Re: [22/10/08] 'Lawyerman!' - Part Deux
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I was suggesting Executive Bling earlier, but that's really close. XD
Edit: Over an MSN conversation I came up with "Splendiferous" and Gerk liked it. :P
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I propose we need to figure out what arcs and potential filler there will be in chronological order, and then we figure out which characters are going to be in what. Then we work up from there, discussing and developing characters and storyline as we go.
Here's the beginning parts. This part is pretty much completed in planning, apparently, but it's a good place to start as any.
The Wriggler (Stand-Alone)
Characters:
Lawyerman
Comet
The Wriggler
Butzman
Commissioner Gumshoe
Miss Fortune
The Mayor
The Dahlia Incident (Stand-Alone)
Characters:
Lawyerman
Comet
THE PAYNE
Miss Murder
The SPLENDIFEROUS Arc
Characters:
Lawyerman
Comet
Stargazer
SPLENDIFEROUS
Pink
Reflecto
The Commander
Shelly de Killer
Cravatman
Citro
Something like this. We'll need to discuss if we want to change any of this. In particular, the Splendiferous arc. Think someone else would fit in there? What would be their part in the story?
Also, I think Mezzo tried to do something like this before, but I can't find it. ;.;
Edit: Gerk's going to post a summary of what he has for the story so far later, I believe.
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Also, yes, I DID do something like this:
MezzoForte wrote:
For easy sorting pleasure, I've decided to divide the plotline into seperate arcs. It includes arcs we've already settled on, as well as some I made up myself :'D.
These are just suggestions and certantly nothing permanent, but I thought it might make organizing the events of the project a little easier.
Spoiler: Arcs
These are just suggestions and certantly nothing permanent, but I thought it might make organizing the events of the project a little easier.
Though, as you can see, mine are much broader and foucus on splitting the story into...seasons or books, if you will. I much prefer the newer method: it gets straight to the heart of each different "chapter".
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#1: Wriggler kills Cindy, Larry gets blamed, LM and Comet kick Wrigglers Arse, and we find out about the Mayor. It's an introduction to Nick really.
#2: Flashback to state VS. Hawthorn. A switcheroo means that Iris is the one in Jail, and Nick gets her off. But then a witness gets killed by the real Dahlia, and then it's Comet VS Miss Murder. Kristoph Gavin suspects that Nick tampered with the evidence, but Payne goes down for it. Comet takes Nick under her superhero wing.
#3-#x:
I only really planned a few things so far. Big battle between Comet and SPLENDIFEROUS then he kills her. Maya is originally suspected of the murder, Cravatman tries to take him down and sides with Pink. Then it's Nick who gets suspected... and that's as far as I got. I know FF had a grand plan for Redd that she wanted to unleash, and for it to work we're putting in Reflecto in quite a bit early.
That's all I got. <3
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I'd say
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Citro spends his day on the toilet reflecting on the past.
Wocky dies, there was much rejoicing.
That's all I got. <3
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Redd gets Pink to steal Reflecto's monocle, which is said to have unspeakable abilities. SPLENDIFEROUS can concentrate light into the monocle to make a super-powerful deadly heat ray. |D
Edit: .... lol @ Ceres
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A time travel arc. (not coming back from the future like Aeon)
Cliché yes, Fun to come up with, Yes.
I'm not talking back to the future here, but a time line that's predetermined.
The one going back has to set things in motion, however corrupt or evil they may be to keep his reality from turning out differently.
So he's neither a villain nor Hero, just someone who has to set things right.
Hiding in the shadows, manipulating events, etc.
Only in the end we found out who he is, and his true identity will stun friend and foe alike.
There, contributed. ~
Let the time travel (paradox) string of ideas commence!
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Gerkuman wrote:
It's an interesting idea, and one we should definitely discuss :) Thing is though, we need ideas for the early stuff too, otherwise we'll never get to ideas like these. XD
This.
Anyway, I was thinking earlier.... If Reflecto is involved in the SPLENDIFEROUS arc, this could be a good opportunity to introduce COURT and The Soul Captains into the story.
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If Mr. Purple Hair parallels his PWverse self, then he holds some kind of power over parts of the government. The Soul Captains are pretty much part of LMverse's legal system, being founded by COURT and whatnot. So, where I'm going with this is that SPENDIFEROUS has been extorting Reflecto for some reason and needs his special monocle for part of some super villiany plot. Comet finds out about this after tracking SPLENIFEROUS for her own reasons. COURT also finds out about the manipulation of the Soul Captains and tries to stop the plot on their own end.
The other characters get dragged in and that's all I got. :P
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MezzoForte wrote:
I've got an idea. If we're going to add Reflecto in there (I have some badass concept art for him, by the way) I have a theory as to why SPLENDIFEROUS has Pink steal said monocle, besides it having uber awesome unspeakable powah.
If Mr. Purple Hair parallels his PWverse self, then he holds some kind of power over parts of the government. The Soul Captains are pretty much part of LMverse's legal system, being founded by COURT and whatnot. So, where I'm going with this is that SPENDIFEROUS has been extorting Reflecto for some reason and needs his special monocle for part of some super villiany plot. Comet finds out about this after tracking SPLENIFEROUS for her own reasons. COURT also finds out about the manipulation of the Soul Captains and tries to stop the plot on their own end.
The other characters get dragged in and that's all I got. :P
If Mr. Purple Hair parallels his PWverse self, then he holds some kind of power over parts of the government. The Soul Captains are pretty much part of LMverse's legal system, being founded by COURT and whatnot. So, where I'm going with this is that SPENDIFEROUS has been extorting Reflecto for some reason and needs his special monocle for part of some super villiany plot. Comet finds out about this after tracking SPLENIFEROUS for her own reasons. COURT also finds out about the manipulation of the Soul Captains and tries to stop the plot on their own end.
The other characters get dragged in and that's all I got. :P
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Gerkuman wrote:
The problem with that is that we have to start the arc with a stand-alone story. I was hoping to start it with a two parter, sandwich two standalones in the middle, then do another two-parter.
We have to? But since it's an arc, don't all of the issues within it have to be interrelated?
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(And yeah, this is why Mia and Grossberg fell out. They hinted at that in the games, so I thought I'd make that more obvious in the series.)
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Grossberg finds out about the blackmail letters from Redd White for him in Mia's possession almost simulataneously with Mia's death. He's fearful and slightly angry at the situation with the blackmail. He didn't want Mia to find out about all the wrong things he has done, especially concerning a certain *cough* Misty Fey >.> And since the letters were in police possession now, he was too worried about them getting out to the public. Redd White sends him a message to suggest to him to steal it back or else his reputation will be in shambles. Grossberg considers this, but eventually decides to go with his better judgement. He dons his Citro costume once more and helps Lawyerman in the final battle with SPLENDIFEROUS and becomes instrumental to its success. The battle ends with Comet, being channeled through Stargazer, freezing SPLENDIFEROUS in a permanent block of ice.
She turns to Citro and he is afraid to face her at first, but he apologizes for all that he has done and feels terrible that in all of his worrying he never allowed himself time to grieve for Mia. He doesn't expect Mia to forgive her, but she does. She forgives him for everything and gives him a kiss to the forehead before turning back into Maya.
(Sorry I kind of made Citro look kinda pathetic there, again, Ceres. D: But he'll be really badass in the battle!)
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Here are some icons for these guys:
I know you already have one for Aeon, but that one shows his button on his hat, when it should be moved to his chest. So I fixed it. I also don't know how to upload them to the wiki, so if someone wants to do that, it would be cool.
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Yeah, I made both of the current ones. XD That's certainly an improvement on Aeon. I was intending to take off the button but I didn't think I could fix it to look right. How is the new Jazz one really any different?
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....But not only is it that; it's in FULL COLOR!
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THAT IS AWESOME. LEIK, BURNING.
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MezzoForte wrote:
DAYYYY-UMMM
THAT IS AWESOME. LEIK, BURNING.
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THAT IS AWESOME. LEIK, BURNING.
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But she's supposed to be FREEZING! :D *shot*
Thank you so much, Mezzo. ^_^
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fatalfeline wrote:
MezzoForte wrote:
DAYYYY-UMMM
THAT IS AWESOME. LEIK, FROSTBITE.
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THAT IS AWESOME. LEIK, FROSTBITE.
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But she's supposed to be FREEZING! :D *shot*
Thank you so much, Mezzo. ^_^
OF COURSE :'D
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But it looks like all the awesome stuff started up in my six month hiatus.... ;-;
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Franziska1959 wrote:
I would so totally help...
But it looks like all the awesome stuff started up in my six month hiatus.... ;-;
But it looks like all the awesome stuff started up in my six month hiatus.... ;-;
That doesn't mean you can't help! ^_^ Since we're starting to develop a solid storyline, we need more help than ever.
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Seriously though, we need all the help we can get around here. As you can see, the number of active members on the project is rather small. So of COURSE you can help! As Fatal says, we're just developing our plot. (compare to SMako's plot structure and you'll see just how little our plot has actually developed :'D) SO COME ON IN!
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Anyway
Spoiler: To save space.
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Franziska1959 wrote:
Spoiler: To save space.
Actually that is EXACTLY PROgram's (Glen's) power. XD
Edit: Though we could talk about Lisa's power a bit more. Maybe she could temporarily make virtual reality into (almost) true reality? Just throwing out ideas.
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Oh goodness...Perhaps she's one of those characters that likes to mess with everyone, whether it be the good guys or villains. You know, that kind of rogue cannon that goes off when you least suspect it.
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