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Ooh, thanks! They're just so cute <3

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How about a Klavier/Polly fiction?


I'm gonna do one for the contest being held over on LJ, but I haven't completely decided what's gonna happen in it. Lots of angst and boy love, probably. :hotti: I haven't really decided yet if I really like them as a pairing, so... what better way than to experiment with a fic!


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i would love it if you wrote a Apollo/Ema :D but only if you want to. Your fanfics are awesome. Very Creative
I want to take you to... was pure lolz. I love how you wrote Apollo's uneasy state, Great Job
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Thanks! I don't really have any plans to do Apollo/Ema, but... you never know when inspiration strikes :B For now I like her better with Klavier <3

ANYWAY, WELL FROGS UPDATE!

http://community.livejournal.com/gyakuten_saiban/672819.html

Chapter 8 :D
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Don't know if you're taking requests but ever thought of doing a Gant x Krissi or Miles x Fran?
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I swear, one of these days I'm going to camp out infront of my comp with nothing but a keg of gatorade and just read ALL of your fanfics in one fell swoop.

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Sorry, but I don't take requests. I've got too many fics in my head to write as is @_@~

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I've been following your stuff as a lurker as of late, but I have to say I REALLY like Well Frogs. Your sense of emotion in it is uncanny.
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Amazing work as always! This chapter was certainly worth the wait. I'm already waiting anxiously for the next update. :)
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Thanks! I don't really have any plans to do Apollo/Ema, but... you never know when inspiration strikes :B For now I like her better with Klavier <3

ANYWAY, WELL FROGS UPDATE!

http://community.livejournal.com/gyakuten_saiban/672819.html

Chapter 8 :D


:D AWESOME!!
I printed out all the chapters, and now I have like, 70 pages of Well Frogs in a folder, waiting for me to force a friend to read it.

This fic got me hooked on KlavierXEma and VeraXWocky XD
Vera and Wocky gave me the idea of Vera X Larry XD
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Thanks guys :D I'm glad you're enjoying Well Frogs so much. It's already turning out a lot longer than I anticipated, so I hope I'm able to keep it up and interesting through the end XD;; (they were supposed to be in court by chapter 11 but that's not gonna happen >.>)
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I read all of well frogs through thrice. There's no stopping me now. :pearl:

I love your style of writing. Actually your fics were the ones that converted me to Klavier/Ema. I hope you write more.
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:pearly: Yay! New chappie of well frogs. I'm getting all excited about how it will turn out. My favorite parts of the story are all the Phoenix and Apollo interacting parts. You're doing a good job with Nick and showing his GS4 personality and at displaying Apollo. In the game, Apollo kind of annoyed me (what a stick in the mud >,<) But, in this story he is in character and likable, so thats nice.

[spoiler]The parts where he is thinking about family and being alone (concerning Vera) were really fun to read and you're doing a great job of incorporating the bracelets.[/spoiler]

I wonder if now that they are working together the magatama will come into play?

Anyway, as I said before I love seeing Phoenix and Apollo interact, so I really loved in chapter 8 when Phoenix asked Polly that favor. I could picture it so well, Nick seemed so tense!

Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing those too work together, so please update as soon as possible. The anticipation I feel waiting for the new chapter is too much!
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Chapter 9 is up! I'm sorry DSL, I couldn't wait :< But if you still have notes for me, I'll go back and fix things~

http://community.livejournal.com/gyakuten_saiban/757149.html

Not much happens in this chapter 'cause it's mostly just evidence, but I hope you still like it XD;;;
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Chapter 9 is up! I'm sorry DSL, I couldn't wait :< But if you still have notes for me, I'll go back and fix things~

http://community.livejournal.com/gyakuten_saiban/757149.html

Not much happens in this chapter 'cause it's mostly just evidence, but I hope you still like it XD;;;
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Ha! That was great! The tension between Phoenix and Klavier in this chapter was fun and it's nice to get a more detailed explanation for Phoenix's attitude towards Klavier in the story. As always, all the characters are portrayed perfectly. Your writing is simply incredible!
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New chapter! Yay!!<3

Thank you Croik> <

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I'm sorry for asking you to do Nick/Maya, Croik. TT_TT

Anyway, I love the way these are written!! I don't like the pairings but... Meh.

Oh, more Klavier/Ema, please!!

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Well, you have me hooked on Well Frogs. Well done :edgy: Chapter 9 was amazing, and I hope that a chapter 10 is on the way...?
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Chapter 10 is up! I can now say I'm prettttty sure they'll actually get to court by chapter 13, hahaha.

http://community.livejournal.com/gyakuten_saiban/809266.html
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That was such an awesome chapter!
:D *Fangirling over KlavierXEma fluff*
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T_T I could cry. It was a new chapter and I read it. AND THEN IT WAS OVER!! :Max-Cry: Such a tragedy! I really liked were you're going and the Ema/Klavier fluff was mighty nice, but I want MOAR! (more everything, not just the Klav/Ema)

As always it was fantastic. Croik, you never cease to amaze. Please update soon! I'm on the edge of my seat here.
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Thanks guys :D There's not going to be much Klav/Ema in chapter 11, but definitely in 12. I hope you'll like it~
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Double post for update! Chapter 11 is now up~

http://www.croik.com/fanfics/gyakusai/foxy11.htm

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Croik,

I really enjoy reading all of your fanfictions. You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character. I can't wait until you post the next chapter of Well Frogs; it's a well crafted story that is getting very interesting. Any plans to raise it to the next rating level? The world needs more explicit Klavier/Ema action, right?
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I also enjoy your Phoenix/Edgeworth and Kristoph/Phoenix stories. Your characterization of Kristoph is especially spot on. I wasn't a yaoi fan before, but your stories have converted me. Although, I would like to see your take on Edgeworth or Kristoph with a female companion. In fact, if you were to write something of that nature it would be awesome. I think it would make some of the Edgeworth or Kristoph fangirls very happy. :edgy:
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Croik,

I really enjoy reading all of your fanfictions. You do a very good job of keeping everyone in character. I can't wait until you post the next chapter of Well Frogs; it's a well crafted story that is getting very interesting. Any plans to raise it to the next rating level? The world needs more explicit Klavier/Ema action, right?
:sassy: :kyouya-pull:

I also enjoy your Phoenix/Edgeworth and Kristoph/Phoenix stories. Your characterization of Kristoph is especially spot on. I wasn't a yaoi fan before, but your stories have converted me. Although, I would like to see your take on Edgeworth or Kristoph with a female companion. In fact, if you were to write something of that nature it would be awesome. I think it would make some of the Edgeworth or Kristoph fangirls very happy. :edgy:

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Thank you very much! I'm not intending to make Well Frogs NC-17, but even so

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I wasn't a yaoi fan before, but your stories have converted me.


Bwa ha ha, I love hearing that. I'm flattered! :hotti:

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Although, I would like to see your take on Edgeworth or Kristoph with a female companion. In fact, if you were to write something of that nature it would be awesome. I think it would make some of the Edgeworth or Kristoph fangirls very happy. :edgy:


I'd do it if I could think of a woman I thought worked well with either of them. Especially Kristoph :gregory: But if you have suggestions I'll of course listen~

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I'd do it if I could think of a woman I thought worked well with either of them. Especially Kristoph :gregory: But if you have suggestions I'll of course listen~


Now that you have made me think about it, I realize the options for both men are very limited. However I will still make suggestions, and provide evidence (mostly speculation) as to why I think either Edgeworth or Kristoph would at least spend one evening with the ladies in question. I apologize for how epically long this is, but I tend to be very verbose in my arguments (blame my literature background, its our job to turn molehills into mountains.)
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Some of the characters suggested do not have counterparts in Apollo Justice Arc. In any of those cases, you will just have to use your imagination to picture how characters would interact.

I'll put the separate parts into spoiler tags to save some space on this post. Also, many of the arguments contain spoilers for several of the games. Avoid reading them if you don't want to know what happens to a character (assuming someone other than Croik cares to read this insane post).

Spoiler: Edgeworth Arguement
In some ways Kristoph is the easier one. Although he has fewer women to choose from, his personality lends himself to more women than Edgeworth. On the other hand, Miles has more choices because there are more women in the Phoenix Arc. However, many of those women are just wrong for Edgeworth.

Maya Fey-This is the first pairing I shipped in the fandom, so I admit to being biased about this one. However, I believe the game gives very subtle hints that Edgeworth is at least infatuated with her. He posts her bail in PW (Case 4), and organizes the rescue mission in JFA (Case 4). Moreover, he worries about her in TT, “I wonder if Maya is alright?” Edgeworth does not refer to her in the polite terms of Miss Fey, but in the personal terms of her first name (JFA Case 4 and TT Case 5). I don't think he refers to anyone else, except Franziska, in these terms. While he is cold, stoic, and distant Maya is bright, emotional, and open. This usually leads people to avoid this pairing as impossible because they think these two have nothing in common. However, Edgeworth and Maya share a common tragedy of growing up without their parents. Also note that the people who raised them tried to ruin their lives. Maya and Edgeworth also are fans of The Steel Samurai. This doesn't mean they would get married and live happily every after, but I do think that they might at least go on a few dates. Who else is going to go with him to the Steel Samurai Fan convention? Gumshoe? In the detective's dreams maybe.

Franziska von Karma- He is more comfortable around her than any other character. I can see Franziska trying to seduce him, but he would probably have to be inebriated to submit. And we all know what happens to guys that have had too much to drink.

Ema Skye (PW or AJ)-We all know how much she adored him in 1-5, but does he like her back? It's hard to tell if his wry comments were meant as an attempt to flirt with Ema or as a serious reaction to the accidental rude comments she made about him and his personal affects (“real stuck-up jerk” and his “nasty, red sports car”). When he realizes who Ema is he comments, “Ah, now I remember. You've ... really grown” (PW Case 5). So Edgeworth at least notices that she is transitioning from a child into an adult. Maybe she would attempt to get with him when she returns from her stint in school abroad.

Mia Fey(Young or just before her demise)-She thinks that Edgeworth is cute, “[With] that cute face, I didn't expect him to be so sneaky” (TT Case 4). I can see her teasing him in the halls of the courthouse between trials (she learned from the master after all). Although, any encounter between these two would probably be of the angry variety. Mia would question Edgeworth's evidence, and he would wonder where her 'boy toy' was. This would escalate and end in post trial, bathroom stall lovin'. Of course, she would not cheat on Diego, so most of this would happen after he is out of the picture.

Lana Skye-Since she is Edgeworth's superior, there is a possibility that they would have to work late hours on some trial details. He also mentions that Lana seems to look out for him (PW Case 5). Sometimes you cannot help when you get aroused, and I'm sure she would much rather bed Edgeworth than Gant.

Angel Star-She was still a detective when he started working at the Prosecutor's office. We know that Gumshoe likes to pal around with Edgeworth, but what about Angel? Maybe she and Edgeworth worked together on several cases before Angel was fired. Again, you cannot control your arousal, and we all know there is nothing hotter than graphic, crime scene action. Angel also delivers her lunches to the Prosecutor's Office. Who is to say that they wouldn't share an encounter in his sexy, red sports car?

Adrian Andrews-He was very mean to her on the witness stand in JFA, but he was looking for the truth. Like Edgeworth, Adrian is set free by the truth. Since they have that in common, then maybe they could share an evening together. Either that or share one because they can't be with who they really want (Thank you kink meme!)

Dahlia Hawthorne-I can see her trying to seduce young Edgeworth, and for some reason I can see him submitting to her. He is young after all, and sometimes the only way to learn from your mistakes is to be burned by them.

OC Secretary-Someone has to be doing all of the filing in his office, and it's definitely not Gumshoe. I know in the fanon he has Hannah, but you could make up your own secretary if you wanted. Who would know Edgeworth better than the woman who makes his tea and orders his lunches? He probably works many late nights, and I don't think she would mind keeping him company. (Could possibly work for an OC witness as well).


Spoiler: Kristoph Arguement
I have always seen Kristoph's sexuality as means to further his own agenda rather than him being gay or straight. If he needed to be with a woman to further his own plans, Kristoph would be with one. That being said, I think it is slightly plausible for him to be (at least for one night) with the following characters.

Franziska(PW or AJ)-Both of them are prim and proper characters that do not suffer fools. I think she could be blinded by his charm, but after a while she would see through his facade.

Alita Tiala-Maybe before Apollo Justice she needed to help Wocky (or her boss) with some legal matter and came to Kristoph for help. Since we know that Kristoph's moral compass in askew, the situation could probably lead itself to some sort of blackmail, and maybe he would use sex as insurance.

Ema(AJ)-She can do that eerie impression of him (Case 4). How did she learn it? I can see him attempting a romance with her just to hurt Phoenix. She might fall for him because he is not a glimmerous fop like Klavier.

Dahlia(PW)-It would have to be some freaky AU situation, but they are both evil and manipulative so I think they could work.

Maya(AJ)-Nothing more than Kristoph using her to hurt Phoenix.

Angel Star(PW or AJ)-She delivers lunches to various places in their town, who is to say that she wouldn't attempt to make him "yet another boyfriend."

Lana Skye(PW or AJ)-Both have siblings with bright personalities. Maybe they would bond over having to balance taking care of their siblings while maintaining a career.

OC Secretary-He is lonely in his office, and I would imagine him having a hot secretary. He would probably ask her to take some dictation, but it would end with some hot, on top of the desk action. (Could also work with an OC client).


I apologize for this being such a long post, but I hope this will save us some posts in the long run because now I won't have to defend my ideas since I gave you my reasons why I think it would work. Of course, I'm sure you have reasons to refute everyone of these, but I wouldn't be doing my job properly if I didn't give you my evidence (okay, most of it was really speculation).

I also apologize for all of the sexual innuendo in this post. Since this forum is a mixed group of ages, I didn't know what was appropriate to post, and I didn't want to get band for being explicit. That, and it was fun trying to think of other ways to say sex.

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Well, I guess if you do not get inspired by these pairing suggestions, you could at least give us a helping of Kristoph/Edgeworth. If there are any girls you think deserve their day in court, I would be more than happy to plead their case. This was rather fun to write. In fact, I think I can expand my argument for Edgeworth and Maya to essay format. I don't think think the infatuation is one sided. :jazzedgy: :-P
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Hmmmm I dunno, I don't really find any of those particlarly eye-catching. I'm pretty picky when it comes to het XD;;;. I don't like anything that involves too much of an age gap (unless the woman is older), especially where the teenaged characters like Maya and Fran are concerned. Which is why the only het ships I really go for are things like Ron/Dessie, Klavier/Ema, Wocky/Vera etc. I did go through an Edgeworth/Adrian phase after JFA but I passed out of it before getting around to writing anything XD;;;

I really hope Kenji gives us some more female characters outside of Keygirl, 'cause the GS spunky teen routine has sooooo gotten old to me. Needs more mature women :<
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I guess you can't fault me for trying, and I don't really see you as the type to turn Phoenix into a girl (a la Ranma 1/2) just to put either Edgeworth or Kristoph with a female companion.

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I hope so too. At least give us someone who is 23 or older. That seems to be the magic age of maturity in the PW universe.
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D: The Phoenix Wright fanfiction bug has bitten me again! >w< Some Well Frogs would really rock, but alas, the new chapter is not out yet....

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Gah, Croik, why are your fics so awesome!?!?!
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Chapter 12 is finally up! Sorry about the long wait, it's been a busy summer~

http://www.croik.com/fanfics/gyakusai/foxy12.htm

I'm not posting it on LJ anymore, so if you know anyone that's been following it there, they'll have to get it from The Pit or my site. I've been posting it on the Objection archive too~

Chapter 13 is gonna be mostly Klav and Ema, and then it's (finally) off to trial!
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Good chapter. I can't wait until to find out what really happened.

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I'm really looking forward to chapter 13 now! I hope you can update soon.
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Phew, at last. Here's chapter 13, the last "investigation phase" before the trial starts. Kyouya and Akane get some alone time 8D

http://www.croik.com/fanfics/gyakusai/foxy13.htm

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I really loved the Kyouya/Akane scene. Its paced perfectly and the interuption was well timed. My favorite part was the Akane's thoughts about "American men and their. . ." Maybe Kyouya is too much man for her, after all?

I also love you characterization of Takita. I've said this before, but I'll say it again, I never liked that character before I read this story. Now I see him in a whole new light. I guess the Japanese version is more tolerable to me than the American one.

I hope we can expect more soon because this is one excellent story.
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Nice chapter!! Wooh!! *twitch* SOrry, I just read all your chapters at once and my eyes are still bloodshot... and I liked the Klavier/Ema or Kyouya/Akane scene, it was nice.
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Thanks guys! I've been pretty busy lately (just moved into a new house :D) but I've already started writing the first day of court. I'll try to get it up soon!
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Croik wrote:
Thanks guys! I've been pretty busy lately (just moved into a new house :D) but I've already started writing the first day of court. I'll try to get it up soon!


I hope this move is a congratulatory one, and I anxiously await the update. However, I do not mind waiting for it because I know these things take time.
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Sorry I don't have any Well Frogs updates just yet (I haven't given it up I swear...!) but I do have two small one shots to share.

PUNCHFACE. Edgeworth pays Phoenix a visit after 4-1. Rated PG, gen. Titled thus because...I couldn't think of anything better.

The Gesture, Kristoph/Phoenix/Iris threesome, NC-17. Kinky dream sequence.

Enjoy~ :edgy:
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Croik haz fanfic!?

I must read!

*Reads*

*Dies*

Hooray for AA erotic stories, I read a few, the one-timers. My favourite so far was 'Take you back to 2024', although it questioned my interpretation of Klavier's sexuality.

Now... I gotta get reading the big long ones, then I'll submit a proper review. :hotti:
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