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I've posed this on FanFiction.Net under the same title. The more I read it the more I despise it. I only have 5 chapters so far. Comments would be super appreciated.

Name: Bruised
Genre: Romance/ Drama
Status: WIP
Pairing: :maya: / :phoenix: (maybe :edgy: / : :ema:)
Sumarry: Maya and Phoenix continually hide their feelings for each other because they are afraid of what would hapen. When Maya and Phoenix argue one day Maya leaves. Phoenix is left distraught and broken. But when Maya returns she is cold and indifferent. Will Phoenix be able to break the ice surrounding her?

Chapter 1


She stared out the window, it was just another day in the office, Nick in the other room most likely staring out the window as well. She stared up at the window attached to the Gatewater Hotel, the window in which the women who accused her of murder once stood. She shook her head and turned back to the desk, her head turning to the blank television screen. It was a quiet day in the office.

He shook his head, staring at the place he had first saw her, her hands wanting to touch but too afraid of the consequences, her big brown eyes filled with tears, her unique way of dress. He leaned his head back, against the deeply stained cabinets staring up at the ceiling. A sigh escaped his lips. It was a quiet day in the office.

Little did the two know it wasn’t as quiet down at the precinct, especially for Detective Dick Gumshoe, his booming voice shouting orders, people rushing around to follow them. He shook his head as he looked over the case file. Dropping the file on his desk, his eyes diverted back to the bold faced print on the top of the paper Victim: Jake Marshall.

Edgeworth paced his office, his hands rolling in and out of fists, he knew it was coming, and it terrified him. He finally thought he had rid himself of the name. He stopped when his eyes wandered to the his mahogany desk, the card, a light purple color, and white as well, only the size of a card from a deck of playing cards that donned a conch shell. A deep sigh left his lips “Shelley De Killer.” He shook his head and began pacing again.

(A/N: Actually originally this was meant to bring Shelley De Killer back, and as I wrote it the story evolved into something a little different. I don’t know how to create confliction with the first and second chapter intact, so basically the first and part of the second chapter is filler for the rest of the story….but…I think it takes a decently interesting twist…sorry about the first and part of the second chapter…but I needed it, and I think that Ema is going to be in this story…but the first and second chapter are kind of annoying. Oh and, 3-5 never took place…more or less this story is where it is meant to fit. The end. Comments are appreciated.)
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:D I figured I post Chapter 2 while I am at it.




Chapter 2


The phone rang,. Both of them answering the phone. His voice echoed through the receiver “Hello?” She spoke “Nick? You’re in the other room why are you calling?” her voice confused. Another voice rang through, almost cutting her off “Excuse me? But is this Wright & Co. Law Offices?” Phoenix shook his head “Maya…I answered the phone just like you. Don’t be silly.” She pouted “Right Nick. Yes sir, this is indeed Wright & Co. Law Offices. This is Maya…” Phoenix butted it “And Phoenix.” Annoyed Maya spoke once more “at your service.” The young women took a few moments to take in the two “Well, Yes. I know that. This is Ema…Ema Skye. I’ve been accused of…well murder.” Maya stayed on the other line, slightly confused, while Phoenix spoke “Ema?” He paused “What happened?” He finally asked. After discussing the facts, Phoenix, of course, agreed to be her lawyer.

After putting the phone down Phoenix entered where Maya was sitting she looked up at him “Whose Ema?” She asked somewhat softly. Phoenix looked down at her and smiled “Oh, Ema, she was the young women whose sister I helped right after you left. Don’t you remember my letter?” Maya looked up and smiled “Nick, that over two years ago! I can barely remember a month ago.” She smiled, though as soon as Phoenix turned his back her smile fell. She remembered so much, her sisters death, her being accused of killing her sister and killing Dr. Grey, and then being kidnapped. She closed her eyes for a moment, breathed inward, smiled and followed behind Phoenix, to catch the bus to get to the detention center.

She tapped her fingers impatiently on the window until she looked up and see Phoenix and a younger women stumble through the door. Her grimace grew into a smile as she declared “Finally! Mr. Wright! Over here.” She sat up, and stared at Phoenix through the glass, as he sat down and the young women sat at his left. “Did I interrupt?” She spoke, Phoenix looked at her confused “W-What?” He asked, she gestured toward Maya “You two weren’t on a date were you?” Phoenix turned a ripe shade of red and shook his head “N-N-No! Ema, this is my assistant Maya.” Ema looked up at the young girl. Maya tilted her head to the side and raised her hand in greeting “Hi.” She nodded, a small blush on her face but not one as fierce as Phoenix was wearing. Ema looked at the two and then found a happy medium between the two “Jake Marshall was killed, and I was the one that found him…They also found a card near his body, it had a shell on it.” Phoenix looked up at Ema in that moment. Maya’s faced paled a significant amount and looked at the floor bringing her fingers to touch her lips “Will you excuse me for a moment?” She did not wait for a response she was already out the door to the room and into the hall. Ema looked at Phoenix “What was that about?” She asked, somewhat hesitant. Phoenix looked up “The calling card is from Shelley De Killer. De Killer is an assassin. A while ago Maya was kidnapped by him as leverage…I was to win a case or she would have been killed.” He sighed. The two sat in silence for a moment before Ema spoke “I see. So they believe it was me who hired Shelley?”

She slid down the wall, tears threatening to fall from her eyes, she thought she had rid herself of De Killer. It had taken so much to hide her fear, her hate and her broken heart. She heard someone clear their voice, the cultured affluent voice of a certain prosecutor “Miss. Fey?” She closed her eyes tightly to rid herself of the tears threatening to fall. “Yes?” She said looked up, her eyes growing double in size “Mr. Edgeworth!” She said surprised.

Edgeworth looking down at the young girl, she was usually so smiley, so happy. He sighed “You heard then?” She looked up at him as he offered a hand to help her up, shaking her head, he closed his eyes with a inward sigh “About De Killer.” She nodded. He looked at her “One moment. I’ll be right back.” Edgeworth walked passed the semi-stunned girl and spoke to the guard “You must release Ms. Skye, there was no supportive evidence, falsely arrested. “ And with that he was away, back to the young women distressed staring blankly at the ground “Ms. Fey?” Her eyes looked up, she looked lost, slightly broken “I’m sorry. What do you want Mr. Edgeworth?” she managed a smile, he did not know how she even put it on her face “Let’s go get some ice cream.” He stated, which made her smile widen ever so slightly.

The buzz of the detention center doors rang as the door clicked open and Ema emerged from the steel “Well then Mr. Wright, I suppose I won’t need your help after all. The prosecutors office has realized their blunder and let me go.” She smiled. He sighed in relief “Although I do need the money, I am glad to see I am not helping another friend who is falsely accused of murder.” he grinned, he looked at her as her stomach grumbled and laughed “How about we grab some food and take it back to the offices?” Ema smiled and nodded enthusiastically.
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This is cute! I love it.
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Thanks for the comment...It started out as one idea and then turned into a whole different idea and it changes after chapter 3 so...




Chapter 3


She sighed “Thank you Mr. Edgeworth.” Edgeworth shook his head “Call me Miles.” Maya looked up and smiled “Then it that case call me Maya..” She laughed slightly, tears slightly in her eyes as she looked at her ice cream cone. Edgeworth looked at her “You like him…don’t you?” he said. Maya looked up at him “W-Who?” She said in reply. Edgeworth scoffed “Phoenix Wright.” Maya’s face flushed “N-No...What would make you say something like that?” Edgeworth found himself trying not to laugh “Because, Maya, It’s no that hard to figure out. I saw the card you drew on.” She brought her fingers to her lips in shock “Miles…It’s more difficult than that now. He doesn’t like me like that. I’m his mentors baby sister. The crazy, immature assistant he hired because he felt bad for me.” Edgeworth shook his head “I don’t think that is true.”

They walked down the street fast food joint bags in their hands. Ema turned to Phoenix and laughed slightly “You really do like her, don’t you?” Phoenix shook his head and blushed fiercely “N-N-No! I don’t know what you’re talking about!” He exclaimed. She laughed “Dork. I didn’t even say who I was talking about and you assumed correctly.” He laughed nervously “Y-Yes. I-I like her. B-B-But...But, she could never like me like that.” Ema shook her head “I don’t understand.” she said her face knit with thought. He shrugged “I’ve never conveyed any type of emotion other than completely annoyed…She must think I hate her.” He said. Ema shook her head “Then Mr. Wright, I think you should do the right thing and tell her how you feel.” Phoenix looked at her “What if that ruins everything we have?” He sighed opening the door to the office.

Edgeworth looked at her “If you don’t like who you are right now…why don’t you leave for a while…Like I did…” He trailed off. She looked at him “Miles Edgeworth. That’s not a bad idea. Get away from it all…Change, Learn.” she sighed “But…I don’t have vast amounts of money at my fingertips. I can’t just leave and come back when I want to.” Edgeworth looked at her “I could help. I have enough money to help.” A look of indifference on his face as she looked up at him and shook her head her brow knit “Why?” She asked, he shrugged “You helped me. You stood up for in court and you helped me change.” he said, her words about learning to smile still echoing through his thoughts ,a small quirky awkward grin on his face. She nodded “What are we going to do?” He gave that awkward smile once again and explained what he would do.

They sat their laughing over their slightly cold cheeseburgers. He looked up “How is forensics going?” He grinned at her “Oh, great!” She said sounding excited like Maya “It’s perfect, I am going abroad soon to further my studies!” she said excitedly. As she stood up to throw her garbage away she caught way of the clock “Oh!” She said surprised “I have to be going, I have a class.” Phoenix stood “Oh, we wouldn’t want you to miss that.” He laughed.

Maya crossed the street waving goodbye to Miles, although she would see him soon enough. As she got close enough to see the Office she saw the door open and she saw Phoenix and Ema exit, and she felt her heart drop as she saw them laugh and hug. What is that girl doing with him? Why are they hugging? Maya immediately thought. As she got closer she heard Ema say “Thank you for Dinner, Nick.” Maya’s heart dropped, Nick? That was her endearing name for him. She felt her blood boil and her heart drop, she felt actual jealous.

Once the girl was gone from the vicinity she quickly approached “Nick!” She said somewhat angrily, her cheeks slightly puffed “What was that!” She said to see his eyes widen with shock. She glared “What! Did I finally catch you with a girl?! Why didn’t you just tell me?” He shook his head “Maya…wait…” She shook her head, tears forming at the corners of her eyes “I can’t believe you.” His mouth opened and it just came out “Why are you so jealous we’re not dating! Even if I do pay for all your meals! And by all your meals I mean ALL your god damn meals!!!! You mooch off of my and my popularity! You can‘t even handle your spirit medium abilities!!” He snapped his hands to his lips to stop himself from letting anymore anger and stress out. Both Maya’s hands found their way quickly to her lips “I can’t believe you. You know what Phoenix Wright! If you didn’t want me to be here then you should have let me know. At least I know the truth now! I’ll go.” She turned and hurriedly began to walk away, as she heard him call out her name she began to run faster than she had ever had, and she was gone.

Phoenix slammed the door to the office “What did I just do…” He flopped himself on the couch in the office, putting his head in his hands. “Maya…Please…Please forgive me. I didn’t mean it…I don’t even know why it came out.”

She ran as fast as she could and as far as she could until she reached the court house and the prosecutors office. She stopped to catch her breath, slowly walking up the stairs to the prosecutors office and knocking on the door she heard his voice once more “Yes?” She closed her eyes and opened the door “Miles.” She said, her voice strong, her eyes read differently, she hadn’t let one tear fall. He looked up “Maya?” He said in surprised “What are you doing here?” She looked at him “I think I need to leave tonight. On a Red Eye.” She cleared her throat “I don’t have anything. No bags. Nothing. I am not bringing anything with me. That’s the end of it. I need to make a few calls and I’ll be ready to go.” Miles shook his head “Maya…What happened?” She snapped her head towards him “Nothing Miles. Exactly that….Nothing, and I need to leave.” He nodded “I’ll have it all arranged.”

He made calls as did she, and before she knew it, Maya was sitting on a plane. Babies crying around her, the sounds of the attendants helping people. She looked out the window for a moment and then looked forward at the front of the plane. She did not want anything to do with the name or the person Phoenix Wright right now. She was bitter, and broken hearted.

After a long plane ride she exited, looking around signs and voices in a foreign language spoke. She looked around and saw her, the women, tapping her food impatiently. “Mrs. V…” She was cut off but the snappy voice “You foolish fool. You’re late.”

I swear I didn't mean for it to feel like this
Like every inch of me is bruised (bruised)
And don't fly fast
Oh pilot, can you help me?
Can you make this last?
This plane is all I've got, so keep it steady now
'Cause every inch you see is bruised
Bruised, bruised.

(Bruised - Jack’s Mannequin)
[A/N; I love Jack's Mannequin]

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Wow, this rocks :o
i made a Maya/Nick fiction too :p
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:maya: yeah! thanks for the comment...yeah I've read your Fic and it's brilliant!!! Thanks for the support, this is my first fan fiction!
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Chapter 4


Her eyes wandered the streets, she was possibly the only women or man for that matter with raven colored hair, her blue eyes pristine and shining, yet they still held a darkness, a hurt that few would understand. She looked different, makeup on her face, her hair no longer held with beads, or with her hair half held up in a folded bun. Instead her raven locks flowed down her back with a slight wave to it, her hands pushed slightly to the side. In place of her ridiculous Medium outfit replaced were dark denim jeans, black leather boots and a white blouse that highlighted her curves and her porcelain skin. She rushed her purse pouncing slightly, she was late, which was unacceptable. She finally reached the same airport she arrived in a year ago. She rushed toward the gates where she was meant to meet him. She saw him sitting on a bench “Miles!” She yelled. He looked up and his eyes grew wide “Maya?” He said shocked “Holy…Shit.” He said, blushing slightly at his language. She laughed “Well, Miles, it’s been a while. I’m planning on back. But I wanted to see you before I left. I know you would be back home, but I don’t know. I wanted to see you here first.” He stood and hugged her “Maya…It’s not good…back home…” She shook her head “Lets not right now…”

She tapped her food impatiently until the door swung open “Sorry we’re late Franziska.” She snapped “You foolish fool! Why are you foolishly late! You know how much I respect people who are on time.” Maya looked up at Franziska who sighed “Oh, Stop. Food slightly cold because you were foolishly late…Again.” She sighed, sitting down. They sat down for lunch, sitting in silence for few moments. “Nice to see you Franziska.” Edgeworth spoke, she gave a curt polite nod “And you too, Miles.”

Maya with a delicate manner began to eat. Although it looked as though she had lost weight it was apparent that she was well kept after. Her new clothes, evidence of makeup and manicure was evidence to support Miles’s theory; Franziska Von Karma had not tortured the young girl sitting close to him at lunch. Franziska spoke “After lunch Maya will pack her things and be ready to return with you tonight.” Miles nodded. Maya looked up as Edgeworth spoke “Back at home…” before he could finish Maya cut him off yet politely by raising her hand to stop him from speaking “I have no home.” Edgeworth gave a curt nod and cleared his throat “There is a banquet, or gala event for the Prosecutors office and Precinct…and I am inviting to go as my escort as a sort of coming out.” Maya nodded “Thank you Mr. Edgeworth. I would be honored to attend with you.”

Phoenix sat in the office, tears streaming down his face, his hair more spiky in all direction instead of directly back as if he lost the effort to do it every morning. The exceedingly younger women burst through the door “Mr. Nick!” her high pitched voice spoke “You have to get up! You can’t live like this anymore! Stop living the past.” He looked up at the girl and sighed “Pearly…I appreciate you coming down here from your Master position at the Kurain Village and Channeling School, but I just…want to die.” He sighed. Pearl Fey, the master of the Kurain channeling technique (Thanks to the calls Maya made) shook her head “Mr. Nick…you need to get up, get your hair done and change into that black tux of yours because you are going to the banquet you received the invite for…” Phoenix closed his eyes and shook his head, opening his eyes he heard her familiar voice “Phoenix.” She said sternly, looking up at his teacher Mia Fey where Pearl once stood he sighed “Yes Mia.” The women slammed her hands down on the desk “You are going to that banquet if I have to call Gumshoe and get you to come.” Phoenix looked up “Fine...I’ll go out.” Phoenix had been like that since Maya Fey had left a year ago. At first he could not accept it, which might have been better because when he did he became more than despondent, he basically became a potato, a shell of a person, because the sunshine in his life was gone.

She touched the silky fabric of the dress, closing her eyes for a moment she heard a voice “You know…you hurt a lot of..” She put her hand up and she turned to see Edgeworth leaning into the frame of the door “Save it Miles. Does it look like I 100% care?” She said abhorrently. He looked at her shocked “Maya…I don’t know if you’ve changed for the better, but you’ve changed.” He pushed himself away from the frame and left her. She felt tears pour down her cheeks, she hadn’t changed, she was still there, but underneath she was broken and using anger and indifference to hide it. She wiped her face and applied eyeliner and mascara, and pale lipstick. She stared at herself in the mirror, her hair half up in an elegant French twist falling into delicate waves, her black dress had a large slit leading up her creamy thigh showing, the low back was barely seen because of her long hair, and her black heels, were extremely high and made her almost the same height of that of Miles Edgeworth, who was dashing in his perfect black tuxedo.
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Took me sometime to read, cause i was writing the next chapter while reading.
Anyway, this FF is really awesome! cant wait for the next chapter. id just love to see Maya in her fragile state, awww :(
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You're so sweet. I am working on Chapter Seven now...a little bit of writers block but I should get past it in a few hours :godot:

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Chapter 5


He stepped out of the cab and walked up the stairs adorned with the velvety red carpet, looking toward the lights from the Hotel in which the banquet was held at. He swore silently, cursing Pearls and Mia for convincing him to go. He looked clean cut, and healthy, but inside he was dying. He opened the door and looked around, hearing the booming voice of a certain detective “Hey! It’s You! Harry Butz, the killer.” the scruffy detective joked, but Phoenix did not even crack a smile “Hey Detective.” He sighed. Detective Gumshoe had a sad pout grow on his face “What happened to you , Pal?” He sighed.

Their arms linked Miles and Maya walked up the stairs, looking like an amazing and perfect power couple, although the slight look on Maya’s face said it all, they were more like brother and sister. The way they looked at each other. The doors opened and almost all men’s eyes fell on Maya, she looked like a goddess, jealous glares from women and men gazing wantingly at her. She smirked “Ah, Miles, this place hasn’t changed.” she laughed. He shook his head “No, it hasn’t. Has it.” He grinned at her as her arm slipped away.

She walked toward the bar, and leaned against the bar, men turned and looked at her, and she felt a slight blush of her cheeks, she felt herself still like a little kid, although her steely indifferent mood. She ordered a coke, a simple non alcoholic drink, and turned around, her elbows leaning against the bar, her lips pursed tightly, her eyes wandering the room.

Gumshoe and Phoenix’s mouths fell open when the young beauty walked in on Edgeworth’s arm. Gumshoe grinned “Go talk to her, Pal.” The scruffy detective insisted, but Phoenix refused to move until the man pushed him forcefully, instead of landing towards the women he swayed himself to fall conveniently in front of Edgeworth, who looked him up and down “Ah, Wright…” he paused “I did not think you’d show tonight.” Phoenix nodded for a moment and then looked at the women at the bar, and Edgeworth eyed him. “Why don’t you go speak to her?” He asked. Phoenix turned his head and shrugged “Ehh…” He managed out, looking lost. Edgeworth shook his head “Go. You blubbering idiot.” Though Edgeworth knew Phoenix did not recognize her.

He slowly walked up to her, her recognizing him immediately her face froze over, although she just wanted to cry she would not let herself. He looked up at her and spoke “Hi. I’m…” She cut him of “Phoenix Wright.” She sneered. He looked at her, feeling like him stomach had knotted “You know my name?” She took a sip of her coke and set it down next to her, looking up at him she grinned and suddenly she got a child like grin on her face and clasped her hands together “Oh, Mr. Nick. How could…” Her voice slowly changing from the way she previously spoke to the voice full of hate, and anger she was addressing him in “…you forget me?” She gave him a slightly snarly half smile. His mouth dropped, his heart stopped “M-M-M-Maya?” He stuttered out. Her teeth gritted together as she walked past him, and towards the door, Miles not bothering to stop her, she was set up in a very nice apartment near his and the Wright Law Offices.

She walked down the stairs as he closed the door “Maya! Wait!” He said stuttering ever so slightly, chills running through his body. She turned around and found herself extremely close to his body, she pushed him back slightly “Mr. Wright. I can only ask you kindly to leave me the fuck alone." He shook his head "You left after meaningless dribble spilled out of my mouth. How is that hardly fair! Without so much as a goodbye or anything!" She snapped at him "Don't even talk to me about fair! I work for you for years without pay only asking for a burger and you snap at me, and feel like it's my fault?" She backed away slowly "Phoenix. You broke my heart! I loved you more than anything and everything...do you know how much it hurt to hear those words come from you..." She shook her head as he tried to speak "May..." She snapped "No Phoenix. I don't even know why I came tonight." He spoke at a whisper "You don't know how much I loved you, how much I love you. From the moment I met you.." Her jaw closed tightly she turned and walked toward a cab waiting on the street, her head turned slightly, "I am still mending my first broken heart Phoenix. I can't handle another one..." She closed the door to the cab and just slid it, and he watched as she turned and stared at him and her cab left.
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:( This was pretty awesome. I hope you get your next chapters up soon! I look forward to reading the rest. :D
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*scratches head* Thanks! Glad to hear you like it...I am going to post Chapter 6 in a couple of minutes, I am working on Chapter 7...which I am trying to find a way to resolve...but...I don't know..
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Umm, the whole Maya Hate Nick thing is getting pretty odd, i mean, he DID save her when she was a complete stranger to him, and then it happend more then once, in my opinion, he should nod her off.
nice fanfic, nonetheless.
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I don't find the Maya hating Nick moments so hard to believe...Nick helps strangers all the time, he's a lawyer, example; Ema, she was a complete stranger and he helped her and took her in like he took in Maya. Maya and him were perfect strangers, its a valid argument that he only offered her a job because Mia wanted him to take care of her. I am looking at it more from Maya's point of view because I am a girl. And I understand your point of view, but honestly, when I get mad I don't focus on all of the stuff, I focus on one thing, so I guess I am adding a little bit of me to Maya's character in the story..But, her real opinion on the matter is coming up soon....

Thanks for input, maybe I'll be able to change it for the next story I write.

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Haha, keep writing, i love your work <3
this is a decisive piece of evidence why fanfics are way better then books. XD
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Thanks for the support. I added a few things to chapter six trying to transition Maya's hate into something different...I just started chapter 8 which brings another female character from a previous game into the chapter. Enjoy this chapter, I will post seven as soon as I am done with Chapter 8.

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Chapter 6


His eyes grew cold for a moment, muttering something only meant for his ears as he walked back inside and with a slightly childish stop to his walk advanced toward Edgeworth. Shaking his head he wanted to grab Edgeworth, smirky smile and everything else and slam him into the wall. He spoke "Edgeworth." Edgeworth turned to look at him "Wright." Phoenix looked at him "We need to talk." Edgeworth gave a quick, curt, slightly impolite nod and walked in the direction of his office, Phoenix following in tow.

Once they reached the office, Pheonix glared daggers and the other man, and quickly threw a decently good round house punch at the man who fell back onto his desk in surprise "Wright! What the hell was that for?" Wright shook his head and looked like steam was going to shoot out of his ears at any moment "You knew where she was this whole time and you kept her from me! What the fuck is wrong with you? Do you know how many months I spent depressed? I thought I could trust you." Edgeworth licked the blood from the coner of his mouth and rolled his eyes "Wright." He paused to think "I am sorry. I should not have done what I did because it did not help her at all. I brought her back to face her problems and I think only you can fix them." Edgeworth held his jaw slightly and rubbed it wincing in pain at the decently good punch Phoenix threw. Phoenix stopped and contemplated what Edgeworth had said for a moment "I should not have said those things, and I should not have hid my feelings.." he sighed, sitting himself down at Edgeworth's desk for a moment, covering his face in frustration. Edgeworth shook his head "Of Course you did."

She walked inside the lush, luxurious entrance to her apartment complex, the bellman giving her welcome she just walked past him, not stopping much to acknowledge his presense. Walking toward her apartment door she stopped for a moment and turned her head looking at the empty hall, opening the door she walked inside and turn on the light. Closing her eyes as she threw the small bag she was carrying on the side table and before she knew it she was crying. She closed her eyes and immediately a scream emmited from her lips, it was not a painful scream, in a way it was, it was more frustration. She began tearing things apart, until everything was in shambles, she curled herself up into and wiped the tears from her eyes. She knew he had saved her, on several occasions, she wanted to think at the time that he was showing affection for her, but she also knew that Mia wanted him to take care of her. And this Ema girl, was her replacement for a while, maybe Ema and Nick had a thing, she didn't know. And what hurt her even more was if she had stopped to listen to phoenix before she ran off, maybe he would have told her that he loved her, and she would not feel as broken as she did. It wasn't that she was mad at him now, she was more mad at herself, and to strong, or stupid to tell Phoenix that she wasn't mad anymore.

Edgeworths cell phone lit up the dark office where him and Phoenix were talking and looking down at the caller I.D with a frown he put his finger up "One moment please Wright." He said, walking over and sending a glance back at Phoenix. And nodded into the phone as he spoke "Okay...I'll be right there." He closed his cellular phone and sighed "Wright, I have to go, there's been a small problem." He walked down the stairs, seeing Wright peer out of his office and turned his head ever so slightly "Don't forget to lock the door when you leave, Wright." And with that he turned the corner and was gone.

She felt hands wrap around her and she flinched away slightly, but she heard his voice "Maya." Edgeworth spoke, his voice thick, yet hushed. She closed her eyes and sighed "I'm sorry." she paused and whispered again "I am so so sorry." But he hushed her "Maya, what did you do?" He said turning his body so his arm was around her so that the apartment was easier to see. It looked as though an epic battle had taken place, and it had. Maya versus the World, it wasn't Maya versus Phoenix anymore. And it was her and the apartent that each ended up a little hurt, Maya with several bruises on her arms and legs, and the apartment messy. The lights off and no noise exacept for the sounds from outside and their breathing. She closed her eyes for a moment and then stood, She would not allow for someone to see her weak, she had taken care of herself for most of her life, she did not need someone there for her all the time. Miles left on the ground looking up at her she suddenly look composed and calm, her voice breaking the silence "I'll clean up tommarow, do a little shopping and look for a job." Her voice wavered ever so slightly but after clearing her throat it was gone. He shook his head and sighed, Phoenix needed to do something and do that something fast.
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I hope everyone who reads this likes this. In the next chapter a new pairing will be introduced to the story, which might make the story a little longer than anticipated, but none the less I believe it is coming along quite well. Thank you for the comments.

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She ran her hand across her sweaty brow as she jogged down the street, she had spent the whole morning cleaning her apartment which she tore apart the night before, but now it looked more like it was meant for her. She jogged quickly up the stairs and stopped at her door to pick up the newspaper, when she walked in she immediately dropped the news paper, her hands flying to her lips in surprise, Edgeworth turned around from looking at the room and gave a cocking grin "Someone is jumpy." She shook her head "You need to stop popping up randomly." She spoke slightly out of breath and slightly annoyed, dropping the paper down on the glass table that was shining in the light from outside. The light from the day brought the room out. It had decently tall ceilings, and dark wood floors, and the walls were a rich color of plum. The living room was decent sized, fit for two with leather furniture and a medium sized television, and a balcony looking out at the city. With a small counter diving the kitchen from the living room, the kitchen was well equipped with all the necessities for cooking and eating. To the left of the living room and kitchen was the bedroom. The wood panels on the floor traveling into the room, the furniture mocked the wood, and there was a vanity with a mirror, things already scattered from Maya's use, the bed freshly made had deep plum colored pillows and sheets, with a dark turquoise duvet cover. Attached to the bedroom was a lush bathroom, with a bath tub, a shower and large mirrors everywhere. It was fit for two maybe three people, but Maya lived there all on her own. Edgeworth looked at her "I was hoping you would come and assist me around the office today." She looked at him and paused "Give me a few moments to change and then I will go with you." She disappeared into the bedroom.

He actually woke up, on time, and brushed his teeth, took a shower, dressed himself in that amazingly blue suit of him thanks to the tide detergent he used everyday, and spiked his hair which took a decently long time. He walked three blocks, took the subway and a bus to the office where he opened the door and found the empty, quiet, dark office waiting for him. This dampened his happiness by a bit, but knew he had to find a way to make her smile for him again.

He tapped his foot and called "Maya?" He was annoyed more than anything else, she said give her a few moments, then Edgeworth finally heard Maya's somewhat cold voice, it sent chills through his spine, it was so much like Franziska. She walked out, a black flowy skirt and black pumps, a deep plum color. Black kohl and mascara highlighting her eyes and simply chap stick on her lips, her hair let lose and hanging down her back and the sides of her face. "Yes?" She said, grabbing her bag and she turned and opened the door, looking at him like he was dumb and let a subtle laugh escape her lips "What Edgey? Cat got your tongue buddy?" He closed his eyes and sighed, sounding annoyed he spoke "Just walk." She bobbed her head ever so slightly from left to right and grinned rudely "Lead the way." He led her out to his red car sitting on the curb waiting for them. As they sat in silence he looked over at her looking out at the window, he wanted to help her but he knew deep down he had helped ruin her, letting her run away from her problems instead of face them, and only her and Phoenix could fix that.

Franziska walked up to the door at Wright & Co. Law Offices, she shook her head earnestly and opened the door. She didn't speak she just pulled at the ends of her black gloves nervously and held the manila colored envelope in her hand, she heard the calm yet sad voice of Mr. Phoenix Wright "One Second, I'll be right with you." She licked her lips and a grimace formed on her face when she saw the lawyers in the suit's shocked face "M-Mrs. Von Karma?" He paused and closed his eyes in thought for a moment "Mrs. Von Karma, What is it you want?" He questioned carefully, keeping close eye of her hand flexing around the black leather braided handle of her long tailed whip. She forcefully handed him the envelope "Here." She said, allowing him to take it before turning to leave "Good Day Mr. Wright."

He looked at her to dumbstruck to say anything as he opened the manila folder and peered inside, there were four items. A card about the size of one from that of a deck of cards, a small post-it note, a folded up piece of stationary and a picture that was glossy and the back of it said DG, LB, MF, MF, ME, PW Victory!. He looked at the envelope for a few moments and then sat down at the desk Maya once sat at. And poured the contents of the envelope onto the desk and stared at the photo on top, it was the most important trial of his life the picture caused him to put his hand to his mouth to muffle his gasp, they all looked so blissfully happy, except Edgeworth who never looked happy. He noticed the post-it and picked it up in his hand. it read;


Dear Mr. Phoenix Wright.
This is a series of things I found left either at the scene of a crime or left in Maya's room. I think they quite possibly could be the most foolish items that fool left but they might be the most foolishly important items that might help you. Treasure her, Mr. Phoenix Wright, if you don't you are the mere foolish fool that I unfoolishly thought you are. You need to show her she does not need to do everything on her own.
F. Von Karma

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He picked up the folded piece of lilac stationary and realized it was another letter, but written by a different hand. Small tears trickled down his cheeks as he picked up the last item, and flipped it over, his eyes widening in surprise as he saw the distinct symbol of Shelley De Killer and then saw on top of it drawn as part of it his picture. He closed his eyes for a while, realizing that she thought of him the whole time, while being starved all she thought about was him. He dialed the number of Edgeworth and left a message, he had to see her.

She shuffled papers around the office, glancing over every once in a while at Edgeworth who was sitting staring at some papers on his desk. He didn't look up at her when he spoke, but kept his eyes on the papers "Why do you hate him so much?" She looked up at her, her hair falling over her face a little "I don't." She said simply. His eyes closed as he awaited her answer his eyes snapped open in surprise "Then, why all the dramatic?" He asked, now confused more than ever. She looked up and sat down on his desk "Dramatics?" She paused "Well, I suppose I was mad at him at first, and now it's more...." she paused, taking a long while to say something, as if she was searching for the right word "Fear." She finally said, sliding off the desk and walking to answer the phone.
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You're so super sweet.
Okay, So I still have to finish a little bit of chapter 8, I am not completely happy with it.
I added a few things to chapter 7 before posting that I think will make the hate relationship seem more real.
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Why thank you, i try my best. XD
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Poor Phoenix and Maya. :(
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Okay, I haven't started Chapter 9, I figured I'd have more done by now, but I don't. So To me I am ahead of myself. Here is chapter 8, it's slightly cut off because I needed to start chater 9 somewhere. THANKS FOR THE COMMENTS!
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As Maya left to quickly use the restroom before they went out for dinner, he silently thought to himself, but frightened out of his thoughts by a voice, a very familiar female voice "Mr. Miles Edgeworth." Looking up, he caugh way of her white lab coat, her chocolate hair, the goggles on top of her head that looked like they were ment to be there. He stood up straight and a small, genuine smile formed on his face "Ms. Ema Skye." He grinned, putting his hands flat on the desk. She walked towards him, looking significantly older than the last time he had seen her. There was silence for a few moments, and then Maya walked in with her head down speaking instead of looking "Miles..." She looked up and stopped herself "Oh, Excuse me, I am sorry." Miles chuckled slightly and shook his head "Maya...his is Em.." But he was cut off by Maya "Ema Skye. I've heard about through letters and I do believe we've met once before." Edgeworth found himself blushing ever so slightly, knowing he mentioned her in his letters to Maya. Ema stared at Maya for a few moments, and her brow furrowed as she remembered the cheery and smiley girl she had met before she felt as though she was older but now, in Maya's current state, it was obvious even by one year that Maya was older. "Yes." Ema smiled "We have met." She looked at Edgeworth and grinned "Ready to go." Maya looked up "Go where?" She cocked her head, surprised by the girls comfort with herself and Edgeworth. Edgeworth nodded "Well, Dinner..." Maya paused for a minute "I'm still not used to the time change." She manged a smile.

He walked up to the restaurants, adjusting the top button of his white button up suit. He walked into the restaurant and got a table for four, sitting down he ordered a simple water and then he felt a breeze of cold air, looking up the door opened and Edgeworth, Maya, and Ema had entered. Edgeworth spoke "Over there." With a look up from looking at the ground a look of surprise grew on Maya's face. She looked upset but sat down next to him none the less. Phoenix looked up and smiled "Edgeworth, Ema, Maya..." He said. Edgeworth grinned a cocky grin "Wright." Ema smiled "Hey Phoenix." Maya nodded "Mr. Wright." She said in acknowledgement, Ema slightly winced at this, she knew it hurt Phoenix when Maya was indifferent, and Ema knew at the end of the night she would walk away with Miles and Maya would be walked home by Phoenix. They sat in silence, until Phoenix looked up "Slow day today." He said. Edgeworth nodded "Yeah, decently quiet." Maya didn't say a word, she didn't know what to say, slowly she was realizing that she abandoned Nick.

Edgeworth dabbed the corners of his mouth as he finished eating "Well, that was good." He grinned and looked over at Ema who winked at him "Well, Here's my part of the bill and Ema's." He said putting down enough money to pay for everyone, with that he stood and helped Ema get on her jacket. Maya whose mouth dropped open and tried to speak "W-W-Wai..." But it was cut off by Edgeworth "We'll see you two tommarow." Edgeworth winked, and with his arm around Ema's shoulders dissappeared from the restaurant. Edgeworth grinned as they got outside and Ema laughed "Well, maybe now they'll fix everything. Only when their forced." She smiled, "So, Edgeworth, How have you been?" She questioned. He looked at her for a moment and nodded "I have been better and I have been worse. What about you?" He actually smiled. She grinned "Much better, although I'm still struggling with the forensics, but I love it enough to stay with it." Miles nodded "That what I love about you." She looked up surprised "What?" He looked down quickly "Uh...Oh...Nothing." He said softly, a blush spreading across his face.

Phoenix looked over at Maya and spoke softly "Come on Maya, talk to me." Maya looked up at Phoenix and closed her eyes for a moment, she found herself fighting tears "Hi Phoenix." She said, trying to sound as friendly as possible, she wanted to be as nice as possible, but she felt like being nice to him now would make it look like she needed him, and she knew she didn't. Phoenix nodded at the waiter who took the signicant amount of money off the table and nodded "Thank you Sir, Have a good night." And with that the waiter was away. Maya was already slipping on her jacket when Phoenix spoke "How about I walk home with you?" He asked. Maya looked up and him in awe, how could he possibly be as nice as he was being after she had been so disgustingly horrible to him, she looked down and blushed, nodding. He gave a grin, it was like they were meeting for the first time again, and to him it felt so good.
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Wow, Maya calling him Phoenix...
that's perfect for now since i played turnabout sisters yesterday... XD.
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I love playing the games over again...I, personally, am mad that they are changing the main character to apollo...but I gotta go with it because I love the games so much.

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I have a little bit more to write on chapter 9
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Aww, tugs at my heart strings~! ^_^ I think this is a really nice story.
Good pacing, easy to read, in terms of flow, grammar, and structure, all nicely done.
I like the way the characters are set up and developing, it makes sense and fits.

The only part I was confused about is when this takes place and what time gap occurs (months-years?) when Maya leaves and where. Does she go to Franziska's in Germany? :eh?:

Anyway, can't wait to read more! <3 ^_^ Thanks for sharing your story!
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thank you. I really appreciate that...English isn't my first language..so its always good to hear that I am going well with grammar, spelling and structure.

at the end of chapter 1 I say that it is where The final episode of Trials and Tribulations is, because I hate that they set a character for Phoenix to love (aka Iris).

She does go to stay with Franziska in Germany, that I did leave a little wide open, I just figured that Franziska went back to Germany for a while and Edgeworth sent Maya to stay with Franziska while Maya her stuff in order. I suppose Maya is 19-20 maybe 21 in the story...I am leaving the time span not wide open but decently wide.

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Thank you for the critique!!! I really appreciate it!
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Sorry Chapter 9 is so short, I've been sick and trying to catch up on school work, as well as being kept busy in the picture forum...

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She leaned into the leather sofa as she sat down in her apartment, Phoenix sitting across from her awkwardly fidgeting with his hands. She looked up and spoke "Would you like something to drink?" She asked cordially, properly, and yet a touch of comfort in her voice. Phoenix looked up and he fell back a little into the plush ( I hope that's the right word) leather sofa, "Sure, water would be nice." She walked into the kitchen and turned her head slightly when she heard his voice "This is a really nice place." He said, she turned around, and reached out to hand him the glass, he had advanced leaning into the wall that divided the kitchen from the living area. She nodded "Thanks.." She was going to say Phoenix, but she found herself biting down on her lip to avoid crying. He looked at her for a moment, the glass cup slipping from his hand, due to little concentration, and shattering to peices on the floor. She let out a small gasp of surprise and looked up at Phoenix, who blushed a deep shade of red "I'm Sorry." He said, immediately bending down to pick the shattered pieces up, she just stared at the floor in a trance, she barely blinked at he picked up the large chucks of glass.

They both stood somewhat awkwardly outside of Ema's apartment, once they had reached the car in silence Miles had opened the door and walked Ema to the front door. Ema, who was blushing slightly, closed her eyes for a moment and pointed towards the door "Do you want to come in and have something to drink? Some dessert?" She offered, Edgeworth contemplated this for a few moments before turning to lock his car with the remote "Sure. That would be nice." They walked up several flights of stairs to reach, fumbling with her key nervously the door finally swung open to reveal a tiny yet friendly apartment, somewhat messy she set her purse and her keys down on a ledge near the door where also sat a telephone and picture of her with her older sister Lana. He spoke "This is really nice." she looked over at him and laughed slightly "Yeah? Sometimes I love it, Sometime I hate it." She gestured toward one of the two puffy lounge chairs and said "Sit. I'll get us some coffee." She walked out and he felt himself getting comfortable, sinking into the fluffly chair.

He looked up at her "What?" Maya stared at the ground, shaking her head slightly, breaking her trance "Oh, I'm sorry." She said after some pause.She bent down and picked up the last pieces of glass and threw them in the garbage. Looking up at her closeness with Phoenix who had followed her, throwing the pieces in the garbage, she blinked and looked down "How's Pearl?" She asked quickly, Phoenix taking a few steps back nodded "Good. Pearly's handled the responsibility perfectly." A small faint smile grew on her lips as she realized giving the title over the Pearl was the right thing to do. Phoenix sat back down on the sofa and Maya followed sitting across from him, looking at the shorter glass table between the two of them she looked up "Nick." She finally said, which caused Phoenix to look up surprised at her using the name of endearment "I..." she paused, and a tear trickled from her eye "I missed you." His eyes widened as she said this, at a loss for words.

Ema stood up after hearing an abrupt noise outside, Miles along with her, both of them looking out the window, the moonlight shinning through the spotless glass, he looked at her as she looked up at the moon momentarily a faint smile on her face that caused Miles to smile. He paused, taking a quick breath in, and then looked around and then looking back at her, she looked from the moon to him and gave him a look, "What?" A small crooked grin forming on her face with a paused he reached up at touched her cheek, caressing it for a moment he leaned in "You. That's it." He leaned in and kissed her, making the most important move was never his strong point, a blush on his face as he kissed her, both hands cupping her chin delicately. Perfect in that moment.
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I don't care if it's a double post. I am bumping...because I like this chapter.
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MUST....SEE....CHAPTER.... 10.
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I am starting chapter 10, I am being really slow because school work as gotten worse, and I'm still ill.
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Sorry it took so so so long. The internet had been acting up, I am finally feeling better and we have a break for Presidents Day. So I am all on top of things...oh, and I am trying a different format because on fanfiction.net my format has been getting negative responses.
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She sat curled up, feet up on the leather chair, hands resting on her knee's that were pulled in close to her tiny frame and holding a ceramic coffee mug, which every so often she took a sip from. Her big blue eyes watching his chest rise and fall with each breathe, slow, small, subtle tears growing in her eyes. She was realizing fast that she was actually afraid, and more than anything she wanted to be strong, if she couldn't at least smile for him anymore she had to be strong for him.

"I'm sorry I broke that cup. I have no idea what happened..."

She put her hand up to stop him from rambling and shook her head "It's not a big deal, It's just one out of fifteen glass cups that are in that cabinet. I severely doubt that I am ever going to have fifteen...or fourteen people in my apartment at once." a small smirk formed on her face, though only noticeable if you were actually looking.

He let out a somewhat sigh of relief and she looked at him, closing her eyes for a moment she shook her head "I don't understand why after me leaving and not saying a word that you could still want to talk to me."

He shrugged "Some people don't believe in second chances, or making things work, and...even though..." He stopped himself "And unlike those people, second chances are, in my eyes, necessary for living."

They sat down again, her in the leather chair, him on the leather couch and stared at each other, before her eyes wandered away, her cheeks turning a rosy color when she realized he was still watching her, though she didn't look at him, she didn't talk to him. She lost herself to sleep.


Closing her eyes it was apparent that he had stayed with her, either that or fallen asleep as well. She stood up and walked into the kitchen, pouring herself another cup of coffee, holding it close to her and bringing it up to her face, slowly taking in the smell and then taking a sip she sighed, leaning back against the counter, she wanted to do something to make it up to him, but she wasn't the person she used to be, at least she didn't think she was, but the more she thought about it she did not know how to be the person she used to be. And it made her scared.

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He breathed inward, taking in the strawberry scent coming from her, opening his eyes and squinting to try and keep the light of a new day out. It was somewhat impossible to believe that she chose him out of all the men that were pining after her, all the men who wanted her. He held her close to him and thought about the previous night, caressing her head gently.

"Well, Mr. Edgeworth, I did not know you had the courage." she blushed somewhat, as did he, he was never one to make the first move, he followed the rules, was lead, and was clever enough to know his place, but this, her, she was one thing he could not let go of, and not say no to.

He looked down at her and grinned, a slightly cocky grin that turned more into a genuine smile than anything else "I had to get the courage, so many guys want you."

She blushed, she never thought of herself that way, she was just who she was and it never, or she never wanted it to register, occurred that she was wanted by boys. She looked up at him "Stay with me tonight?" She asked, he nodded.

He sunk into the plush, and fluffy arm chair, Ema slipping into his lap, her head on his chest, almost listening to his heart beat.


He felt her head lift up off his chest, she turned slightly, looking very sleep but as beautiful as ever "Morning." She smiled.

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Maya changed into clothes that she could go to work in, a pair of dark jeans, that were professional looking, and a pair of caramel colored boots that had a slight heel to them, a white blouse and brown vest on top of it and she walked into the kitchen to take another cup of coffee. She walked into the living room and gently nudged Phoenix "Phoenix." She said softly at first, when he began to mummbled she spoke louder "Phoenix." Which caused him to sit up "What..Who?" He asked. She bent over and offered the cup of coffee which he took from her. She chewed on her lip for a moment and then spoke "Phoenix. I need to get into work, As long as you lock the door on the way out I am going to let you get ready here, or whatever you have to do. I'll see you later then?" She said, standing back up and crossing her arms.

Phoenix thought about this for a moment and then nodded. She nodded and grabbed a larger bag than she carried the previous night, slinging it over she shoulder. "Good day, Mr. Wright." She said, walked and closing the door behind her.
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Wow, this episode is awesome.
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BUMP! I cannot let this topic die...i've been waiting for the new chapters for so long now D: ...well you're probably busy though so i dont blame you...
Actually, part of the reason i joined this forum is so i can reply to this awesome topic/fanfic ^^; it captures the whole Nick/Maya thing perfectly...lol =3 and i couldn't help but feel sad for maya/phoenix...=3 as if it was real...(real life that is) and your english is actually better than mines o_o; so no worries! :] Well, my native language isn't english either but it became a whole lot better than my native one (shame, yes) anyways, im getting a bit off topic here...xD

Anyways, hope you have time to write the chapters soon! D: i can't wait so long =/ although i've waited umm...hold on a sec... *counts fingers* 11 days already x]...
if i were to give to fanfic a rating it would be 100000000/10 ^^; that's how awesome it is! xD and this got me into the Nick/Maya thing :p! So be proud! >:]!! :maya: and thanks! lol ^^;

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an awesome avvy by my best friend Harumi

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So awesome!
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ack....
sorry!!! I haven't updated in so long...I am working on the next chapter..I just got really side tracked.

I got sick and school is disgustingly stressful!
I am sorry to those who read this!!!
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Thank you to Phoenix and Maya Fan, The Innocent and Aviv for your awesome comments. Sorry this is so late...
Trust me I did the math. Phoenix is 28, Maya is 21, and our new male character is 18..
I know this does not go along with GS4..
.and if you haven't played..
I am sorry I added this...But I just started playing and was inspired!
I realize there are most likely some errors because I am to lazy to look for their ages
so I am making it up now.
Enjoy
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Chapter 11


As she left the apartment she walked at a quick pace down the street to get away, she wanted to occupy herself with something, like work, as quickly as possible to dismiss the many emotions flowing through her.

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He walked into the office with a cheerful disposition after spending the night with Ema, Edgeworth was completely happy, overjoyed even. He even looked like he was in love. He stopped when he saw Maya sitting at the desk, "Maya?" She looked up at him and her brow furrowed slightly as she asked "What?" He looked a her momentarily and licked his lips "What are you doing here so early?" He asked.

She looked at him and laughed slightly "Miles...It's ten in the morning...what did you expect?" He closed his eyes and shook his head, he had expected more than this, for their relationship to patch up...but what was he thinking, it was ridiculous of him to think that in a moments notice that Maya's relationship with Phoenix would be fixed and immediately better. He looked down and shook his head.

Finally looking up he made a slight face and then looked up "I don't know." he said with a shrug.

He watched her study him for a moment and then turned when a sly grin crossed her face "What?" He asked slowly. As she laughed inwardly for a moment "You and Ema." was all she had to say to make him turn a soft red color, a blush crossed his cheeks, as she walked away somewhat laughing, and shaking her head.

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As she walked to get herself a tea, a beverage of some kind she stopped laughing. She was happy for him, she really was. She knew that he had liked Ema for sometime and that Ema had obsessed over him for some time. Although the obsession dulled down, after meeting him, and spending some time with him Maya knew that Ema had feelings for him. She was happy for Ema, because she was getting what she wanted.

She sighed as she took a sip of the warm tea, after she had left and moved to Germany, she always found tea to be comforting, almost like home. Like the tea her mother made or her sister. Her eyes widened, and the mug dropped, shattering. She looked upward, brow furrowing and looked down, grunting loudly in frustration "God!" She yelled.

Bending down to pick the glass up she muttered a bunch of curses when she heard a voice, a younger man "Need some help, Fräulein?" She snapped her head up and spoke "Fräulein?" She paused with a smirk, she had lived in Germany, it was not "Sie sind Deutscher? (You are German?)" She said, not expecting him to really reply because his adding of German words seemed plastic, fake almost. He grinned at her "Ja, und Sie sind offensichtlich nicht. Obwohl Sie sprechen Deutsch.(Yes and you are obviously not. Though you do speak German.)" He said picking up the final shard of glass. Standing and handing her the shards of the mug, she pursed her lips slightly "And you are?" She raised her eyebrows. He leaned forward and grinned, his hands on his hips, his crystal blue eyes glimmering with amusement as if he had years on her, his absurd suit, black shirt and purple jacket fit for a rock god more than a laywer. "Klavier Gavin..." He paused "Prosecutor Klavier Gavin."




Yes...I am introducing a new character( :rock'n: ), a new conflict...
:D
I feel so evil
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YAY NEW CHAPTER ^^; haha and it's ok; school is more important than this afterall :] and heh, are you feeling better now? :maya:

anyways, AWESOME chapter! :D and isnt klaviar kinda random...he just suddenly pops up haha :o...dont fall for him Maya XD!
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Um, Young Klavier wears a black jacket and sunglasses, Awesome chapter, nonetheless!
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