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Especially for this:
Now, obviously it's not done, but I'm having trouble thinking of ideas to fill up the spaces. To have any idea, it might be best to put a really quick bio or something here, so here goes (Keep in mind that my OC is set in 19th century):
Renee Chevalier-Gagnon is a French woman that works in Britain as Lord Jacob Greenwood's Private Guard (despite being a woman.) She came to Britain as an illegal immigrant as she was trying to hide her identity from her family, a cult that worshipped the ancient rites of Paganism (and who were going to sacrifice her life due to an 'oath'). Lord Greenwood took her under his wing as his Private Guard, where she learnt the duties and skills of one in her position. After eight years of serving as his guard with undeniable loyalty and secrecy, Lord Greenwood ordered her to take his life for unknown reasons. Of course, she was conflicted; this man had saved her life in more than one way, and she wasn't going to forget it any time soon. However she caved in, and took his life peacefully: in his sleep. She was sent to prison a week later and was sentenced to be executed, however by miraculous means, she escaped prison and continued to live secretly in Britain.
If there's any questions feel free to ask!
Note: the only part I've actually done is Renee, so anything in red isn't finalised.
Note: Yes, this is for the C-R OC comp.
Another Note: What she's wearing is her Guard uniform
Here's a better view of her, though:
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Haha, no! It's just some sketch lines to show some planning! Haha, blood though!
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Haha, no! It's just some sketch lines to show some planning! Haha, blood though!
Ah, okay.
I actually thought blood was flying out of her shoulder somehow. XD
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Just a misunderstanding! Really funny though,
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Just a misunderstanding! Really funny though,
Yes... That.
No. Flying blood is fun.
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Just a misunderstanding! Really funny though,
Yes... That.
No. Flying blood is fun.
You've heard about flying blood, get ready for swimming blood!
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Aw, why not? I just want to have some fuuunnn~
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Main characters are:
Blood and Chlorine; dancing the boogaloo in an even more ridiculous fashion than that of the main antagonist, Swimming Pool
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Aw, why not? I just want to have some fuuunnn~
It's painful to wash blood out of clothes. Togs would be even worse because you gotta be careful with the material. I don't think I can afford that.
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Aw, why not? I just want to have some fuuunnn~
Your mind is almost, ALMOST as warped as mine.
Main characters are:
Blood and Chlorine; dancing the boogaloo in an even more ridiculous fashion than that of the main antagonist, Swimming Pool
With supporting character cells
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Aw, why not? I just want to have some fuuunnn~
It's painful to wash blood out of clothes. Togs would be even worse because you gotta be careful with the material. I don't think I can afford that.
HAHAHAHAHA~!
What do you mean~?
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What do you mean~?
My mind is a horrible place of darkness, despair, depression and pain.
And also an occasional cute puppy video, so that's neat.
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Than never stopped danganronpa and it's pink blood.
Also nice work, I like it.
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Also nice work, I like it.
Thank you! Although, very true about DR. To be honest, I find that the pink blood is creepier than if the blood was red.
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I was gonna say it last night, but I got tired.
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Personally, if this is going to be entered for the art contest, I'd suggest at least having a full body illustration of your character, either to add on to this piece (to make it a ref sheet) or by itself (if you want to turn this picture into a splash illustration).
To add to the picture, I'd personally try and add elements of her story to it, like the splash illustrations that are shown before cases in AA. It could help show what kind of a character she is!
Technical nitpick: the linework is nice and clean, but the shading on her looks a bit odd--there's too many shadows on her face, unless something is hovering directly behind her to cast that particular kind of shadow. Hold off on putting in shading until you've composed the whole picture first, and then you can work out cohesive lighting from there.
Hope that helps! And good luck!
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Personally, if this is going to be entered for the art contest, I'd suggest at least having a full body illustration of your character, either to add on to this piece (to make it a ref sheet) or by itself (if you want to turn this picture into a splash illustration).
To add to the picture, I'd personally try and add elements of her story to it, like the splash illustrations that are shown before cases in AA. It could help show what kind of a character she is!
Technical nitpick: the linework is nice and clean, but the shading on her looks a bit odd--there's too many shadows on her face, unless something is hovering directly behind her to cast that particular kind of shadow. Hold off on putting in shading until you've composed the whole picture first, and then you can work out cohesive lighting from there.
Hope that helps! And good luck!
Ahh thank you so much!!
With the splash images, I'm not entirely sure
Again, thank you very much for the feedback
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Personally, if this is going to be entered for the art contest, I'd suggest at least having a full body illustration of your character, either to add on to this piece (to make it a ref sheet) or by itself (if you want to turn this picture into a splash illustration).
To add to the picture, I'd personally try and add elements of her story to it, like the splash illustrations that are shown before cases in AA. It could help show what kind of a character she is!
Technical nitpick: the linework is nice and clean, but the shading on her looks a bit odd--there's too many shadows on her face, unless something is hovering directly behind her to cast that particular kind of shadow. Hold off on putting in shading until you've composed the whole picture first, and then you can work out cohesive lighting from there.
Hope that helps! And good luck!
Ahh thank you so much!!
With the splash images, I'm not entirely sure
Again, thank you very much for the feedback
(Also, I've seen your OC and he's awesome, no joke!
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Here's some drawings I did today:
I don't have anything else from present
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Just because it doesn't have flying blood in it, doesn't mean it's a measly 0/10!
You have to take into account that it is a different piece than the previous art work!
Without detaching yourself from previous works, you can't possible give an accurate rating based on something completely different!(Yeah! I've got this in the bag!)
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There's no flying blood.
I changed my mind, no flying blood is a bigger matter than I said before. -1/10
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(Ahh, I made it worse!)
(Think, Youthun, think! Is there anyway that could increase your rating?)
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Nothing, because I already do, silly. XD
The joke is dead now. Ha.
Seriously though, I love the drawings!
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Nothing, because I already do, silly. XD
The joke is dead now. Ha.
Seriously though, I love the drawings!
Haha, it was fun while it lasted! Plus, it's great material for an inside joke
! Thanks a lot, though! 
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Yes indeed, Oliver. Yes, indeed.And may I say, it's a great one.
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