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In The Shadow Of A Dream [Mature, horror/angst, yaoi] [PxE]Topic%20Title
OfflineAce Attorney Fri May 16, 2008 8:04 pm
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Title: In The Shadow Of A Dream
Author: EdgeworthFanGirl AKA Tarma Hartley
Rating: Mature
Genre: Horror/Angst
Status: Complete
Pairing: Phoenix & Edgeworth
Summary: Two dreams, one nightmare... a warning of things to come. For whom will it just be a dream... and for whom will it become a nightmare?

Some scenes may be disturbing to some readers. Viewer discretion is advised.

Link: [ The nightmare begins... ]
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Re: In The Shadow Of A Dream [Mature, horror/angst, yaoi] [PxE]Topic%20Title
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Wow, That was simply amazing. The details from the body action to the scenery really brought the story to life and made the passion feel so real. I really felt like I was there watching all of this happening in front of me. And the character transition for Edgeworth really help bring the story together. And ending was quite a twist in which I wasn't expecting. I have to admit that I kinda got creeped out but in a good way. In The Shadow of a Dream was rather dark but wonderful.

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Re: In The Shadow Of A Dream [Mature, horror/angst, yaoi] [PxE]Topic%20Title
OfflineAce Attorney Fri May 23, 2008 6:15 pm
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Thank you very much and I'm really glad that you enjoyed reading it! :edgy:

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I'm really happy that you liked the little twist I put in at the end. I just LOVE it! It's just so nasty-not only is it Miles' nightmare but it's Umbrae's good dream! This is a small intro to Umbrae, Kaine's equally twisted lover, who will be making his debut in chapter 4 of LPOF which I am currently in the process of writing. A very twisted twist to a very twisted character!


I'm glad that the story flowed well & the action wasn't at all forced!! I'm also happy to know that you liked the scenery and that it came to life for you! This is good to know! :)

Thank you again for both reading and the review! :edgy: :phoenix:
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