is my first fan-trial, so please be gentle with the comments.

People;
Defense Lawyer : Johnathan Darkly *Todog*
Defense Lawyer Aide : Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger *Naruhodou*
Prosecutor: Serge Edgeworth *ArcanaFang*
Victim : Victor Tysons
Defendant : Kirk Edmundson
Judge : Username, otherwise "Judge"
Witness 1 : Ike Tylers
Witness 2 : Jason Lochar *Xero Wright*
Witness 3 : Sky Kilki *Dahlia*
Witness 4 : Nick Wright
Witness 5 : Olrich Richardson *me*

Court Records:

Evidence:
Attorney's badge : Shows that you're a defense attorney OR prosecutor.
White Knight Order Ensignia : Belonged to the defendant. Found next to the body of the victim. Fingerprints on necklace belong to victim.
Broken Cell Phone : Belonged to victim. Last call made with Nick Wright. Spoken about murdur.
Wallet: Nick Wright's wallet. Found next to victim's door.
Rapier: Murdur Weapon. Found lodged in victim's skull.
Dorm Check In: Check In list on front desk of dorm doors. Shows Nick and Olrich come in at 11:45 PM
Crime Photo: Shows a shadow walk into Tyson's room
Dorm Check Out: Check out list near front door. Shows Nick out on 11:49 PM. SHows Ike out on 11:52 PM
Glasses: Found outside of dorms. Belong to Jebidiah



Profiles:
Johnathan Darkly: Rookie defense attorney who wants to follow in Phoenix Wright's footsteps.
Kirk Edmundson : Ultra rich kid. Leader of a rich kid faternaty. Always is amazed with knights and medievil times.
Serge Edgeworth : Prosecutor presiding over this case. Son of Miles Edgeworth, so he is determined to get the defendant guilty.
Ike Tylers: Witnesses the murdur. Called the cops
Jebidiah Oarinski : Claims to have seen Victor murdured. Got into a fight with the murdurer.
Sky Kilki: Works as a janitor in the dorms. Found the body in Victor's room.
Dr. Naruhodou@Nick Ryuuichi-Wright Doppelgänger : Saw the murdurer escape.
Olrich Richardson: Was in the victim's room and witnessed the murdur from the victim's closet.
Victor Tysons : Victim of this case, was on bad terms with the defendant. Betrayed Kirk and joined uo with Olrich's clan.
Gabriel Wright : Uri's aide. Studied law and medicine and earned a M.D., J.D., and a P.H.D. The grandson of Phoenix Wright

Why was Edmundson accused? His handprint was found on the ensignia that belonged to the victim that was found near the fireplace.
Also, he knew the victim, and was on bad terms with him.

The murdur takes place in a private school called Torrington University. One of the students is murdered. He is stabbed in the head, and died of blood loss. Also, signes of struggle shows that the victim was punched 5 times.

I planned this trial to be... quite long. Not absurdly long, but not short either. The trial will launch directly after all characters are filled in. And... be the first to "reservate" a role in the trial, first bidder is first buyer.

Please post any wanted changes in the plot, names, or even add characters.
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Wibbly wobbly timey-wimey stuff

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If it pleases the court, I'd like to be witness four. I'll keep the name.
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There are three roles left:

Defendant
Judge
Witness 1

Ill give the defense and the witness scripts but i think Slezak and Arcanafang can make them up

First day is trial only on witness 1 and 2
Sencond day is an investigation and a trial on witness 3
Third day is another investigation and trial on witness 4
Fourth Day is trial only on witness 5 and the verdict

If these roles are not filled in soon ill just do them myself

:godot:
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hate WWWS: wicked witch of witness stand

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ill be udgy just judge is fine :udgy: hmm on second thought ill be his brother the canadian one eh go canucks!!
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its yours

:udgy: what about me

:megaphone: no one cares
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Tee Hee Hee...Boom!

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can i be the witness #1?
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Yes you can


ONLY ONE SPOT LEFT:


DEFENDANT
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Tee Hee Hee...Boom!

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It's ajerben.Get it right, pal :sadshoe: :gumshoe:
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Xin Eohp ft. Evil Ayam xD

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ARE YOU CRAZY ???!!! YOU RIPPED MY TRIAL !!! Why did you make a copy of my trial?! You can make up your own freaking story's, WHY DO YOU STEAL IT?!
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Compare... : http://www.forums.court-records.net/vie ... =23&t=4783

This is my first fan-trial, so please be gentle with the comments.

People:
Defense Lawyer : Xero Wright *TAKEN BY XERO WRIGHT*
Defense Lawyer Aide : Jay Slezak *TAKEN BY SLEZAK*
Prosecutor: ??? (same name, has to fit with Bing.) *TAKEN BY UNDERLOAD*
Victim : ??? (No made up name, no one plays the victim )
Defendant : Amy Defen (or your made up name)
(Crazy?) Judge : Username, otherwise "Judge"
Witness 1 : Krystal Farlos *TAKEN BY DAHLIA*
Witness 2 : Johnny Do (keep name this way, Johnny Do's history is a mystery, and it comes from "John Doe") *TAKEN BY DOFA*
Witness 3 : Rosy Redpalm (keep this way) *TAKEN BY ARJEBEN*

Court Records:

Evidence:
Attorney's badge : Shows that you're a defense attorney OR prosecutor.
Big, expensive jewel : Belonged to the defendant. Found next to the body of the victim. Fingerprints on jewel belong to victim.
Broken Cell Phone : Belonged to victim. Last call made with defendant. Spoken about blackmail.
Blanc cheque : Cheque bears name of defendant, other name was never filled in. Cheque for 1 million dollars.
Cd : Cd without writing on it. Is being analysed right now.
High heel : Found next to victim's body, but does not fit the victim.

Profiles:
Xero Wright : Son of Phoenix Wright and Iris. This is his first case as a defense attorney. *TAKEN BY XERO WRIGHT*
Charlotte Bing : Ultra rich woman. Always wants the most rare/expensive things, even if she has to commit crime's for them.
Henry Jing : Prosecutor presiding over this case. Close relative of victim, so he is determined to get the defendant guilty.
Krystal Farlos : Witnessed the murder. Always in a good mood, even in the toughest spots. *TAKEN BY DAHLIA*
Johnny Do : Claims to have seen Charlotte fall. Absolutely no information about him.
Rosy Redpalm : Worker at the hotel the victim stayed, and, eventually, fell off. Found the body in the hotel courtyard.
Amy Defen : Defendant of this case, was on bad terms with the victim. Seems to be hiding something from Xero...
Jay Slezak : Xero's aide, studied law himself. Usually helps the prosecuting office, now helps Xero to build up his lawying skills. *TAKEN BY SLEZAK*

Why was Defen accused? Her handprint was found on the leather jacket that belonged to the victim.
Also, she knew the victim, and was on bad terms with her.

There is a rich businessman hotel called Tawertega Hotel. One of the guests is murdered. She is pushed of the building, and died of a broken neck. Also, signes of struggle shows that the victim was pushed.

I planned this trial to be... quite long. Not absurdly long, but not short either. The trial will launch directly after all characters are filled in. And... be the first to "reservate" a role in the trial, first bidder is first buyer.

Please post any wanted changes in the plot, names, or even add characters.
I MADE THAT TRIAL ABOUT A WEEK AGO, DON'T BE A PART IN THIS TRIAL, THIS GUY IS A FAG !!!!!!!!
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Xin Eohp wrote:
Compare... : http://www.forums.court-records.net/vie ... =23&t=4783

This is my first fan-trial, so please be gentle with the comments.

People:
Defense Lawyer : Xero Wright *TAKEN BY XERO WRIGHT*
Defense Lawyer Aide : Jay Slezak *TAKEN BY SLEZAK*
Prosecutor: ??? (same name, has to fit with Bing.) *TAKEN BY UNDERLOAD*
Victim : ??? (No made up name, no one plays the victim )
Defendant : Amy Defen (or your made up name)
(Crazy?) Judge : Username, otherwise "Judge"
Witness 1 : Krystal Farlos *TAKEN BY DAHLIA*
Witness 2 : Johnny Do (keep name this way, Johnny Do's history is a mystery, and it comes from "John Doe") *TAKEN BY DOFA*
Witness 3 : Rosy Redpalm (keep this way) *TAKEN BY ARJEBEN*

Court Records:

Evidence:
Attorney's badge : Shows that you're a defense attorney OR prosecutor.
Big, expensive jewel : Belonged to the defendant. Found next to the body of the victim. Fingerprints on jewel belong to victim.
Broken Cell Phone : Belonged to victim. Last call made with defendant. Spoken about blackmail.
Blanc cheque : Cheque bears name of defendant, other name was never filled in. Cheque for 1 million dollars.
Cd : Cd without writing on it. Is being analysed right now.
High heel : Found next to victim's body, but does not fit the victim.

Profiles:
Xero Wright : Son of Phoenix Wright and Iris. This is his first case as a defense attorney. *TAKEN BY XERO WRIGHT*
Charlotte Bing : Ultra rich woman. Always wants the most rare/expensive things, even if she has to commit crime's for them.
Henry Jing : Prosecutor presiding over this case. Close relative of victim, so he is determined to get the defendant guilty.
Krystal Farlos : Witnessed the murder. Always in a good mood, even in the toughest spots. *TAKEN BY DAHLIA*
Johnny Do : Claims to have seen Charlotte fall. Absolutely no information about him.
Rosy Redpalm : Worker at the hotel the victim stayed, and, eventually, fell off. Found the body in the hotel courtyard.
Amy Defen : Defendant of this case, was on bad terms with the victim. Seems to be hiding something from Xero...
Jay Slezak : Xero's aide, studied law himself. Usually helps the prosecuting office, now helps Xero to build up his lawying skills. *TAKEN BY SLEZAK*

Why was Defen accused? Her handprint was found on the leather jacket that belonged to the victim.
Also, she knew the victim, and was on bad terms with her.

There is a rich businessman hotel called Tawertega Hotel. One of the guests is murdered. She is pushed of the building, and died of a broken neck. Also, signes of struggle shows that the victim was pushed.

I planned this trial to be... quite long. Not absurdly long, but not short either. The trial will launch directly after all characters are filled in. And... be the first to "reservate" a role in the trial, first bidder is first buyer.

Please post any wanted changes in the plot, names, or even add characters.
I MADE THAT TRIAL ABOUT A WEEK AGO, DON'T BE A PART IN THIS TRIAL, THIS GUY IS A FAG !!!!!!!!



Im gonna be nice.........I JUST GOT MY TONSILS AND ABNOIDS OUT TODAY SO IM PISSED AND SECOND IT MAY HAVE SOME SIMILARITIES BUT ITS NOT COPYING SO JUST LEAVE ME ALONE OR SIGN UP.
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How about both of you shut up? Both those posts are a bit childish.

Just because you got your tonsils out does not give you an excuse to be rude. I don't give a shit what happened. Don't take your shit out on others.
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NOW TAKE IT TO THE LAUNCH PAD!

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The pair of you, stop it.
Xin Eohp, I truly fail to see how this guy copied you. There are just very minor similarities maybe, but that's all. Don't have a cow.
TailsBell, you have no reason to be so damn rude. Explain your point calmly that you did not copy him, but I fail to see how having your tonsils out is a good enough reason to be rude.
Seriously, if it doesn't stop, I will leave this trial.
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Dahlia wrote:
The pair of you, stop it.
Xin Eohp, I truly fail to see how this guy copied you. There are just very minor similarities maybe, but that's all. Don't have a cow.
TailsBell, you have no reason to be so damn rude. Explain your point calmly that you did not copy him, but I fail to see how having your tonsils out is a good enough reason to be rude.
Seriously, if it doesn't stop, I will leave this trial.


I think it had to do with TailsBell using Xin Eohp's original template, but then fixing it to meet the trial needs. Technically that's not 'copying', but merely using the template of another. Which isn't even stealing, cause I don't think Xin Eohp exactly copyrighted his template.
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I say you did it... so you did it.

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Anyways, it still isn't nice. Look at these sentences that are exact copies:

"This is my first fan-trial, so please be gentle with the comments."
And:
"I planned this trial to be... quite long. Not absurdly long, but not short either. The trial will launch directly after all characters are filled in. And... be the first to "reservate" a role in the trial, first bidder is first buyer."

If you're going to copy someone's trial, do it the good way. Don't leave sentences like this in, and please... play nice. (That includes not copying someone's template/trial.)
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Xin Eohp ft. Evil Ayam xD

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That isn't his only mistake...
When he first posted this trial, he left in the sentence :"Why was Defen accused?"
And , as everyone can see, there is no Defen in his trial... -.-''
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I say you did it... so you did it.

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'Why was Edmundson accused?'

That's what it says up top. Maybe edited. Anyways, like I said... play nice. Or mister Cyron's going to sue you. :edgeworth:
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ok I'm a little better today, so I will try to make the things a little more different but I did use the template because I though it was a smart idea. :phoenix:


But it does not explain the outburst you gave. :zenitora:

I'll cut a deal, I'll change some stuff and you can go about on your business ok?

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Wibbly wobbly timey-wimey stuff

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And can you please, please, PLEASE for all of our sakes TRY TO IMPROVE YOUR GRAMMAR? We're mature people here and we expect mature conduct. So please think before you submit your post! Make sure all your mistakes are fixed, and if you have trouble with grammar, CONSULT A FRICKIN' ENGLISH TEACHER... That is all. Have a nice day. :)
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I say you did it... so you did it.

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Hmm. I think my English has been good up to now. Anyway, if you want to become a witness in the original case, pm me, and read the new topic.
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Not to be arguemental but I have one rule here and it is not to advertise other cases :maya:

So please Cyron dont do this again.

Now back to business

We need one more person to the:

DEFENDANT!!!!

PS: Sorry for being rude yesterday and Tuesday but its just im not in a good mood since my throat burns so, I just hope no one will leave for my outburst.
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I say you did it... so you did it.

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:objection:
There were no rules you posted on this trial. Anyway, it means I didn't know.
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Its ok, just dont do it again and ill remember to put up my rules next time.
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Wibbly wobbly timey-wimey stuff

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The grammar post was directed at TailsBell.
Thank you for reading. I hope you have a wonderful day.
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Excellent source of puns.
Refrigerate after opening.
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Slezak wrote:
The grammar post was directed at TailsBell.



Thx for the memo on grammar didnt know who that was for.

We can start the trial but the problem is we need the DEFENDANT!!

If we dont get one ill play him or someone else will

Next Problem is when people are gonna be on???????

I need to know when people r on so we can do the trial
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So how's it now... wonder if everythings' fixed? Take it easy & make plans carefully. If you rush on & include a lot of blunders, I think others willl keep on objecting to you. Have enough rest before composing the whole plot so that you'll achieve a good trial. You can do it TailsBell! PM when everything's alright as I might be away with other RPs. Take care.
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