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Either that or he could be Lotta/Brushel's trusty sidekick if they ever need his assistance.


Why do I find this so awesome? XD
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:lotta-smug: Better give me an interview, or else... :lotta-angry:
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That makes absolutely no sense...

... but I love it. Gourdy is becomes friends with Lotta and Spark. Quite ironic, considering all the hassle he gets from other Journalists. :3
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That makes absolutely no sense...

... but I love it. Gourdy is becomes friends with Lotta and Spark. Quite ironic, considering all the hassle he gets from other Journalists. :3

This is going to be amazing. X3
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I love the concept art for Gourdy, but one thing is bugging me.
The head, I expected more of a stereotype Nessie head for it rather then a unicorn goat lizard mix, like in the 4 panel comic.
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Gyakuten Phoenix wrote:
Spoiler: IN COLOUR!
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If American McGee made Pokemon- they would probably look like that.
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...

We did it again! We created a new character. XD And we were supposed to be working on the EXISTING characters :3
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Not exactly Gerkuman, true, we created a new character, but, if indeed, he is going to work with Lotta and Brushel, we're not straying from existing characters.
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Ceres wrote:
I love the concept art for Gourdy, but one thing is bugging me.
The head, I expected more of a stereotype Nessie head for it rather then a unicorn goat lizard mix, like in the 4 panel comic.

But but but...! I really liked it's head... :larry:
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Spoiler: ...I was inspired.
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...

*squees*

Edit: Although, Lotta looks a lot like the 6th Doctor.
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Gerkuman wrote:
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*squees*

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..."dies from cuteness overload"
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From the looks of it, so did the thread :D

But, lets take it all from the tops again. We have some backstory for Ms. Maya Fey now, but we do not have anything on CRAVATMAN. This is important. We need to focus on him, and I need to have an MSN team-meeting with my writing staff again. Got some Issue #2 stuff to sort out.
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I can write something about Cravatman, but I need to know something. Is there already something about Gregory and Misty? I really need to to know, because if not, I may have create some new characters. (I know they are side characters, and that we are focusing on existing characters, but those two a very important to Edgeworth's story in the games, so they really need appear somehow in Lawyerman)
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Well, I did come up with a concept of Gregory once, using the supername "Abacus"...

But everyone laughed at me. XD
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Well, I did come up with a concept of Gregory once, using the supername "Abacus"...

But everyone laughed at me. XD


Even if it was meant to be joke, could give me a description? I could any kind of help. I'm also planning to put Riff and Aquinine in Cravatman's backstory somehow, also I am thinking giving a special reason for Cravatman and Commisioner Gumshoe having a bond of trust, but it's a bit difficult since Cravatman is a Tweener, but he is an heroic one, right? Miss Murder and Iris( is everyone okay, with Iris being Lady Life? I'm not sure if the idea has been accepted.) Comet and Jazz will play roles in his story as well, so as you can see writing his backstory might take some time, if you guys don't mind.
One last thing, is there something for Terry? Maybe I won't even put him in the story, but maybe I could come up with something interesting, like maybe Cravatman was originally a villain, but Terry's death made him change him to a Tweener.
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Well, I kind of meant for him to be serious. XD

Gregory Edgeworth is based off of Gregory Peck, who played Atticus Finch, a defense attorney, in To Kill a Mockingbird. "Atticus" sounds like "Abacus" so I used that for the name. I wanted his powers to be related to mathematics, but discussion didn't get very far.

I'm not sure if Terry has been mentioned, but he should just be a regular person.

Do you want to tell us some of the ideas you've got for Edgey?
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Here the start of his story:
Cravatman could be the son of a famed hero(Gregory) and he, Cravatman used to dream to be just like his father.
One day, as child, he see a young kid(Lawyerman) being attacked by some villains and trying to be like his father, Cravatman tries to save him.
He even manages to save him, despite having no powers at that time, but ends up badly hurt, but his heroic act inspires Lawyerman, and the two become fast friends.
This is just the first part, but I still need to add a lots of things (like Butzman, Whiptra, Perfection, Miss Murder and many others)
His story may be a bit large, so I will say again, writing this may take some time, sorry.
Please read my fic, trust me you will like it, if you read until the latest chapter. Forgive my bad grammar, I'm brazilian, so it may hard to read in the beginning, but it get better in later chapters.
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On the subject of Terry: YEEEEEEEESSSSSSS.

How could we not have the poor sod in? He is non-powered, as it happens when hardly anyone knows about supers. (Mia realises her powers after this event).

I got the whole of that bit figured out. Poor Terry. :(
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Does Cravatman already know about his powers by the time Mia realizes her power? If yes, then it would like this:
After seeing Terry suffer in the hands of Miss Murder, he begins to question the way of the villains, so he becomes a Tweener.
Of course, I'm writing this with the assuption that Cravatman being originally a villain, if he isn't, well, I should think of something else...
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Of course, I'm writing this with the assuption that Cravatman being originally a villain, if he isn't, well, I should think of something else...

If Perfection was raising him, then I find that only natural. XD
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He does not know his powers. That's why we're revealing it later on in the comics run. We need to know we've hooked them enough so they'll sit through a non-powered issue. XD

Not that there won't be action. :3
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Remember, a tweener is a ... general term for anyone who is not a straight-up hero or villain.

Cravatman has sides to him that aren't evil, therefore he is a tweener. He moves from villainous tweener to heroic tweener. It'd be weird to make him a complete hero, he's still got rough sides to his personality afterall.
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I MADE THIS BLOODY PROJECT.

OK, now that THAT'S out of the way: Great job, guys! *thumbs up*

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Well, since you're here, I could ask you a question. You see, I planning to write the backstory of Cravatman, but I need to know some things, could Gregory be a hero? It's just, I think it's important for Cravatman's story.
And Gerkuman, maybe Cravatman could recieve the Cravat? I don't know, maybe he recieves from Perfection during the same time Whiptra recieves her whip.
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Hmm...

I can see Greg as a non-powered hero and famed defence attorney. :)
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Maybe he was a defence attorney that used worked with Citro and PAYNE, he could be some some sort of assistant to the heroes, and because of that Miles could spend a lot of time in his childhood with the heroes.
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OK my 2 cents here, Doc to be fair that isnt exactly true, This project was made by several people right at the beginning, its a mutual group project, I agree that you made a contribution by initiating this project, but most off the work was made by others.

On Greg, Hmm...He needs heroic sacrafice wich Miles will misunderstand as Heroes betraying their own kind ( so his mentality changes to more reflect his "evil" tweener position later on) , no?
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Maybe Gregory saves someone(maybe the Yogi :yogi: ), but that person could stab him in the back and kill him, of course Miles sees the whole scene.
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I was rather thinking, What if Gregory died for a certain reason (killed by perfection) but his body was found next to a subconsious Citro (who would feel guilty for not succeeding in saving him for the rest of his life), Miles find them and believe Citro to have killed him, therefor hating most "hero" types from then on, and pushing him in Perfection's arms.
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It's a good idea Ceres, but I was thinking of putting Yogi and Hammond in the story, but I don't know how.
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hmm, Gerk nd i discussed something similair before.
Gerk any help? I'm not sure on what exactly was said? (the whole perfection thing)

About Y&H , hmm, what if it was quite a little battlescene? Yogi betrayed the heroes, leading Perfection to them.
Hammond could be one of the victims. -> first big massacre of Perfection defining his actions from then on.

this is just a suggestion afterall, but what do you think?
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Maybe Hammond betrays Citro, they used to work together after all, and Yogi was a civillian who was caught in the middle of the fight, and that somehow ruins his life? Maybe Gregory and Citro tries to save Miles from Perfection, but accidently kill Yogi's fiancee during the rescuse, also Miles could see the whole scene and misunderstands it, thinking that Citro and Gregory killed Yogi's fiancee on purpose, Yogi could also begin to hate heroes as well.
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Why would Hammond betray them?, according from what i remember Yogi was the one who killed Hammond afterall, who was only doing his job.
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Well, it says in this topic's first post that Hammond is fallen hero, so I thought he could be a traitor, also I thought that maybe it's Hammond the one who killed Yogi's fiancee, but he make it looks that Gregory and Citro were the one who killed her.
He would do all of this because Perfection ordered him, of course.
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So would this mean "The Yogi" should be a Tweener? That would make more sense.
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That's what I was thinking, but he would be neither an heroic or evil tweener, I think that labeling him as the "insane" Tweener, is pretty fitting.
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I forgot how we're using Yogi. From what I remember, he got sent to the mental hospital and the treatments drove him legitamately mad.

I'm still far behind... this isn't a good place to be as head writer :( Can I get a summary of what we have so far, on Cravatman's backstory? Then I can add my opinions.
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Here's part 1 of Cravatman's backstory:

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Miles is the son of Gregory Edgeworth, an important man in the world of law who allies himself with Citro and PAYNE, he helps the heroes whenever they have some legal problem and represents them in the city council, because he is constantly with the heroes, Miles grew up surrounded by heroes and he yearns to become hero like the people who works with his father. One day, when returning from school, a boy(Larry) bumbs into Miles, Larry begs Miles for help, saying that his friend is trouble. Trying to be a hero, Miles accept to help him. When he arrives at the place where Larry's friend is, he see another boy(Phoenix) being attacked by some people(maybe school bullies) and rushes with Larry to help him. He and Larry manages to save Phoenix, and the three ends up badly hurt, but Phoenix and Larry are impressed by Miles's bravery and the three become fast friends. The three mantain their friendship for a year, but at the end of said year, Gregory during a mission, gets caught in a fight between Citro and Perfection at the City Hall, trying to help Citro, Gregory grabs a fire extinguisher from a nearby wall, and hits Perfection with it, Perfection is badly hurt by that blow and is almost arrested because of that, but manages to escape in the last secon, but not before swearing revenge against Gregory.


End of part 1 of Cravatman's backstory.
What do you guys think?
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