Warning: Major AJ Spoilerz and INSANITY!!!

This is my first sprite comic I really like it, even if it is mine....


The locations and all the sprites came from CR. (Apollo may look a bit short in some of the panels 'cause his sprites only include his sweator some times, so I had to cut them short so they had a flat bottom)

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Last edited by Bad Player on Sun Jun 14, 2009 7:44 pm, edited 3 times in total.

Ha, I like the use of Apollo's expressions, expecially when he's takling about his own physique.

If you want him taller, couldn't you potentially use the legs from the bottom of his normal standing sprite and paste them underneath his vest?

Anyway, just posting to say that I, for one, click to go straight to new topics from the main board where topic titles are truncated, so all I saw was "Phoenix Breaks the News (" from the front page... in other words, nothing about spoilers. Luckily I've already completed AJ or I would have been all "AHKGHGSNUUUUU" but maybe you should state again that there are spoilers in the topic itself, if only for my own peace of mind.

... Man, I love how straight plays the whole situation. He sure mellowed out when he became a hobo, yeah?

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Thx for commenting! ^_^



Thanks. If there was one panel in the comic where I wasn't really sure if I had used the right sprite, it was probably that one. And my favorite panel is the last one, so (when you first glance at it, it looks like he's crying! xD)



Wow, great idea! Too lazy to change this comic tho. Next time I do one, tho



Fixed that. Thanks



Sure did Trucy is also pretty nonchalant about it too.

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OMG, I lol'd irl when I was done reading it.

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This is a funny comic, but I do have one criticism. The panels just keep going across the screen. I think it would look better if the panels went down the page in a traditional comic style.

Keep up the good work.

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Yeah, yeah, I know, but: 1. I'm too lazy to make text boxes. It's easier for me just to use the space underneath each panel. 2. I don't want people to skip ahead and have it ruined It's easy for that to happen when it's in a traditional style, but harder when it's just in a line.

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I loled ^^ Excellent use of sprites XD Makes me want to make one :)

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my sis and i both lol'ed after reading this! very funny.

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