I object! That was...objectionable!
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So, for my first custom, how did I do? What should I work on? Any advice? I know the neck looks a little ragged, since I free-handed it and my hand was already getting kinda sore. But other than that...?
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She is missing "the bones near the chest"
...i dunno what they are called...
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She is missing "the bones near the chest"
...i dunno what they are called...
I believe Herr Zinle is referring to her collarbones, ja?
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Well...it's hard to say =)
Like I said, I dunno. Could be.
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Good sprite^^
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1. Her neck is in the wrong place - it should meet her head further back on the right. Look at Iris for reference.
2. This could probably be fixed with shading, but the line of her cleavage is bugging me.
3. Her hand is a different skin tone than her face/body.
4. Her hair on the right side - it's a little unclear where it's supposed to be sitting in contrast with her shoulder. There are a few pixels that go over the shoulder, but it looks like it's supposed to be behind her body.
I don't think the rosy cheeks are a problem.
Like the eye modifications!
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