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Can somebody rate this sprite I made please?Topic%20Title
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Hey there!

Gender: Female

Location: England :]

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:14 pm

Posts: 8

It's taken me about 2 days XD I've only got one emotion so far, but I've made it totally from scratch ^^

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Any tips to improve?
Re: Can somebody rate this sprite I made please?Topic%20Title
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Will Shorthand- Scrivener Extrodinaire

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wow ok,

First the detail in the hair is phenominal, same goes for the upper torso specificall the chest well done. However the shading on the lower half of the shirt needs improvement.

I'm glad that the jaw is moving with the mouth, as most PW sprites do. On the topic of the head. Its really big. The back of the head protruds to high past the front of the head and the forehead is large.

Love the nose, love the mouth the rest of the face requires some extra shading though.

Rating: 6/10

Awsome work, is this your first shot?
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Re: Can somebody rate this sprite I made please?Topic%20Title
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Hey there!

Gender: Female

Location: England :]

Rank: Suspect

Joined: Mon Jan 12, 2009 7:14 pm

Posts: 8

It's my first proper sprite attempt, although I have done some pixel work before :] But it's mainly small scale stuff XD
I got fed up of shading when I got to the shirt, so I sort of rushed it I'm afraid >.<

But thanks for the advice ^^ I'll try not to rush the shirt next time. And thanks for the complement about the hair :scientific:
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