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Ever wanted to put Phoenix into the witness stand? But didnt want Young or old Phoenix? Well here ya go! Here is Present day Phoenix in a third person view! You can use these sprites for your flash, or comics, but please give credit.

(btw, I'm only 13, yet I made an awesome sprite sheet! Huh? :redd: )


Additional notes: These were made using some of the young Phoenix Sprites, as you can see, also I used some sprites as a refrence.

ENJOY! :will:


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Because of requests, I fixed up the sprites, ENJOY! :matt:
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good job ST but the jaw looks weird.
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Yes, Kinda messed up there... But, whatever, still great, huh? Will Powers
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The last bunch looks wonky, the middle could use a little tweaking, the first few sets look great though.
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And to answer your question of what person it is, it's third: First person is the view as the character sees it (PW is First Person, as it plays from Phoenix's POV), second person refers to a group you are part of (We, us et al.). Third person is viewed as of someone else.
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OMG
i think they ARE REALLY REALLY CUTE
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I might actually use some of these... Hobohodo

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It looks good, but I think his shoulders could be more... up?
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It looks awesome
PS Can I call you ST1? Sonictails1?
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You can call me anything Larry, Doesnt matter to me.
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Larry_Butz wrote:
It looks awesome
PS Can I call you ST1? Sonictails1?

Me and DarzieP called him ST1 a long time ago.(a week)We sometime call him ST
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Nice work on the 3rd person Phoenix Wright, there. Though, the last three sprites in the lower right-hand corner are a bit...well, weird.
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Nice work on the 3rd person Phoenix Wright, there. Though, the last three sprites in the lower right-hand corner are a bit...well, weird.

Lol, well, yeah, true, but I wanted to add on some custom ones, so yeah. Godot
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um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef
what do i is called rollplaying, i really don't think i am richard.
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.....Your kidding me... right? Fine. Do something better, I want to see, huh?
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Richard Wellington wrote:
um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef


Why dont u do something? Youll make it worse im for sure! Perfection my ass....I support you ST!
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Can I use these for a custom sprite?
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I wish instead of just showing his text outside of court, they showed his whole body with him talking just like you did. Good job!
I really need a new sig...
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I think something should be done with the arms. It looks odd with them just at his sides. It worked in his young form, but for the normal Phoenix, I can't help but think his arms would be more...animated.
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Ace Prosecutor wrote:
Richard Wellington wrote:
um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef


Why dont u do something? Youll make it worse im for sure! Perfection my ass....I support you ST!

Who said perfection? Nobody's asking for perfection, but I happen to agree to Beef (sorry, had to do just once now) that it's not the best sprite edit, it lacks a bit of effort. And you don't have to make one your self to criticize. That's like me criticizing a movie and then telling me to go make one myself if I think it's bad. Besides, somebody on this board already did one which was better than this. I give you credit for the faces are alright, but I really think Phoenix has WAY better posture than that. And his attorney's badge is not SQUARE, I suggest you can copy and paste it from Grossberg. It just needs a bit more effort rather than recoloring his young sprit and expecting it to work perfectly right off the bat.
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Apeman1813 wrote:
Ace Prosecutor wrote:
Richard Wellington wrote:
um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef


Why dont u do something? Youll make it worse im for sure! Perfection my ass....I support you ST!

Who said perfection? Nobody's asking for perfection, but I happen to agree to Beef (sorry, had to do just once now) that it's not the best sprite edit, it lacks a bit of effort. And you don't have to make one your self to criticize. That's like me criticizing a movie and then telling me to go make one myself if I think it's bad. Besides, somebody on this board already did one which was better than this. I give you credit for the faces are alright, but I really think Phoenix has WAY better posture than that. And his attorney's badge is not SQUARE, I suggest you can copy and paste it from Grossberg. It just needs a bit more effort rather than recoloring his young sprit and expecting it to work perfectly right off the bat.

Who made YOU Mr. Critic? Nick

Jeeze, what's your problem.
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Sonictails1 wrote:
Apeman1813 wrote:
Who said perfection? Nobody's asking for perfection, but I happen to agree to Beef (sorry, had to do just once now) that it's not the best sprite edit, it lacks a bit of effort. And you don't have to make one your self to criticize. That's like me criticizing a movie and then telling me to go make one myself if I think it's bad. Besides, somebody on this board already did one which was better than this. I give you credit for the faces are alright, but I really think Phoenix has WAY better posture than that. And his attorney's badge is not SQUARE, I suggest you can copy and paste it from Grossberg. It just needs a bit more effort rather than recoloring his young sprit and expecting it to work perfectly right off the bat.

Who made YOU Mr. Critic? Nick

Jeeze, what's your problem.

My problem? Lots of things... ironicly on Easter Sunday.

Regardless, when you post sprites up expect people to criticize them. Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so? I'd rather be truthful.
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At least he's giving constructive criticism unlike Mr. Wellington. He's just trying to tell you what you could do better. Don't fault him for that.

LOL Internet arguments.
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Apeman1813 wrote:
Sonictails1 wrote:
Apeman1813 wrote:
Who said perfection? Nobody's asking for perfection, but I happen to agree to Beef (sorry, had to do just once now) that it's not the best sprite edit, it lacks a bit of effort. And you don't have to make one your self to criticize. That's like me criticizing a movie and then telling me to go make one myself if I think it's bad. Besides, somebody on this board already did one which was better than this. I give you credit for the faces are alright, but I really think Phoenix has WAY better posture than that. And his attorney's badge is not SQUARE, I suggest you can copy and paste it from Grossberg. It just needs a bit more effort rather than recoloring his young sprit and expecting it to work perfectly right off the bat.

Who made YOU Mr. Critic? Nick

Jeeze, what's your problem.

My problem? Lots of things... ironicly on Easter Sunday.

Regardless, when you post sprites up expect people to criticize them. Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so? I'd rather be truthful.

OBJECTION! As you just said, "Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so?" Well, If you look at your above posts you said "It looks good, but I think his shoulders could be more... up?"
You clearly said it was GOOD!

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Sonictails1 wrote:
Apeman1813 wrote:
My problem? Lots of things... ironicly on Easter Sunday.

Regardless, when you post sprites up expect people to criticize them. Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so? I'd rather be truthful.

OBJECTION! As you just said, "Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so?" Well, If you look at your above posts you said "It looks good, but I think his shoulders could be more... up?"
You clearly said it was GOOD!

Pwnt. Godot

Lol, and sorry for your bad day.

LOL. Err... sorry about that? Maybe I did flip a bit... sorry. Bell Boy
AP attacked Wellington for saying his opinion and that was what really got on my nerves... personal thing...

EDIT: Why is it that I imaging Waffleman just sitting around eating popcorn and laughing at this? lol
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Apeman1813 wrote:
EDIT: Why is it that I imaging Waffleman just sitting around eating popcorn and laughing at this? lol


Because I have nothing better to do in my fortress while waiting for Mega Man. Get back to yours!
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Apeman1813 wrote:
Sonictails1 wrote:
Apeman1813 wrote:
My problem? Lots of things... ironicly on Easter Sunday.

Regardless, when you post sprites up expect people to criticize them. Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so? I'd rather be truthful.

OBJECTION! As you just said, "Would you rather me lie and say they're good when I really don't think so?" Well, If you look at your above posts you said "It looks good, but I think his shoulders could be more... up?"
You clearly said it was GOOD!

Pwnt. Godot

Lol, and sorry for your bad day.

LOL. Err... sorry about that? Maybe I did flip a bit... sorry. Bell Boy
AP attacked Wellington for saying his opinion and that was what really got on my nerves... personal thing...

EDIT: Why is it that I imaging Waffleman just sitting around eating popcorn and laughing at this? lol


Lol, it's ok, it's just AP got a bit peeved when he saw it, we're friends, so he just tried to go on my side, and lol, popcorn.
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Ace Prosecutor wrote:
Richard Wellington wrote:
um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef


Why dont u do something? Youll make it worse im for sure! Perfection my ass....I support you ST!

hey look i'm not looking for perfection(i'm not a von karma) but it could be better thats all nothing more nothing less.
what do i is called rollplaying, i really don't think i am richard.
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Richard Wellington wrote:
Ace Prosecutor wrote:
Richard Wellington wrote:
um...no to be mean but those could have been way better then that Beef


Why dont u do something? Youll make it worse im for sure! Perfection my ass....I support you ST!

hey look i'm not looking for perfection(i'm not a von karma) but it could be better thats all nothing more nothing less.

Look, we've covered this without you... please shut up. I would like to end it... rather than go around in circles.


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I have a suggestion on how to improve it. Make a copy of one of the first Phoenixes and keep it next to the sprite you're working on. Then try your best to mimic the line quality of the first one. You have to really zoom in to get a good look though. I'd also lower the mouth a little on the Phoenixes with their heads tiling upward. It looks as if his chin is too large.
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Not bad,I like it but how come in one his head enlarges?
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Interesting, there's some war going on about.....sprites. Eh?
If you have a problem with the sprites, there's always constructive criticism.
If you can't take the constructive criticism, don't start a war.

To Sonictails1, try to base your sprites off Edgeworth body.
I ask for this because that current Phoenix's and Edgeworth's shapes of their bodies are similar enough.
The lines indicate the y-axis of the shoulders; Edgeworth's are significantly higher.
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Yeah, what they said, the mouth on the bottom right sprite looks off, and the shoulder needs fixing, apart from that, it's good.
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Android 21 3/7 wrote:
I have a suggestion on how to improve it. Make a copy of one of the first Phoenixes and keep it next to the sprite you're working on. Then try your best to mimic the line quality of the first one. You have to really zoom in to get a good look though. I'd also lower the mouth a little on the Phoenixes with their heads tiling upward. It looks as if his chin is too large.


Good suggestion, I'll try that whenever I'll have time.


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Not bad,I like it but how come in one his head enlarges?


The reason why, is because he's moving his head closer.

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Interesting, there's some war going on about.....sprites. :eh?:
If you have a problem with the sprites, there's always constructive criticism.
If you can't take the constructive criticism, don't start a war.

To Sonictails1, try to base your sprites off Edgeworth body.
I ask for this because that current Phoenix's and Edgeworth's shapes of their bodies are similar enough.
The lines indicate the y-axis of the shoulders; Edgeworth's are significantly higher.
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Other than that, it's great. Image



Thanks! As I said above, I'll try to get to it whenever I can!
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Those look quite nice. Althrough, it does need some improvements, but it is a good start.

Lol, I would never have the patient to make an entire sprite sheet...
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:: UPDATE ::

THE SPRITES HAVE BEEN UPDATED WITH THE PROBLEMS FIXED, THEY SHOULD BE THE BEST EVER NOW!
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Hey, the fixed sprites look awesome! The last few are still awkward, but the first 7 rows are excellent. Hey, maybe I'll even use them :D
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I think the chin on the crying one is a bit big.

Just pointing it out.

Also, some of your customs have big chins as well.
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Quandtuniverse wrote:
Hey, the fixed sprites look awesome! The last few are still awkward, but the first 7 rows are excellent. Hey, maybe I'll even use them :D

That's because they're my other custom ones, one that I just made for fun, lol :matt:
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Sonictails1 wrote:
Quandtuniverse wrote:
Hey, the fixed sprites look awesome! The last few are still awkward, but the first 7 rows are excellent. Hey, maybe I'll even use them :D

That's because they're my other custom ones, one that I just made for fun, lol :matt:


Yeah. Hey, do you mind if I save this and try to see if I can make the custom sprites a bit less awkward? I think I can work around that.
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