Board index » Non Phoenix Wright » Eagle River

Page 11 of 27[ 1053 posts ]
Go to page Previous  1 ... 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14 ... 27  Next
 


Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

What is my liiiife?!?

Gender: Male

Location: UK

Rank: Admin

Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:02 am

Posts: 2504

Hey, I'm not just your colourboy! XD But it'll either be Aquanine or Maestra. ^_^

Also, I'll be thinking about and writing ideas the first Perfection Arc, seeing as it's an important point in the story. (In other words, 1-4!)
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

Alright. Here's Whiptra's side now (I will ONLY be posting up 'til Shatter appears, since anything more isn't Whiptra OR Shatter's angle anymore)

- While Whiptra and Shatter are viewing the battle, Shatter especially, Whiptra notices Cravatman watching her. She rushes over to him to ask why he's here, and when she tries attacking him with her whip, he rips it right out of her hands, sending her into an angry rage.

- He then starts rushing out, yelling "IF YOU WANT IT BACK, THEN TRY TO GET IT BACK, FRANZISKA!" which prompts her to chase after him, leaving Adrian alone.

-Using multiple cravats, he uses them to form a "Staircase of Daggers" (Which, if you don't know, is when daggers are put into a wall, and they're strong enough so that you can actually run up them. It's in a few movies I think... Superhero ones, naturally), and rushes up them, Whiptra following behind closely, still enraged.

- Cravatman reaches the top of the building he was running up, and rushes to the side of it. He stops unexpectedly, but Whiptra thinks he's a trick, and she snatches the whip from him. However, before she can use it, she sees why he stopped: Perfection is on the building with them.

Perfection: Whiptra. What the hell do you think you are doing? Kill him! NOW!

Whiptra: .........

Cravatman: Why don't you do your daughter's dirty work instead of asking her to do it? You already killed my Father... just because he defeated y-

Perfection: SILENCE, VILE WORM! Whiptra! Kill Him!

Whiptra: .....

Perfection: DO IT! NOW!!!

Whiptra: ........ No. I can't.

Perfection: WHAT???................ very well

Whiptra: W-What?

Perfection: I'll deal with you MYSELF!


- Perfection charges at Cravatman, who dodges quickly, but Perfection grabs Whiptra instead, and starts attacking her savagely. Cravatman tries to interfere, but is floored by an Energy Pulse that Perfection attacks him with. Perfection proceeds to demolish Whiptra, who had dropped her whip when Perfection grabbed her.

- After knocking Whiptra out and tossing her aside, Perfection gets ready to deliver the final blow, but sees Cravatman gerring ready to toss a Dagger-Shaped cravat towards him, and quickly picks up Whiptra again, who is hit with the Dagger-Cravat instead.

- Almost completely dead, Perfection tosses his daughters' semi-lifeless body off of the building, which lands with a sickening thud on the concrete below.

- Many minutes later, Shatter sees Whiptra's lifeless body on the street in front of her.

Shatter's lines:

NO! WHIPTRA!!! *rushes over*

Please... please don't be dead...

I... don't think I can live... alone again...

You were the one who... I wanted to be like... you were the one who... was strong...

... No.........

NOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


- The final scream of hers manages to destroy most of the area around her, from the force of her voice (Her power). She then proceeds to sob over the lifeless body of her former partner, before eventually running away, scared and trembling.


Your opinions? This is actually where my FIRST idea ends. However, I would like to see Whiptra become a hero, so I ALSO have an idea of bringing her back... with COURT involvement. (Much like my idea for Painkiller) So here's the rest of my idea, which CAN be added in, if asked for!!! (I'd like it added, to be honest).


- During the Schism, most members of COURT are out, either fighting battles, or helping attacked civilians. Only two members of COURT are still in HQ: One is Kim Crowe, monitering her team from the top floor via Satellite Uplink.

-The other is...

Spoiler: Scripted format
Allan Aokage: It's not like I CAN be out there... I don't have any skills.. except reading, of course... I mean, what would happen if I encountered a villain? I'm pretty sure Ms. Crowe will need an accountant still!

*continues pacing, worries*

*BEEP! BEEP! BEEP!*

Allan: WHAT THE... WHAT'S THAT?

Kim Crowe (Over Speaker System): Attention Any personel! Is anyone there?

Allan: ... Y... Yes, Ms. Crowe?

Kim: Allan? Are you the only one?

Allan: Yeah... Next to you, of course.

Kim: ... *sighs*

Allan: (What? What's that sigh for?)

Kim: That was a distress signal. Apparantly, one of our members is in severe trouble, and needs help.

Allan: ...! Are you...

Kim: I can't go, I have to monitor my team. You'll have to investigate this one.

Allan: YOU CAN'T BE SERIOUS!

Kim: I wish I wasn't, but I don't have any other choice. Use our scouting vehicle. I've sent the location of the signal to it, so it'll take you there automatically.

Allan: ............

Kim: Do you understand?

Allan: ...... Yes. I understand... I can't refu-

Kim: No. *Hangs up*

Allan: Dammit.

*40 mins later*

Allan: I don't even know why I agree to these things...

*sees something ahead*

Allan: Wait... What's that?

*car slows to a stop*

Kim Crowe (Over speaker): Allan? What do you see?

Allan: H... Hold on... it's not a member of our team, I know that much...

Kim: Hmm....... I don't know how our signal picked it up, then.

Allan: Does that mean that I can go back to HQ th-

Kim: NO!

Allan: (DAMMIT!)

Kim: Can you see them breathing?

Allan: ... From here? I can't see anything.

Kim: Can you see what it is? Is it human?

Allan: Yes... I can't see much though... I see hair, which is... light blue, and I can also see a whip somewhere nearby.

Kim: ............. You're SURE it's not moving?

Allan: Yes! Why?

Kim: I'm pretty sure that's Whiptra. She must be either dead, or unconscious. You'll have to get her back here immediately.

Allan: HOLD ON! Isn't she one of the "Bad Guy..." err.... "Girls"?

Kim: If I had a choice, even a slight one, I'd get you out of that area. But this might be a chance to have her join us.

Allan: ...... Fine... but I don't like this one bit.

Kim: Contact me when you've brought her into the Scouting Unit so I can send you both back to HQ.

Allan: Alright. Understood.

- Allan uses one of the tools within the Unit, an Anti-Gravity Generator, to lift Whiptra off the ground, and get her into the unit.

Allan: Ms. Crowe? Whiptra is in the Scouting Unit. Can you send us back?

Kim: Alright, give me a moment...

Allan: Quicker, PLEASE?

Kim: ...... there.

*car moves back to HQ*



At this point, this is all we'd see in this issue. The NEXT issue would feature very little of Franziska, with a few segments every once in a while, stating "Condition" she's in, and how healed she is.

Anyways, is this alright? Allan Aokage won't get a lot of roles... in fact, this might even be his ONLY appearance in the series.

Allan: HEY!

Wrestle: Don't make me make Shatter hurt you!

Allan: !!!

Wrestle: Anyways, TD? Gerku? You're verdicts?
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

I love myself.

*licks Wrestle*
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

...Woah.

EPIC.

Imagining Adrian being broken up about Whiptra's death, and destroying many things...Perfection killing Whiptra.

OH GOD IT'S JUST TOO AWESOME.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

Ewwww.....

Trust me: It hurt a LOOOOOOOOOOOOT to have to kill Franziska off... but it had to be done.

Where is this going?: At the scene, Shatter noticed the bloody cravat while she was crying. This will prompt her to make it a goal of hers to avenge Whiptra by killing Cravatman. More on this, MUCH later.
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

Needs more me.

Because everyone loves me.
Image


Last edited by The Doctor on Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:35 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

Gender: Male

Location: Having fun in the land of potatoes! (Ahh! Potatobadger!)

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:24 pm

Posts: 713

So many ideas, it's hard not to be inspired.

Man, I just wish I could get my art of Riff done! I have such an awesome pic! Guess I'll just describe him.

Basically my inspiration for Riff's design was sort of a Dante (DMC) look, since I pretty much imagine Klavier acting like him. His attire is basically a trenchcoat version of his jacket, set with a "Gavineer" symbol on the back, jamming with his air guitar attack.

Also have art done for Lawyerman in his prototype outfit, basically his pink sweater with an L covered over the P. Along with the outfit made by Ema.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

FINE! You'll be helping Cravatman and Lawyerman defeat Perfection. Happy?

.....

Not a joke. Matthias is the Main Character of COURT, so it's about time he was given at LEAST a semi-major role.
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

Nooo. I just think I should be there somewhere. Not in a role like that, because that detracts from the heroes.

Ben: You best be uploading your arts. Even if they aren't finished. If you can sort of tell who they are, they'll be fine.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

Er, Doc. Your the main COURT character. You'll get loads of time in panels >>
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

Hmm... we MAY need you to be fighting a villain...

........

an ACTUAL one! Not Wriggler!!!

Oh! And the one who actually sent the distress signal was Wrestlemania. This is for 3 reasons:

1. I had to choose a member of COURT.

2. I had to choose one who's location can't ever be verified.

3. I need an Ego Stroking It has to be someone who Kim will NOT be able to ask. Everyone reports to HQ at some point, and she can ask them then. This would take up a LOT of Comic Space, so I'll just make it the guy who's never at HQ: Me!
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

I know.

I was joking.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

The Doctor wrote:
I know.

I was joking.

I know ;)
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

I know you know.

Aw man, no one commented on Jake and Neil or my Aquinine Hydro-Man edit ;_;
Image


Last edited by The Doctor on Tue Mar 11, 2008 3:47 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

Gender: Male

Location: Having fun in the land of potatoes! (Ahh! Potatobadger!)

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:24 pm

Posts: 713

But...what? @_@
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

The Doctor wrote:
I know you know.

Aw man, no one commented on Jake and Neil or my Aquinine Hydro-Man edit ;_;

I know you know I know.

I like the Aquanine edit, even if know Aquanine is reminding me of a certain indie song... ><
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

:uramidn: An arrow, straight and true
Aquinine, my love is for you~
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

Strangely, no.

505 by the Arctic Monkeys. 0_o

Spoiler: Original
I'm going back to 505,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs,

Stop and wait a sec,
Oh when you look at me like that my darling,
What did you expect,
I probably still adore you with your hands around my neck,
Or I did last time I checked,

Not shy of a spark,
A knife twists at the thought that I should fall short of the mark,
Frightened by the bite though its no harsher than the bark,
Middle of adventure, such a perfect place to start,

I'm going back to 505,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs,

But I crumble completely when you cry,
It seems like once again you've had to greet me with goodbye,
I'm always just about to go and spoil a surprise,
Take my hands off of your eyes too soon,

I'm going back to 505,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs and a smile!


Spoiler: What I think of
I'm going back to Aquanine,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs,

Stop and wait a sec,
Oh when you look at me like that my darling,
What did you expect,
I probably still adore you with your hands around my neck,
Or I did last time I checked,

Not shy of a spark,
A knife twists at the thought that I should fall short of the mark,
Frightened by the bite though its no harsher than the bark,
Middle of adventure, such a perfect place to start,

I'm going back to Aquanine,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs,

But I crumble completely when you cry,
It seems like once again you've had to greet me with goodbye,
I'm always just about to go and spoil a surprise,
Take my hands off of your eyes too soon,

I'm going back to Aquanine,
If its a 7 hour flight or a 45 minute drive,
In my imagination you're waiting lying on your side,
With your hands between your thighs and a smile!

Yes, I am insane.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

*Reads lyrics*
O____O

That guy has a seriously furked imagination.

ERHERM ANYWAY LAWYERMAN...
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

The Doctor wrote:
*Reads lyrics*
O____O

That guy has a seriously furked imagination.

I agree.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

The Doctor wrote:
*Reads lyrics*
O____O

That guy has a seriously furked imagination.

I agree.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

Gender: Male

Location: Having fun in the land of potatoes! (Ahh! Potatobadger!)

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:24 pm

Posts: 713

Yes, anyway. I will work on a draft for the first issue. Making a scrift, rough draft and such. It will take at least a week, two tops.

Currently I'm listening to this while thinking

http://youtube.com/watch?v=ELNh23yRiJc&feature=related
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

I already commented on the "Aquanine" you posted in the Kristoph topic. :gymshoe:
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title

AKA Dr. Bokchoy

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu May 17, 2007 12:44 pm

Posts: 3035

The Doctor wrote:
Only one post? What's this thread coming to?
AQUININE!
Image
Notice: I can't draw, so I edit.

I like those wrist-icuffs. Maybe I'll add them to my design.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

I seem to have a "problem" with killing off characters. :gymshoe:

And then when I NOTICE, I try to remedy other killings I DIDN'T DO! :sadshoe:

I need a vacation...
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

Apparently, AA, Gerk, and Wressy weree on MSN without me, talking about things. I'll post some questions and their answers AA sent me...

The Doctor wrote:
Allan's Aokage wrote:
The Doctor wrote:
I reallly want to, but I'm on the school computers. Send me the transcript, and I'll try to throw in my ideas.

I will when we finish talking. Right now, though, we need some help.

1) How would Acro kill Russel this time? We don't want to make him a villian, really... Wrestle wants to make him a Hero, actually.
2) What would Acro's super-powers be? Super Strength (Wrestle's idea).

Now, I'll C&P all of Wrestle's questions. There may be some dupicates of my two.

1. Matt's "original" identity: Was he Two-Face already?
2. Dee's existance: Was she killed? If so, it's not officially "Canon".
3. When did the Schism occur?
4. What's Grossberg's part in the comic?
5. How will COURT make appearances?
6. What are Acro's powers?
7. How does 2-3 Work out in the comic?
8. When did the "Engarde" scene occur?



I'm not sure how 2-3 would work out. We haven't even gotten past anything else yet.
Remember: LAWYERMAN! doesn't have to follow the games. It's a different world, a different universe.
Russel would die somehow. I don't see why we have to superherofy it.

1. Matt was originally The Nickel Samurai, of TV show fame. Somehow, half of his face is replaced with the metal, and his eyes goes all red. He also goes insane. Remember: His power is a lot like The Purple Man

2. Dee dies by The Commander's hand after she is defeated by Lawyerman and The Steel Samurai.

3. The Schism occurs after a few other storylines involving The Soul Captains, The Gavineers, and the others, so we can establish all the characters. We want it to have maximum impact, just like The Civil War.

4. Grossberg should be a mentor type, though somehow involved with the whole Redd White thing, if there is one.

5. Go Here.

6. Super strength sounds good...

7. No idea. Does it have to?

8. Which Engarde scene? The Four Years Ago one? If that's the one he's referring to, then it takes place four years before the start of everything.

Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

Gender: Male

Location: Having fun in the land of potatoes! (Ahh! Potatobadger!)

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:24 pm

Posts: 713

Comic concept update. The cover is going extremely well. I should have it done by the weekend, colored and ready to post....though I've yet to gain my concept drawings back from my dad.

My only problem is trying to get the story going. I've though through the concept, but I such at getting my ideas into words. If someone could help with ideas, I'd really appreciate it.

Also since Apollo is set in the comics, I'd think it would be fair to say Trucy should join in as well.

Spoiler: "Miss Magic" Slight AJ spoilers
“Miss Magic”
Real Name: Trucy Wright
A.K.A.: Trucy-doll
Relatives: Classified, adopted by Phoenix Wright
Height: short
Weight: light
Eyes: Brown
Hair: deep blue
Abilities: Has the power to create illusions, has an interdemetional pocket in her "Magic Panties", as well as the ability to percieve, though not as strong as Lawboy can.
Weapons: Mr. Hat, her favorite trick. Mr. Hat basically deals with the melee and defense of the brawl, making him a reliable ally.
Notes: Not much would change about her appearance, save for perhaps a diamond shaped mask over her eyes.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

I have news.

I have trademarked LeTouse's Lettuce Lot. My name >=D
LeTouse's Lettuce Lot ©

...Okay, I don't REALLY have news.

[edit]
I do now. Me and Gerk have been talking on MSN. And we came up with some stuff for 2-3. We have profiles for Regina, Acro and Moe. And we have an idea for an Acro VS Regina fight.

"Acro"
Real Name: Ken Dingling
A.K.A.: The Dingling Brother
Relatives: Bat
Height: Tall
Weight: Medium
Eyes: Brown
Hair: Brown
Abilities: Strength and MASSIVE AGILITY. Like, Monkey style agility
Weapons: Who needs em?
Notes: Was injured but got surgery that he hides till the climactic battle.

"Moe"
Real Name: Lawrence Curls
A.K.A.: Curly
Relatives: His wife left him and his daughter is in her custody
Height: Short
Weight: Medium-to heavy (More of it is muscle than fat tho)
Eyes: Blue
Hair: Can't remember
Abilities: SWORDPLAY! He used to be the top and still is in pretty good shape
Weapons: He has a selection of swords. Broadsword, Fencing sword etc.
Notes: N/A

"R"
Real Name: Regina Berry.
A.K.A.: N/A
Relatives: Russel Berry (deceased)
Height: Short
Weight: Light
Eyes: Blue?
Hair: Yellow
Abilities: Control over animals.
Weapons: Animals
Notes: She gets crippled in her legs after her fight with Acro. She is then adopted by Moe.

Regina VS Acro

After Acro's first failed attempt to kill Regina (that killed Russel), Acro decides to fight Regina to kill her. He uses his wheelchair to confront her in the Big Top tent. Acro moves to hit her, but Money (the Monkey) interferes, taking the blow. He isn't killed, but is stunned severly. Regina defnds herseld, and makes Regent (The Tiger) attack Acro. Acro cannot win in his wheelchair, as the Tiger just jumps at him from behind. Then, he makes a speech. Inside, this speech, he says that he has had secret special surgery. He stands up, revealing that his legs are cybernetic - like Jazz's.

When he's standing up, he throws Regent in the on-stage cage. After that, Regina runs up some stairs, and onto a high platforms. Moe appears, and starts fighting with Acro. He loses, but Acro doesn't injure him a lot - he's not his target. Acro runs up the stairs, following Regina he grabs her, intending to break her neck. Then Lawyerman appears, surprising. In this state, he drops Regina, he stumbles forward... and falls. She lands on her feet. A loud CRUNCH is heard. Then Lawyerman jumps at Acro, and fights him. Acro's conscience (knowing that Regina is in pain) plays up, and he quickly surrenders to LM. Moe calls an ambulance for Regina. And a police car for Acro.

Regina is taken to the hospital, and Money to the vets. Acro is taken to the preceint, quite willingly.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

What is my liiiife?!?

Gender: Male

Location: UK

Rank: Admin

Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:02 am

Posts: 2504

So yes, we gets some 2-3 action for the people who like the case (Like me, so shush!)
Also Ben C, I'd love to see the cover when you're finished :3 But remember, you need to speak to the writing team. At the moment that consists of Me and Wrestle. ^_^
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Ready to RAWK!?

Gender: Male

Location: Ontario, Canada.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Wed Oct 10, 2007 10:56 pm

Posts: 9051

Hey now, that's not exactly "True" now is it? Allan Aokage is also assisting in the writing of the scripts!

I mostly come up with the main plots and inner details, and everyone else proofreads it to make it better! :gymshoe:

Nice work on the Fight scene! But I think we need to add Ben and Max. Especially Max. Ben will also be in a flashback with Max, in order to show the "Bottle" Scene in the game, "Comicified".
Image
Image Image Image Image
Posted by Request.
Sig by Elriel. Avatar taken from a YouTube video of Rawk Hawk's Theme.
Sig changed on December 08, 2008. Avatar changed on December 14, 2008.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Potatoe's NOT a lie!! *cheers*

Gender: Male

Location: Having fun in the land of potatoes! (Ahh! Potatobadger!)

Rank: Prosecutor

Joined: Tue Aug 28, 2007 6:24 pm

Posts: 713

That's good. I really can't do much else until I get the actually story itself. I'm terrible at writing.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

Me and Gerk are still talking on MSN. And we have a basic 1-1 plotline 8D

-Wriggler is robbing Cindy's apartment. She comes in, and gets whacked over the head with his crowbar (which is named The Thinker). Butzman (Larry) comes in, and sees Wriggler's crowbar. He cowers, and the Wrigger walks up to him slowly.

- He nudges him with the crowbar. *PLINK*... LArry falls unconcious, put his *cough* Flight Boots (made of Talc) malfunction, and squirt talc everywhere. In the panic, the Wriggler escapes.

- Butzman (when he wakes up) calls LM and asks him for advice. And money, because he's going to escape the country.

- That night, the Wriggler robs a house. Gumshoe's house. When in the living room, a light flicks on. It's Gumshoe. 'Look pal, can you do this in the morning. It's too late for me to do police stuff' The Wriggler leaves. Gumshoe's wife (Maggey) have a conversation straight after thos.
"Honey, who was that you were talking to"
"Just some creep with a crowbar who tried to rob us"
"Oh, ok"

- Outside, Comet and LM confront Wriggler. Wriggler lunges, and misses. He pauses, realizing that he missed. Then Nick does a smug smile, and...

*punch* "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

- Mudgey (Mayor Judge) calls Councilman Phoenix (recently promoted) into his office. He explains that he doesn't trust the supers, and doesn't want Phoenix to become involved in them.

THE END

Anyway, Gerk didn't want Laywer Wright/Fey. So we came up with...

COUNCILMAN WRIGHT
SENATOR FEY

They need alter-ego's, remember =3
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

What is my liiiife?!?

Gender: Male

Location: UK

Rank: Admin

Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:02 am

Posts: 2504

You missed out a non-vital but really cool bit of speech!

*Mia is in shadows so we only see her eyes*
Mia:It's time. *She steps out of the shadows and we see her entire costume* Let's see if I managed to train the right guy.

Edit: And it's just 'The Mayor'. :3
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

Gerkuman wrote:
. At the moment that consists of Me and Wrestle. ^_^


Bjekshun.
You forgot about me.
People always seem to forget about me... :sadshoe:

Actually, I commisioned Ben to draw the cover. Me. He got his orders from the general.

Great ideas, everybody.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

What is my liiiife?!?

Gender: Male

Location: UK

Rank: Admin

Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 11:02 am

Posts: 2504

I never forgot about you, since I had no idea you wanted to be a writer :O So yeah. The writing team now consists of:

The Doc. (Team Leader)
Wrestle and Moi (Plot Sketchers)
AA (Plot Bouncer)

Now no-one is left out! ^_^
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

Boing. Boing. Boing.

It's not fun without the plot.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

I DREW A PICTURE.
Spoiler: IT'S NOT GOOD.
Image

Originally, it was going to be a group picture of the Soul Captains, but I couldn't fit Reflecto and Mask*DeMasque in, and I don't know what Luke's costume would be.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

Four is Death

Gender: Male

Location: Wales. That little place next to England.

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Jul 05, 2007 9:14 pm

Posts: 2284

This is a bump because people won't stop asking me to bump it.
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

The Father of Death

Gender: Male

Location: Beavercreek, Ohio

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:20 pm

Posts: 3049

Aquanine and Maestra: Lovers or LOVERS?
By Spark Brushel, Freelance Journalist
If you say the words “Soul Captains”, what immediately comes to mind is a team of four heroes, ready to defend our freedoms from the rising evil. These four talented individuals are, as everyone knows, Aquanine, Reflecto, Maestra, and Mask*DeMasque. This team has saved the word more times than anyone can count. In the eyes of the public, the individual members seem to be colleagues, nothing more.
BUT ARE THEY? Last Friday, this intrepid reporter witnessed what seemed to be a tryst between team captain Aquanine and heroine Maestra. They met outside the local jazz club owned by Grey-Haired Guild member Damon Gant, and entered together. Could they possibly be seing each other? Only time will tell.
Maestra is the only granddaughter of billionaire Bruto Cadaverini, and Aquanine is the older brother of renowned prosecutor and rock star Klavier Gavin.

KOFI KINGSTON PICKS UP ANOTHER WIN
In a profession dominated by super-powered athletes, Kofi Kingston proved himself on Tuesday night’s edition of ECW by picking up his 14th straight win and taking the ECW Championship from previous champion and resident mutant DN Alpha.
“In Jamaica, we have a saying,” Kingston said after taking the title for himself. “The sun shines on those who try.”
The sun certainly was shining on Kingston as he held the title high after winning the Extreme Rules match on Tuesday. DN Alpha, however, has no intention of giving up so easily.
“Kingston’s possession of the gold is only temporary,” Alpha told rporters. “I will win it back.”
Alpha plans to challenge Kingston next Sunday at Armageddon.

SERROT’S CELEBRATES 1000TH CUSTOMER
Ever since Serrot’s opened late last year, customers have been flocking to it on a daily basis. Yesterday, The Mayor announced that the well-loved cocoa shop had served one thousand customers since its opening in December.
“It is with great pleasure that I present this plaque to Mr. Donald Serrot,” The Mayor said in a speech. “May Serrot’s continue to prosper, and serve our city well.”
The owner was reportedly “very happy” about the achievement, and celebrated by giving everyone in attendance a free mug of hot chocolate.

ELDOON’S NOODLES:
Come on down to Eldoon’s Noodles, the best noodles this side of town! With a rich history littered with salt, and a convenient location in the middle of People Park, Eldoon’s promises service with style! Eldoon’s Noodles: Five Generations of Flavour.
Image
Re: The LAWYERMAN! ProjectTopic%20Title
User avatar

I may or may not be here.

Gender: Male

Location: Drinking a mug of hot chocolate

Rank: Ace Attorney

Joined: Thu Nov 29, 2007 11:58 pm

Posts: 4916

The Doctor wrote:
SERROT’S CELEBRATES 1000TH CUSTOMER
Ever since Serrot’s opened late last year, customers have been flocking to it on a daily basis. Yesterday, The Mayor announced that the well-loved cocoa shop had served one thousand customers since its opening in December.
“It is with great pleasure that I present this plaque to Mr. Donald Serrot,” The Mayor said in a speech. “May Serrot’s continue to prosper, and serve our city well.”
The owner was reportedly “very happy” about the achievement, and celebrated by giving everyone in attendance a free mug of hot chocolate.

*ego is "very happy"* :gymshoe:
ImageImage
Page 11 of 27 [ 1053 posts ] 
Go to page Previous  1 ... 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14 ... 27  Next
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  

 Board index » Non Phoenix Wright » Eagle River

Who is online
Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 5 guests

You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum
Jump to:  
News News Site map Site map SitemapIndex SitemapIndex RSS Feed RSS Feed Channel list Channel list
Powered by phpBB

phpBB SEO