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I absolutely loved this idea and this first one-shot! It was quite the sad and beautiful story. Others could debate with you endlessly why Dahlia turned out the way she did, but that doesn't matter. I really liked this one-shot and I can't wait to see more!!
By the way, what sister pairs are you planning to do?
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I thought it may be neat if you had ideas for a Pearl/Iris one. Like, after Pearl finds out that Iris is her sister

But this is your story :edgy: Just thought I'd put it out there.
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...I cried.

Wonderful. Can't wait to see the next one.
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Caelestis: Thank you so much! ^^ I'm very glad you liked this one
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Well, currently, I'm planning for two chapters of Lana and Ema, one from each of their perspectives, and the same with Mia and Maya. I love your idea though, and if I can come up with anything, I'll be sure to let you know :will:


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...I cried.

Wonderful. Can't wait to see the next one.

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Oh my. It's so lovely and sad. I love it! ^_^ Very nice work.
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It didn't drive me to tears, but it came close. I could definitely feel Iris's sadness in all that Dahlia had done.
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Ngggawwwww That was so sweet. you're such a great writer and your ideas are great. Yet another brilliant cute story! Can't wait for the next sisters story!
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Hey guys, I've decided to be a little more organized this time, so you'll see that I've updated the first post with my second chapter. The spoiler tags make it much easier to organize :edgy:

Thanks to everyone who gave such sweet reviews - they always put a smile on my face, and make my day! ^^
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I know I wrote a review on Objection! but because i am a review w*&$% :april: I am going to say something here as well! I really like these stories and I can't wait to read the one in Ema's POV :scientific:

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Even tho Gant :gant-clap: ruined alot of lives :edgeworth: :jake: :neil2: :lunches: :lana:, and I do hate him, (with not as much wrath as :that-b-word: ) he still might be my favorite witness!



Thanks for writing such inspirational stories! LOL **wink wink** ~nudge nudge~ :pearl:
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You really have a knack for capturing emotions well. I love how you handled Lana's inner turmoil; truly transferring it to the reader through your words. Excellent work!
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You really have a knack for capturing emotions well. I love how you handled Lana's inner turmoil; truly transferring it to the reader through your words. Excellent work!

I still have so much to learn, but thank you :minuki: I was a little anxious about it not being emotionally real enough, so thank you so much for the reassurance ^^

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I know I wrote a review on Objection! but because i am a review w*&$% :april: I am going to say something here as well! I really like these stories and I can't wait to read the one in Ema's POV :scientific:

I'm still struggling a bit with how to write Ema's chapter...I want it to be happier, but I'm not sure if I can pull it off since this hasn't been the greatest week for me...
But I'll keep trying! :phoenix:
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:pealshock: Awww I'm sorry you're not haveing a good week *hugs*

Hhhmmmm....
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Ema took one last look around the lab to make sure everything that was supposed to be turned off was off, then gathered her belongings. Suddenly in a whirl of bland hair and purple suitcoat, Ema was being dipped by Klavier.
"Fraulein," He muttered. Her heart skipped a beat. "You work too much." He then placed a soft kiss against her lips and she gasped. He dared to take it further by exploring her lips with his tongue. She was so shocked that she parted them easily and let him in. He tasted of Cinnamon and, was that cloves? She let him explore her mouth and hold her in his strong arms.
Then just as sudden as he appeared, he had her back on her feet and was kissing her hand.
"Adieu, Fraulein!" He flashed her a million dollar smile and disappeared.
She blinked and grabbed her pack of Snakoos and started munching feverishly.


I hope that made your week a little better! I know it would mine, if Klavier did that to me!!

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:pealshock: Awww I'm sorry you're not haveing a good week *hugs*

Hhhmmmm....
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Ema took one last look around the lab to make sure everything that was supposed to be turned off was off, then gathered her belongings. Suddenly in a whirl of bland hair and purple suitcoat, Ema was being dipped by Klavier.
"Fraulein," He muttered. Her heart skipped a beat. "You work too much." He then placed a soft kiss against her lips and she gasped. He dared to take it further by exploring her lips with his tongue. She was so shocked that she parted them easily and let him in. He tasted of Cinnamon and, was that cloves? She let him explore her mouth and hold her in his strong arms.
Then just as sudden as he appeared, he had her back on her feet and was kissing her hand.
"Adieu, Fraulein!" He flashed her a million dollar smile and disappeared.
She blinked and grabbed her pack of Snakoos and started munching feverishly.


I hope that made your week a little better! I know it would mine, if Klavier did that to me!!

:sassy: :rock'n:


Aww, Pearls, thanks for the sweet gesture :edgy: Don't worry, I'm feeling much better now ^^
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OMG that was sooo cute! I loved it, it was so hard not to squeal (Im recovering from apendicitus and squealing and laughing hurts T_T) They only thing that bothered me was when they go to the hospital park is that she woulve had an IV and other stuffs. an she wouldve been in a hospital gown and possibly nothing else O_o but who needs realism - we have fluff! :D
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Okay, I've posted up Chapter 3 of Mia and Maya.
I hope you guys like it!
And I hope everyone had a nice Christmas :keiko:
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:acro: So very sweet! Mia's emotion was captured well, and Maya's innocent character was, as well. It was heart-touching, to say the least. I can't wait to see more!
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These stories are adorable! C:

I would've loved to see an Iris and Dahlia one from Dahlia's perspective (slowly crumbling to darkness, and as how Iris saw Dahlia as her strength, Dahlia remembers Iris words as her conscience. They'd go together in a way...)

Anyways, I can't wait to see Emas and Mayas POV story. :)
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That's beautiful. It appeals to so many different emotions throughout, something which tends to be difficult, but that you handled very well even in a limited space. It was just very nicely balanced and terribly sweet. Nice work.
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Heyyyyyy! :edgy:
So I've finally managed to write another chapter to this, and as usual, I've updated the first post :)
I hope everyone's doing well :gant:

And to Caelestis, Sara and Mia, thank you all so much for your reviews - you guys made me so happy :keiko:
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Niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiccccceeeee.


Yeah, I loved all of them (I read fast if I'm in the mood to read. All four Twilight books in 11 hours straight? No problem.)

I always liked Ema and Lana more than Mia and Maya, because, if Maya really wanted to, she could talk to Mia via Pearl. But Ema had to go through living alone with Lana when her parents died at a young age, followed by Lana going cold and Ema losing her only remotely-parental figure in her life at the tender age of 14, recovering her but having to live in Europe away from all family and friends, and comes back to find that she failed her forensics exam and is not living the life she envisioned, helping out Phoenix and such. In Mia's case, we never got attached to her, and she never really 'died'.

Anyway...

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Nice-nice! I knew you were going to use that "They became stars in the sky" once in this. But I had thought that it would be for Maya (she lost pretty much everyone.) Could the next one actually be about constellations? :o
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I really like the idea of one-shots about sisters.

It'd be great if you did one for Ini and Mimi!!
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awwwwwwwwwwwww these are so sweet! i just read all four, and i loved them all! they are so cute... is there gonna be another one?? =O i sure hope so!
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i like the idea of a pearl/iris one too, cos they never really interact in the game and it would be nice to read about them! although i'm not sure about mimi and ini... they dont seem like particularly interesting characters for this kinda story, as you never see much of mimi's personality anyway, and ini is just weird. but that's just my opnion, fele free to ignore me!! =P

also i really love the idea of having stars as a theme, its really cute! :maya: xxx
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That's the only way I can express my excitement about your writing! I love the fact that you named Diego's sister Isadora. I caught the (non)reference immedietly, and giggled!

I thought you captured Mia and Diege well, for being little kids. The emotions and your dialogue are very evoking; I almost had tears in my eyes reading your prologue! :larry:

I can't express how inspiring and moving your stories are! Thank you for writing and being my muse!


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Oh, my only critism would be....I can't wait for the next part!! :yuusaku: That's not a critism is it....
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Aww, Pearls, thanks so much :edgy: It's always nice to get such encouraging comments when starting up a story :P

I'm glad you like Diego and Mia here...I was worried that they were being a little too mature. After all, how do you capture kids discussing death? :yuusaku:

Anyways, thanks again for the constant encouragement :keiko: And I hope to see some of your writing around soon!
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great story so far =D
very cute! i will definately read the next part if you post some more!!! :javado:
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Aww, wow, I loved it! It was so sweet and in charecter! I love yuor stories! Can't wait for the next part!

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Chapter 2's a little shorter, and I'll see if I can write anything more tonight :)

Anyways, enjoy the second chapter (updated in the first post)
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The pancakes were a good choice! LOL! Maya was perfectly in character and the sisterly chat is sweet! I can't wait to read Diego and Mia's meeting!
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i just read chapter 2 - quite short, but i enjoyed it! plus it was nice to read about mia and maya (attorney badge pancakes, lol!)
i'm looking forward to the third chapter! :maya:
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They're all so sweet :pearl: The Maya-Mia one was especially adorable *hugs*
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It wasn't boring, I thought it was sweet! (And this is from someone who has alot of experience of writing boring chapters.)

Good job again!

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Okay, guys, I've updated with Chapter 3!
Check out the first post :)
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Thahah! Don't stop! I really think it's good! And soooooo cute! I wish I could see Mia as a toddler, practically being swallowed by an ivory scarf! <3
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A very big sorry to anyone who has been waiting for an update on "Yours to Keep." I actually had it written a while ago, but because the CR forums were going up and down, I gave up and forgot to post this update here for a really long time.

As you should have noticed, I've reorganized my multichaptered stories here, so you'll find the updated chapter (chapter 4) in the second post. (if you read the yellow text in the first post, you'll know, but I'm now posting links instead of the actual text)

I hope this chapter doesn't disappoint :) Let me know what you think!
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It didn't disappoint!
I thought it was absolutely lovely :maya:

I loved the way they sort of kept the childlike innocence :godot:
The characterisation was great :phoenix:

Yay! Now they know they're destined to be together!
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Yours to Keep has FINALLY been updated with the next chapter.

I'm so sorry for the long wait!

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