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Kinda proud of this

Wed Jan 07, 2009 11:15 am

Babtest

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Hey,
I finished my first sprite edit yesterday,and since I´m really happy with how it came out i wanted to show it :

I really like it, but I know its not perfect.
Any suggestions what to make better?

Last edited by Babtest on Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Re: Kinda proud of this

Wed Jan 07, 2009 12:03 pm

Greeny

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That is something to be proud of. :P

Anyways maybe you could try and edit the shadowing on the sweater
a little more because the angle is diffirent than the original sprite...

Other than that I don't really think I have any suggestions.

Re: Kinda proud of this

Wed Jan 07, 2009 2:30 pm

Ceres

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Hmm, Pretty nice sprite you have there.
At first sight, nothing really wrong with it, but perhaps the red colour is a bit too dominating? (a softer red would perhaps be better?)
Also, perhaps a darker outline colour for the hair could be an improvement.

But i'm nitpicking here, nice work, keep it up.

Re: Kinda proud of this

Wed Jan 07, 2009 3:30 pm

Bad Player

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Yep, that is a really nice sprite!

Greeny is right, that the shadow of the sweater is a little off.

The only other thing I can see is that you might want to give her hair a darker outline, so you can see her hairline because her light hair really blends in with her light skin.

Credit to Evolina for the sig+avatar!

Re: Kinda proud of this

Wed Jan 07, 2009 4:17 pm

Babtest

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Thank you all :edgy:

I´m gonna work on the jacket-shadow and the hair. I thought it lookt too light,but wasn´t sure what do do.

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