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My first sprite comic - The TrialTopic%20Title

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I was bored today and decided to make a sprite comic. I couldn't find proper textboxes, so they suck a little. All the sprites are from http://www.court-records.net.
Spoiler: Big image, GS3 spoiler sprites
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It isn't very good, but I like the idea. Hope no one have thought of it before, even though they probably have. You're free to do it better. Don't get it? Watch this video. (Warning, it is kind of disturbing)
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Umm... Nice try.

I recommend a better layout... It's to long (up and down size.) Since you made this a quite long strip you should put the panels next to each other like 3 across.

I also recommend it to not be so confusing. x_X
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WilliamPetty wrote:
Umm... Nice try.

I recommend a better layout... It's to long (up and down size.) Since you made this a quite long strip you should put the panels next to each other like 3 across.

I also recommend it to not be so confusing. x_X

Was it confusing because you didn't get it, or was it just confusing?

You're probably right about the layout, although I prefer it this way.
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I found it... hard to read.
The text boxes can be found here: http://www.court-records.net/rips.htm
Please keep with the comic-book style. I couldn't focus much on the text because of these two. :uramidn:
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It's a great idea, and good choice of characters. I think it would have done better as a movie, though.
(For anyone who didn't get it, it's a song from The Wall.)
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Avvy and sig by Topaz Fey. Franziska von Karma is sexiness on legs. :ka-whip:
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Thank you, I agree. I really liked the idea, but I'm not good at making this kind of stuff. Someone should make an animation of it. And regarding the characters, they were hard to chose. I mean, there are not many schoolmasters in the AA games. And why is Oldbag Terry's mother? Um. Just thought it could work. So, anyone, feel free to make a flash of it (it would definetly own my version).
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