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This was obviously my very first sprite I ever did. So I hope you can forgive me for the major flaws. >.>
update:
Takashi, from Ouran Host Club!
More to come soon. ..That is, if I feel like making more. XD
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I'm so sorry!!!!! D=
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If possibel, try deepening the line on the second one's sleeve.
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Will do! *salutes*
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Will do! *salutes*
No ptoblem.
Also, with your first one, you can see part of the scraf by her arm. This should be kept, but it looks like a chunk is missing from the bottom (I would Save it on my compouter and use paint to point it out, but that takes too long). Or it looks like hair. Is there a reason or...?
Other than this fault, it is REALLY good.
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Am I your wild-type?
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Also, with your first one, you can see part of the scraf by her arm. This should be kept, but it looks like a chunk is missing from the bottom (I would Save it on my compouter and use paint to point it out, but that takes too long). Or it looks like hair. Is there a reason or...?
Other than this fault, it is REALLY good.
*bows* Thanks for the kind compliment, Darzie. I must have OCD and tried to make sure this was as presentable as possible. I'm almost another von karma when it comes to spriting and drawing. I'm never fullly satisfied. But compliments make me wanna get even better. *lawl*
Ah, Lin's scarf. Yeah.. I did not like how it turned out. I might just think of ditching the scarf. since her stethoscope is enough of a decent accesory for her. Reason I used it was to hide the fact that I had to hide the blank spot as I got rid of Ema's bow/ribbon thingies. D=
I tried to make it look shorter than Lana's original scarf... It was hard trying to get the whole thing in there while using Ema's body. SO I just tried to draw the bottom (tail) part of it myself. Forgot to mention that. O_o
Well, I am in South Carolina (against my will) with no folder of sprites with me.. and No photoshop to edit with. I am contemplating on using paint.. but I really am afraid of using it.... since I always used Gimp or Photoshop so much. I think I need to stop being so reliant on it and give the dern pint a try, anyway. O_o
I will post some more sprites when I get home and in the comfort of my own computer. I got a hopefully slightly better version of Lin in the works. D=
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~ IdahoRose: *bows* Thank you. My friend, who made her up, liked the sprite, too. *grin* Which was all I wanted.
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A] Work at 4x magnification or more, and take your time.
B] get rid of jagged edges by using a pixel of the next lighter shade to the line at points where lines hit corners... I'm not sure how to explain this part properly.
Check out capcom's fighters - specifically the Street Fighter Alpha / VS series (as SF3 is a little too detailed, Darkstalkers use odd contrast lines at times and CvS uses flat almost watercolory sprites), for a great how-to on old school shading. Check out my sprite posted above and zoom in to see what I mean about jaggies - there are almost no lines with sharp corners.
Good luck! They're not bad for beginner's tries.
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But somthing is bugging me about the hair.
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Am I your wild-type?
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Hm.. Maybe I could randomly request you to make a better Celi sprite for me. You do colorful characters better than I could... heh heh heh.
Ami: Yeah, I need more practice on shading. And making their ponytails from scratch was not that fun..
Oh? Well, when I make Lin's sprite sheet, I'll consider that. The scarf bugs me, too... *twitch*
Thanks for stopping by. With more practice, they'll get better. =D
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Hm.. Maybe I could randomly request you to make a better Celi sprite for me. You do colorful characters better than I could... heh heh heh.
Ooh, this sounds fun! Heheheheh...
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