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EDIT: I couldn't share just one. ^^;
--
This was written back in 2005, but it's one of my personal favourites.
After Twilight
The sunset's golden glow
Has faded underground;
The giants light their eyes
With glaring all around.
I feel like such a fool,
A child without a name.
This world is cold and cruel,
Our days never the same.
A marble statue out,
A fragile egg within.
The brown leaves blow away,
My life is growing thin.
A hopeless case in life,
With all that I despise.
Sometimes I must wonder:
Will the sun still rise?
--
This was written much more recently. I was very heavily influenced by historical poets; even more so by Romantic musicians. In fact, I was listening to Tchaikovsky's "Romeo and Juliet Fantasy Overture" when I wrote this.
Eden and refuge
Many hours of darkness surround us,
And all the evils our houses hold
Will seek to crumble
What we know is pure and true.
Spirit away with me, O beloved!
Together, we will flee beyond
All the seas and mountains
To find our Eden,
And refuge there for eternity.
Goodnight, sweet children,
And may you dream of each other...
--
Finally, most recently, in music class we were told to write lyrics for a song. Now, the song had to have a social message. I wanted to use one of my already existing ideas. Solution? Kill two birds with one stone.
It isn't finished yet.
Two empires, great machines of war were locked in a struggle for domination.
They used all the tactics they knew: raiding, bombing, intimidation.
But the most blood was shed on the open battlefield,
Where men of flesh fought next to men of steel;
Both wanted to be truly great,
But they were locked in a stalemate.
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I just found a poetry compatition in school. Well it's actually on a website but it's only UK only. Sorry.
I'm entering btw.
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I woke that night in relentless sorrow
In search of light and a lost tomorrow
In hopes to borrow some repairs
Down the flight of several stairs
Put my mind to ease from these despairs
To my office, the safest place
My saving grace from such disgrace
Now safe and sound inside this place
I splash some water on my face
My mind and heart, they seem to race
I was calmer then than am I now
I sit to think of when and how
The sweat is weighing on my brow
My limbs are swaying my head starts to bow
The door flies open “God what now?”
“Doc!” he pleas and falls to his knees
“Save me please from this twisted disease
That can make me freeze with sadistic ease”
He stops and he breathes, I hate such reprieves
They dance and they tease and my mind do they seize
“So much anxiety, my life is a travesty!”
He said it so simply it actually amazes me
There’s no tone of plea, and I’m starting to see
Just what’s to be, and there’s no way to flee
If I don’t help him get free, all the guilt’s on me
He’s no where to find, is he all in my mind?
This cannot be so, where is he though?
I pray I’m not blind so I look behind
My panic starts to grow and I can feel it show
Just a mirror to find, am I losing my mind?
Ah! Found him at last, there he is there
He’d been so fast, but looks worse for wear
He looks aghast and I rise from my chair
To return his stare his eyes have cast
Through me they blast and I become so aware
Such a weird face, it’s so familiar yet
From where I can’t place but suspicions relent
I’m sick of this chase for time well spent
He smiles with grace in the freedom I’ve lent
Now his fingers lace and his arms go bent
They rise up over his head, look of terror and dread
As if he’ll strike me dead, eyes burning bright red
He makes to hit me, break me, scare me, spill me
And then there’s a sound, and shards of the mirror
Hitting the ground
I'm no Jibo, but I like this one at least. Please tear it apart everyone.
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So, here it is:
Sheaf of Oats
I open my doors for you
I don't cry, I don't shout
I take you on my lap and hug
I ask, please don't open your mouth
Our paths unite like the tissue finds it way on a scar
That's what I want, that's what I desire
We'll make a sheaf of oats together
I'll gather the oats, you'll tie it up
We'll look the birds on the sky
Our angels, your devils
We break up when I feel the pain
When the Lord says, I have to face the perils
Yeah, I know it's pretty sad and all, but hey, that's me. I've written more poems about the matter, because I find it facinating. It's so big part of life that it must be studied and so on.
And it really was better in Finnish, as it rhymed more and it had a better rhythm. But what can ya do?
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and if anyone still feels like reading any of them..... I'll just put up a happy and a sad section. The 'happy' poems as I'll call them for now were written for an amazing someone who's very very special to me (dun dun dun, I wonder who....nyehehe)
anywaii....:
Spoiler: this would be happy poem number one
Spoiler: and naturally, this is happy poem number 2!
Spoiler: and can anyone guess what'll be here..? is it....happy poem number 3?
Spoiler: this is a sonnet I wrote for a project at school.... it's not amazing but oh well
Spoiler: this one's quite old, and sad... but writing poems about memories and alike makes me forget so that's a good thing!
Spoiler: and now.... another rather old and sad poem
Spoiler: another sad one... I actually think this one's older than the one before but oh well ^^"
Spoiler: this one....would be really dark and sickening tender in a way...o.o'
Spoiler: and this is in memory of my departed friend, Wayne, who died at the age of 11 in a traffic accident...
and now.... for anyone who understands Dutch... *cough* probably close to no one *cough* ...^^"
Spoiler: a Dutch poem?! yes! even though I actually gave it a Latin title... ^^'
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These are really gooooood!I have a notebook where I occasionally jot down stuff. I have tons of poems
I'll just post a couple for now :3Stop the World (originally written in Portuguese- translation iffy)
Every single day
This same agony
In 24 hours there’s no time
To make a day
Everything goes by too fast
And I’m being left behind
And the world keeps on running
No matter what we do
Oh how I wish I could stop the world
Just for a second
Stop the world
I wanna get off
Stop time and just hold on
To every instant, to every look
Stop the Earth and not worry
And not let the memory fade
Just so my head will stop spinning
Stop the world
I wanna get off
Do You Know -Written for my special someone... Except I never gave it to him... *embarrassed*
You know it’s been a while
Since I’ve last seen you smile
But do you know I still think about you?
And you know that I’m now far
Very far from where you are
But do you know I still think about you?
You probably never thought
I’d spare you another thought
But you mean a lot to me
Probably
A lot more than I ever will to you
And you know we haven’t spoken
Since the day our ties were broken
But do you know I still think about you?
And you know I’ve made new friends
Moved along and tied my ends
But do you know I still think about you?
And I never really thought
You’d spare me another thought
But you mean a lot to me
Probably
A lot more than I ever will to you
I just wish that you
Would think about me too
Untitled -This one... Everyone seems to love this one, except me
With each laugh of yours
I should laugh as well
But a false grin crosses my lips
And when your eyes shine
I should feel alive
Instead I turn my back to you
Sayin’ see you soon
And you say okay
And you smile back at me
And for a moment I want to stay
I go and I know you’ll wait
But I won’t come back now
At least not for a while
And in the end what I regret
Are the words I left unsaid
Turn Around -I wrote this with a very very specific image in mind, but I'll keep it open for interpretation.
When you told me
And asked me if it was ok
I said yes, and smiled
And then we were on our way
But all I wanted
Was to scream, and scream
It was a nightmare
Not a dream
Then you opened a window
Asked me to look through
And what I saw was her
And it was almost as if she knew
I had been ready to cut the thread
Now I couldn’t
I kept it hidden
It went away
And I still dream
And I still wonder
I wonder if she really knew
---
Like I said, I have tons more where these came from XD *trudges through piles of doodles*
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^^'
Hospital
Shameless greetings in the morning
To make up for the loneliness at night
And the sight of endless corridors
That should lead us to the light
In rooms where sorrow makes us suffer
And anger keeps us awake
Where ignorance and blindness
Are the only pills we take
White coats drenched in bleach and blood
From the souls in which they dive
And the lies they use to cover up
Their futile promises of life
Our broken bodies pressed against the wall
Kept apart in vain
Identical twins in our empty hearts
Cloned in our misery and pain
Please, promise me it’s fatal
So I will dare to close these eyes
Please, tell me this is terminal
Enchant me with those lies
We exchange unanswered prayers
This is nothing but a game
You’ll shake your head in pity
As I bow down mine in shame
Ungrateful goodbyes we whisper
Stained hands we shake at the door
And if this doesn’t kill me now
Then wait for me
tomorrow
I will be back for more
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Maybe
They sit there in silence, each avoiding the other’s eyes
Each screaming in their heads, thinking this is no surprise
And as they wait there for a miracle, their train has come and gone
There is nothing they can do, and they have known this all along
Now just you look me in the eyes
Listen to what I’ve got to say
And maybe we can work this out,
Maybe the sun will shine today
Maybe we will smile, maybe we will laugh
Maybe this isn’t over
And maybe,
Just maybe it’ll last
They don’t even have to talk to know what the other says
And though not a word is spoken, they both go their separate ways
Such a painful understanding, and yet nothing has been done
Maybe they’ve forgotten they once said, “You are the one”
Now will you please just sit beside me
Listen to the beat of my heart
And maybe we can work this out,
Maybe all this won’t fall apart
Maybe this isn’t over, maybe this will last
Maybe we will smile
And maybe
Just maybe we will laugh
---
This poem got published in my school's literary magazine! And I actually got fanmail for it! (5 letters... I dunno where they are, though)
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I'd Bring You the Stars
I'd bring you the stars, my dear
But they're oh so far away
They're so high up in the sky
And disappear during the day
I'd bring you the sun, my dear
But it's oh so bright and hot
It'll blind your eyes and burn your skin
I won't give that a shot
I'd bring you a flower, my dear
But it'll just wilt and die
After a week of blossom cheer
It'll wither before your eyes
So I'll bring you a hug my dear
And maybe a kiss or two
And I'll bring you three sweet words
I love you
---
I wrote this for someone who really needed it. I unfortunately lost contact with them
---
Tears From the Soul
I'm feeling so lonely
I know you are too
I can't help but wonder
Oh, where are you?
You were here by my side all along...
I wish you could hear this song...
You know I've always cared for you
You know I've always tried to pick you up
I tried to pull you out of your hole
And now I'm all alone
With rain and tears from the soul
I miss you
I know you miss me too
I can't help but wonder
Oh, where are you?
You were here for me all along...
Oh how I wish you could hear this song...
You know I've always cared for you
You know I've always tried to pick you up
I tried to pull you out of your hole
And now I'm all alone
With rain and tears from the soul
I'm feeling abandoned
I know you feel too
I can't help but wonder
Oh, where are you?
You will always be my friend...
Heads up, it's not the end...
You know I've always cared for you
You know I've always tried to pick you up
I tried to pull you out of your hole
And now I'm all alone
With rain and tears from the soul
I'm here for you
I'll always be
If you need a hug
You can count on me
Even if you're far
Like I know you are
I'll be here
Awaiting your return...
Crying tears from the soul...
---
This one got published in my other school's literary magazine.
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Remember Me
My wish
Is that when you remember me
You'll smile
And when you see my picture
You'll laugh
And remember those jokes we used to tell
Long before we ever worried about tomorrow
That your heart will float a little
And your eyes will shine a little
Just like mine did, today
That when memories come back
They will be of happy days
And your feet will drag a little
As you stroll down old nostalgia lane
That even as weeks turn to months turn to years
In those memories
We'll find each other
And the smiles will block the tears
---
This one for another person, who was feeling down, so I tried to cheer them up.
---
Winter
You see the gray clouds rolling in
And the cold air brushes against your skin
It's like winter came early this year
And your world is wrapped in darkness and fear
It's so unfair when it rains
When you're the one with all the pains
But I'll be a blanket of warmth to you
And I promise I'll get you through
Let your soul cry
Let your heart sob
Let your spirit stir a storm
Before you know it
It's all over
Tonight I'll keep you warm
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A Flower's Melancholy
She's a flower
Raised in a pot
Isolated and different from other flowers
When she moved to a flower bed
Nobody noticed her
She would wait to be noticed
She would wait for friends
But nobody noticed her
She didn't know what to do
She only knew it seemed she was fated to be like this forever
When the other flowers slept
She stayed up
Stroking the rough face of the canvas with her brush's soft, delicate tip
Producing worlds
Producing magic
Procuding the impossible
Then, she realized
She found the cure
For a flower's melancholy
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blechlvr wrote:
Doesn't this sort of thing belong in the Berry Big Circus?
No it doesn't. Don't be stupid.
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"The Name of Life"
Here I lie,
In long, green fields.
My mind yearns,
And my heart yields.
The grass sighs wistfully,
As the wind soars past.
I note a lone pigeon,
By impulse, my hands cast.
It rests its weary feet,
On my fair hand.
And it’s river of life,
Is a whirlpool of sand.
I pray for it’s safe journey,
To the place it belongs.
The cycle of life,
Has both rights and wrongs.
The grass sways majestically,
It’s a symbol of life.
So easily trodden, so easily picked,
And so full of strife.
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*cough* and yes your poems are better than mine! nyeh! *cough*
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Who are you?
I don't seem to know who you are
I'm starting to remember that you are who
left inside of me, a scar
Oh, now I remember
You were my best friend
You seemed like a family member
Then it came to an end
Oh, now I remember
We were over at each other's houses almost every day
The relationship kept getting greater and greater
And then I was betrayed
Now I know your identity
I tried and tried
And so I accpet the fact today
That the person I once knew has died
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That's great, Godot Fan, do more, I beseech you!
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Too much time, dude, too much time!
...That took 5 minutes.
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Godot Fan wrote:
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Too much time, dude, too much time!
...That took 5 minutes.
Mew~, impressive.
Then you gotta do more. >.>
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Spoiler: "For My Darling Maxie"
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Spoiler: Nothing spoilerish really
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Nego wrote:
My cravat is now taking all the tears.
That line is made of win. xD
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Distant Dreams
Like a dream world
Which you could never join
And the time it would take
Is another side of the impossible coin.
There you would witness
Unimaginable sights
As wondrous as
The Northern Lights.
Anything’s possible
That’s the true beauty.
And you’ll believe coming here
Should be everyone’s duty.
It’s an escape from reality
The essence of being alive.
In the wipe, open space
You can’t resist but to dive.
You could never enter it,
You could only mime.
As to truly explore the Galaxy
You’d require infinite time.
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Guilty or innocent
That's one question desperatly in need for an answer
The fate of your client
Is in the hands of you, the lawyer
Then, thoughts swim in your head
What if the court doesn't believe your logic
And cause your client to be dead
Now you begin to panic
However, you won't be alone
Your mentor is by your side
At least you won't be on your own
With your mentor, who is your guide
The time has come
The courtroom doors open
You sigh and walk into the kingdom
Of Justice
The last line isn't supposed to rhyme, by the way
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Go ahead, laugh.
I'm not an addict, you say?
The Internet isn't addicting?
Of course that's what you'd say.
You aren't on there 25/8.
You don't know what it's like.
To mourn over a lost wi-fi card.
To become used to the names of e-mail scammers.
To have hardly ever picked up a pencil in your whole life.
To eat instant food every day just so you don't have to do without the web.
To have your only true friends have numbers in their names.
No, of course not.
It's nothing like crack.
With crack it hurts you.
Well, riddle me this.
What's the difference between a drugged up vegetable
and a kid who stares blankly at his computer all day?
Not a lot, is there?
There are no help groups for this,
no counselors to help you,
no people to help you stop.
And no way to court order an intervention.
We may be winning the war against drugs,
but that doesn't mean addictions still don't exist.
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