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Right, well.. this is a sprite I was working on, apparently. I just wanted to know your thoughts. Does she look too much like Ema? Does it look... bad? I would like to know on how to improve on it, but I'm pretty happy with her appearance overall.

Oh, and I'll change the white background later.
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Try using multiple shades on the hair!
And no it doesn't look too much like Ema.
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That's pretty cool.

How does the hair not have multiple shades?
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Thanks, guys! :maya:

Well, I like having her hair dark, but I'll try and see what I can do. :)
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It looks really nice.
Although the hair blends to much with the inside coat.
Maybe choose a different shade for one of them.
You could customise it a bit more to not look like Ema so much, but it still looks really good =]
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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
It looks really nice.
Although the hair blends to much with the inside coat.
Maybe choose a different shade for one of them.
You could customise it a bit more to not look like Ema so much, but it still looks really good =]


Thank you!
Oh, I see. Hmm. I'll do that!
I'll make the shirt lighter..
Thanks, I appreciate it! <3
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I think if you want to make sure it doesn't look like Ema, you should edit the face some, as well (other than eye color). :3 Maybe swap out the eyes/nose/mouth for someone else's? Or even freehanding changes.
But nice job! She's cute. x3
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Yuanfang wrote:
I think if you want to make sure it doesn't look like Ema, you should edit the face some, as well (other than eye color). :3 Maybe swap out the eyes/nose/mouth for someone else's? Or even freehanding changes.
But nice job! She's cute. x3


Alright, that's a good idea. :D Thank you so much!
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Its good, I would reccommend Yuanfang's above advice but also, for some reason, her coat billows out on the left side... you should fix that.
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Percei wrote:
Its good, I would reccommend Yuanfang's above advice but also, for some reason, her coat billows out on the left side... you should fix that.


It was originally like that on Ema's sprite... I'll try to do something about that too though, thank you :)

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I edited the eyes, the buttons, the coat, the shirt, the shading, the pants and belt... I'll work on the nose and her mouth...

I'll do your suggestion soon, Percei :D
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OH and I forgot something.
You might want to smooth out the outline on the coat.
It looks to line like, not coat like.
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SupwithyouSammie wrote:
OH and I forgot something.
You might want to smooth out the outline on the coat.
It looks to line like, not coat like.


True, true!

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Here's an updated one, I added some things and edited it around and I like it even better now.

I hope this is what you think of as 'coat-like', (so far) SupwithyouSammie. I think it is, but I'm still not that done with it yet, actually.

I'm still going to edit the eye and mouth, though.

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