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Awsome! o_O I love yours stories for :phoenix:/ :maya: ^^
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Thanks for the comments, everyone!
We're gonna plan to add some Apollo Justice for the next chapters.
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Thanks for the comments, everyone!
We're gonna plan to add some Apollo Justice for the next chapters.

I'm sure it will be amazing! :jazzron:
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Omfg I love them all xD
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Heres chapter 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12... Oh! 13!
Spoiler: AJ spoilers. flashback investigation of case 4
"Maya, i love you, you know that, right?" Phoenix said.
"Why do you always ask questions when the answer is obvious?" Maya answered.
"...Maya, after we go to Ema's house, whaddya wanna do then?"
"Umm.... i don't know...Wait! i got it!"
"...Huh?" Phoenix was confused.
"I've heard theres a new rock band, and they're really good!"
"...Really? whats their name?"
"It's called 'The Gavinners'"
"...Isn't that the band that each member is attached to the police?"
"Yeah! and the lead player is a prosecuter!" Maya said.
"I see."
"Of course You're gonna make him crash and burn!!"
"I sure will, Maya."
"Okay, so it's settled."
The night passed, with the two cuddling each other. Maya fell asleep.
The morning came, Maya woke up seeing Phoenix on the phone.
"I see, okay, Zak. ill be there in a minute."
"Who was that?" Maya asked.
"Umm. yeah, Maya. listen, im really really sorry, but we cant see the movie..."
"Why?" Maya asked.
"Well, i got a case for today. but we'll go to Ema's house right after i finish it!"
"Okay, whos the prosecuter?" Maya asked.
"Oh, his name is Klavier Gavin."
"You mean, THE- Klavier Gavin? the lead player of 'The Gavinners'?"
"Yeah." Phoenix answered.
"Can i come?!?!"
"Umm, sorry, Maya. but i'll bring you the video when i get back, promise!"
"Ugh... Okay..."
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-Phoenix's last case here-
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"I...can't...believe...it..." Phoenix nearly cried.
"Nicky...? What's wrong?" Maya asked..
"They...they...took it away..."
"Took what away?" Maya suddenly noticed Phoenix's lapel.
"You cant possibly mean...!?"
"Yeah." He said. "They took away my attorney's badge..."
"Nicky, that's terrible! what happend?!"
"Well, i presented this evidence i got in the lobby.." He said, "And it turned out to be forged."
"But Nicky.. you'll never forge evidence, even the judge knows that!"
"Its law, Maya, the only thing that counts is facts."
"...I see."
"..I cant wait till we go to the Gavinner's concert, i'd like to give Mr. Gavin a piece of my mind."
"Oh, and by the way, you wont believe what happend next...it was a miracle."
"What?"
"Well, the judge was about to announce a verdict, then The defendant said he could not call a verdict on him, and then dissapeared! he was a magician."
"WOW! really?"
"Of course. Alright, Maya, i need to go to the office.."
"Why?"
"I need to finish some documents."
Phoenix went away.
2 hours passed, and Phoenix came back.
"SOoo..." Maya asked.
"Huh?"
"What were you doing?"
"I already told you, finish some documents, oh, and this..." He said, bringing a little girl to the room.
"Hi! I'm Trucy!" The girl said.
"Nicky, she's so cute!" Maya was excited, "Are we gonna babysit her?"
"We're adopting her."
"Omigod! really?"
"Yes." Phoenix answered.
"Ummm..." Trucy begain saying, "Daddy, is she my mommy?"
"She calls you 'daddy'? Thats so cool!" Maya said, and walked over Trucy. "Hey, cute outfit!" Maya said.
"Thanks! i'm a magician!"
"Really? thats neat! do a magic trick!"
"Okay! Ready... set.. TA-DA!" Trucy said, and pulled out Mr. Hat.
"Hey there, mama! I'm Mr. Hat!" Mr. Hat said.
"That was... amazing!" Maya started clapping.
"Okay, Nicky, lets go to Ema's house, then the concert. Mr. Edgeworth will babysit her and Pearly."
"Alright, Maya."
Phoenix ran in Edgeworth's room with Pearl and Trucy.
"Wright, whos this girl?" Edgeworth asked.
"She's my, ummm... daughter." He said. "Can you babysit her?"
Edgeworth was still shocked. "You mean you did-"
"NO! of course not!! i adopted her!"
"Oh.. Alright, i'll babysit her."
Phoenix and Maya went towards the lobby.
"Now... where is that limo driver?" Phoenix said to himself. "Ah! There he is!" He called him and they both went with the driver.
"Finally, some time to relax!" Maya said.
They were both napping while cuddling each other. "Hey, we're here!" The driver shouted.
"Thank you." Phoenix said and they both got out of the car.
Ema saw the both of them from the window and ran out of the house.
"Finally, your'e here!" Ema shouted at both of them. "Come in."
Phoenix and Maya did as Ema's will.
"Hey, Lana" Maya said.
"Oh, hello there, Mr. Wright, Ms. Fey." Lana said with a smile. "Would you like to drink something?" She asked them.
"I'm fine." Maya said.
"I'll have grape juice, thank you." Phoenix told her.
"So... Why the long faces?" Ema asked them while Lana went to get Phoenix some water.
Phoenix didn't ansewr...
"Let's not talk about that, ok?" Maya said hastily.
Lana came back with Phoenix's glass of water in her hand.
"Thank you." Phoenix told her. "So Lana, what do you work now?"
"Oh, I retired." She smiled, "But don't worry I still got money from that other job."
"It's probably really fun to live together as two sisters." Maya said with a bitter-sweet face.
"You bet it is!" Ema said. "Oh, did you hear about the Gavinners' concert later?"
"We are going to it!" Maya said, excited.
"REALLY?! Me and Lana are going too! We should go together!" Ema's eyes sparkled.
"Nick... are you sure we should go after what happend?" Maya said.
"Of course, it's a vacation, and we're supposed to have FUN." Phoenix said.
"What happend?" Ema asked.
"Nick lost...his attorney's badge..."
"Wh-wh-WWWHHHHHAAAAAAATTTT!?!?!?!?!?!!" Ema was full of shock.
"That can't be! i mean... Mr. Wright?! what happend?"
"I was given this evidence on the lobby and it turned out to be FORGED!"
"But Mr. Wright will never forge evidence! Even the judge knows that!"
"I know, Ema, i know..."
"Mr. Wright..." Ema hugged Phoenix.
"I-it's okay, Ema, i think i can quit law for a while.."
"Alright, Mr. Wright... i hope you're not too sad about this..."
"Thanks, Ema..."
"Well, lets not be all depressive... come on, Nicky!" Maya said.
"Wow, the concert is almost starting, we should go." Ema said.
"Come, you can ride in our limo." Maya said.
"I knew I would go in there again."
The four of them went out of the house and into the limosuine.
"I can't wait to see the Gavinners play." Ema said after they got in.
"Yeah!" Maya replied to her.
The four got out, Maya and Ema ran to the stage, leaving Lana and Phoenix behind.
"Do you even like them?" Phoenix asked Lana.
"No... but as long at it makes Ema happy, i'm happy." Lana replied.
The two walked slowly towards the stage. "COME ON, SLOWPOKES!" They heared Maya's and Ema's voices from far away.
"We're coming, we're coming!" Phoenix shouted.
The four joined the crowd.
"Welcome, everyone, to the Gavinner's 'Guilty as charged' tour! we will start with our famous hit, 'Guilty love'!" Klavier screamed to the microphone.
"Pfft.. they'll probably never write another song for the next 10 years..." Phoenix and Lana said.
The song played, Maya and Ema screamed as loud as they could.
"Klavier is the best!" Maya screamed.
"Klavier is just a pretty face, the REAL hot guy is Daryan." Ema said.
"Daryan? Please! look at his hair."
"I know, isnt he dreamy?"
"...He is kinda cute.""
"Come..." Lana said to Phoenix.
Phoenix did a mark with his hand to Maya and they both went out.
"I can see what you mean." Phoenix said.
"What?" Lana asked him.
"That as long as Ema's happy you're happy. I feel the same about Maya."
"Oh... You two arne't.... right?"
"Actually, we are. But don't tell Ema, ok?"
"It's really loud in there, I don't understand how can they be in there." Phoenix said.
"You can say that again..." Lana replied, covering her ears.
"WOW! That was GREAT!" Ema said to Maya when it was over.
"You oldies! I can't belive you left!" Maya shouted at Lana and Phoenix.
"Sorry, Maya, we just don't like it so loud." Phoenix replied.
"What do you wanna do know?" Lana asked.
"Let's go eat somewhere!" Maya birsted in. "We can eat in one of the hotel's restaurant, our treet!"
"Our?" Phoenix said.
"Ok, let's go!" Ema said, ignoring Phoenix. He sighed.

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Nice!
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PURE WIN.

So Adorable and Edgeworth's reaction was priceless! :edgy:
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Thanks.
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Attatch wire A to socket C...

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Umm, im sorry, but im taking a break from the fanfic, i might ask Dabn to take control.
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THE PROJECTS CANCELED.
I'm very sorry if i let down some of you ;_;
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Aviv wrote:
THE PROJECTS CANCELED.
I'm very sorry if i let down some of you ;_;

DDDDDDDDDD: :acro:
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I'm sorry... it's just, Dabn doesnt want to write...
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Aviv wrote:
I'm sorry... it's just, Dabn doesnt want to write...

Ok! ;) No problem, pal.
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hey homie, you're story is going well.
I have not been on in forever and this was the first thing I came too!
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I can help!!!
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PhoenixTears wrote:
I can help!!!

You're the adapted person! :edgy:
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Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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Such a shame i was really enjoying it... :larry:

The time lines not quite right lol but that doesn't really matter...

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I like the story!!
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I can try to continue it here:

It's day 6

Chapter 14

Phoenix, Maya, Ema and Lana Arrived at the hotel and took some seats at the dinning room.

"Oh, I almost forgot, I'll go get Trucy and Pearls." Phoenix said before he ran out of the room. "Who's Trucy?" asked ema. "She's a little girl phoenix is adopting." Said Maya.

Phoenix got out of the elevator and started walking towards Edgeworth's room.

Suddenly he heard a scream. He saw two little girls running down the hall.

"Daddy there's a meam lady chasing me and Pearl!" Said Trucy. "Von Karma... Quick follow me!" Said Phoenix. They ran to the elevator as fast as hey could.

When they arrived at the dinning room Ema screamed "OH SHE IS SOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE!" "Yeah well let's eat!" Said Maya.

After filling themselves up with so much food the skye's left in a taxi and the Wrights and Feys went up to their room.

"Um Daddy where do I sleep?" said Trucy "Come to my room there's two beds!" Shouted pearl.

Phoenix and Maya got into bed.

"This was our last day here..." Whispered Maya sadly. "Then let's make this our best night..." Phoenix didnt have time to finish Maya jumped on him they rolled round and round on the bed it was crazy. They kissed and hugged and were all over the place.
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Epilogue

Day 7

Phoenix was hit by a car that day.

Maya visited the hospital.

"Maya ... Don't worry about me ... just go back to kurain i ... i'll try to see you again..."

Phoenix fell asleep.

Maya kissed him.

"Nicky..."

She ran out of the room crying.

THE END
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So sad but cute! Good work! :edgy: :butzthumbs:
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...D:
PHOENIX CANT DIE
PHOENIX IS, WELL, PHOENIX.
WOULDNT HIS SPIKES MAKE THE CAR'S WHEELS GO KABOOM?!
I ASK TOO MANY QUESTION.
Also, if you STILL want to add some, you're free to do so ^_^;;
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UM... I DID NOT MAKE HIM DIE HE WENT TO SLEEP!
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oh. sorry ^_^
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'sokay. Well did you think I did a good job?
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Yeah, sure ^_^;;
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Prologue chapter 2

Phoenix woke up a week later.

He woke up in a white room.

"Your free to go home mr. wright." Said one of the doctors.

"Maya... MAYA!" Phoenix jumped out of the patient bed and ran out of the room.

He ached all over but he didn't stop.

He ran as fast as he could for the train station.

He got a ticket for the train bound for kurain.

When he sat down in the train he opened his phone and there staring back at him was maya. He looked at the picture the whole way to kurain.

he stepped of the train and made his way to Maya's house.

There sitting on the side of the road was Maya.

"MAYA!" Souted phoenix. "NICKY!" Shouted Maya. They ran to eachother and embraced.

"I thought you were..." This time Maya didn't have time to finish. Phoenix swept her of her feet and carried her into the fey manor.

He carried her to the guest room where he laid her down on one of the matresses. You can guess what happened next can't you.
A few minuites later pearl stepped into the room. "Oh Mr. Nick! I'll leave you alone for a while."

Phoenix went back to the city after a week of staying with maya and worked at the restraunt from earlier in the story.

Maya continued her life in kurain.

They still keep in contact.

Phoenix visits Maya once every year.

So That's my happy ending

(If you think I shoud make a sequel I can i'll just continue it in this subject)
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Amazing story! Good work! :butzthumbs:
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nice story!!
please make another story about maya/phoenix
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