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:sob: *sob* poor......*sob* PENNY!!!! WAAAAAHHH!!!!! :nixiesob:
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But seriously, I'm going to miss her too. She was a great OC....
Oh god, I just thought what Mia must feel. I hope she doesn't think she is responsible for Penny's death.............
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:o Wow, I wasn't expecting that. Poor Penny... Poor Mia...
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Whoa. Poor Mia...

and poor Penny. What a mess! :larry:

I love that you update quick. Write more!
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OMG! Poor Penny! That's just so.... tragic! :larry:
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Well, this is quite a good story! I'm impressed!
It would be great (in the later chapters) if we could have a bit more interaction with Dahlia, because Mia & Dahlia's rivalry is one of T&T's main points... but you can do whatever you want of course.

My prediction of what happened to Penny:
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She was actually murdered by Dahlia, and her wrists were split to make it look like suicide...

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Ordinarily I dislike hurried endings, yet this one tied in nicely with the urgency that Mia clearly felt as she tried to find Penny.
As for getting her address from Diego, convenient, but I sure as hell can't think of a better way to obtain a hidden adress!
It's "in vain" btw not "in vein"
Overall, a nice exciting chapter and a nice ending with Mia rather inconveniently fainting at the scene of an as of yet unknown murder/suicide.
Methinks that certain people may suspect her of such a crime but we'll have to wait and see!
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Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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(I imagine to look something like this only less like Regina-credit to me, the spriter.)
Fictional charecter or not, I was sad to kill her off.

WittyVitale: Thank you, i hoped to shock people. I was worried this was too predictable, then again I do make this up so, to me, it would seem like that.

.•°٭blinq٭°•.: sigh, I miss her already... :sadshoe:

GDM: Funny you'd use that smilie what with my sprite looking so much like Regina...thanks for commenting.

FirexxxSaber: Thanks for reveiwing, Mia can't seem to get a break can she? First, Terry Fawles, then Penny being so upset, now her dieing, and then there's the whole Diego thing...

kitsune13: Thanks, this chapter's pretty short. I took a little longer in between my writing of this to build up tension and what not.

kitty_sneeze: Thank you! You don't have to wait any longer, it's here.

The Red Dahlia: Glad you like the story, whether it's Dahlia or not will be revealed in the next chapter. I'll see about more Dahlia action as I don't plan to have her in it until she "kills" Diego.

FlyingTotodile: Thanks for the spelling correction and this story is very "convenient" in many places as I'm sure you've seen. Most things also seem to rely heavily on her Magatama too. Glad you don't mind me hurrying.

Onto the story (short chapter):





Chapter twenty four


Mia awoke, groggily and took a look around. She still sat in what she remembered to be Penny’s office and yet now Penny’s body had been dragged next to hers and laid down by her.

Tears welled up in her eyes, Why did you do this Penny? the droplets of water now streamed down her face dripping of her chin as they were followed by more and more. Every time she saw Penny’s limp, lifeless body laying there, her stomach would turn. Clearly Mia had fainted from the shock of finding her body and yet she distinctly remembered screaming loudly after seeing it. I guess no one heard me…. was the only conclusion she could reach.

“Miss. “Fey”, is it?” A voice came from behind her but her head felt too heavy to turn, it was strangely familiar and yet she could not place it to anywhere.

Both too scared to look and too tired to look she didn’t dare turn around or say anything. She waited to hear something else instead:

“Just nod if you’re too cowardly to say anything.”

She nodded slightly. Now she could tell the voice was male and sneering and yet it also had a sharp undertone to it. Her heart was beating a mile a minute; what was this man planning, what was he even doing there?

“I saw what you did to Penny.”

“What?” she said, suddenly.

“Yes, I saw what you did, when you pushed her against the cabinet causing her to hit her head. I saw when you panicked and slit her wrists so that it would look as though she’d killed herself. I can see you’re fingerprints all over the knife by Penny’s other hand.”

This was now getting way to scary and sinister for her to deal with. Was this a guy some kind of psychopath or something?

“Why would I do something like that? I’ve got no motive at all!” she shouted at him, now desperately wanting to see who this man was but still feeling too terrified to look.

“Yes, you say so and yet I bet if a court happened to hear this phone message Penny left you about an hour before she died…I’m pretty sure they’d see things a different way…don’t you think?”

She swore in her head, though hardly able to believe this was happening she had too accept it and try to do something about it. This mans plan was farfetched and yet she could see them easily believing him in court if he’d set this all up properly.

“Why?” she coughed out, choking on her own saliva.

“Why the hell not?” He said smugly “You don’t seriously thing I’d explain this, do you?”

“Please…don’t…I’m begging you, I haven’t done anything!” she pleaded, hoping he’d see some sense, have some compassion for, her; who’d really done nothing wrong.

“Oh, Ms. Fey, believe me. I wouldn’t be doing this if I had no good reason. It’s really a last result…but then…at the end of the day I don’t really have much choice. It’s you or me.”

“This is silly; I’m guessing it was an accident! Just tell the truth, plead man slaughter!”
He now laughed loudly; this was a little over the top in Mia’s opinion; she thought her idea was rather sensible.

“Plead guilty for Manslaughter? Please, I’d still get fifteen years at least.” He said nothing for a while “No,” he began, “You will take this punishment for me, it’s nothing personal, you see…my apologies for inconveniences but that’s just how life is I guess.”

“Please…”

“Now, Ms. Fey…I must ask for your silence, for a while anyway, goodbye. I hope we meat again sometime…Ms. Fey.”

A hard hit to the head, once again and Mia lay, unconscious and next to Penny’s dead and lamenting body.




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HINT: It's not Redd White.
As much as i hate to ruin the "suprise" I feel the need to say that. I'm assuming many people might think this as i had him beat her round the head, much like she is killed by him in the game...He also says something very simular when he does it...
Which does ask the question, "who is it then?"

All in good time!
Hope people liked it!
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I was very convinced it was Redd White. :meekins:


Is it someone we know?
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Is it..
ROBERT HAMMOND?!

hm I dunno D:
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Oh man, Mia's really in a bind now, isn't she?

Initially I was going to say that this mysterious man was Redd White, but since he's not... maybe that guy who was manning reception a few chapters ago, the one that seemed really distant? He seemed kinda shady to me. Or maybe it was Dahlia Hawthorne with a voice changer, I'm not sure...

Another great chapter, so full of questions and mystery, can't wait for the next!
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I was actually think Redd White for a while too...

Oh, I just wanted to point out that you said 'meat' instead of meet. No big deal, but still. ^^

Who could it be? Mabe it's... Diego! Dun... dun... duuunnn.... No, I don't really think that. XD

Anyway, can't wait to find out,
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Wow! They've changed location from Penny's apartment to Penny's office which she no longer has! You may mean apartment but you've put office.

This fellow's actions are a little too convenient for my liking, surely he cud have knocked her out without engaging in conversation with her first as stopping to chat with a witness whilst framing them doesn't appear to be a good idea to me.

I just hope that this guy's reason for all of this is decent!
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Where's Pikachu? ...I mean Wally!

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FlyingTotodile:
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Surprised is too weaker word for what Mia felt as she carefully pushed open a closed door on the edge of the corridor.


Cough cough, Yes, she's in Penny's appartemnt/house/flat but If you look you'll see i mentioned how she went through a door that led into Penny's office.

As for the whole convenience of him explaining his plot to her let's just say he did it because he's not the sharpest tool in the box...Well, okay, It may not make much sense but surely I can't be held accountable for the stupidity of my charecters, right?

Thanks for reading everyone, predictions are interesting and all will be revealed over the next few chapters.

It really is sad that I'm updating again the next day but there you go...
In my defense It's a pretty short chapter:





Chapter twenty-five


Mia squinted as she woke up for what was now the third time that day, the sun was shining in her eyes making everything very difficult for her to see. As cliché as it felt, the first thing she wanted to ask was-

“Where am I?”

“Ms. Fey, you’re finally awake! You’re currently being kept in a secure unit at your local hospital; can you tell me where that is?” a doctor asked her kindly but abruptly, his dark brown hair catching the sunlight in a very flattering way.

“What, err yes, it’s-” she answered to the best of her ability though she felt somewhat hazily.

“Great, can you tell me where you work, please?” he now asked, she assumed this was some sort of test for her memory.

“Uh, Grossberg’s criminal law office, can someone please shut the blind, I can’t really see properly.” She said, shielding her eyes from the sun.

“Julie,” he flicked his hand in the direction of the blind, “Please shut the blind,” now pausing, (and with the blinds shut), Mia could now see him glancing down at a black clip board. He nodded occasionally but was silent for at least a minute which meant Mia had time to attempt to piece together what the heck was happening.

“Okaaaay,” he began looking up at her, “I can see from this very basic test that there’s no long-term memory loss. As for short term…do you happen to remember what happened at all?”

“What happened…when?” she asked, genuinely oblivious as to what he meant.

“We found you unconscious at Ms. Robert’s house only a few hours ago. Do you remember say…what you were doing there, what you did?”

At seeing her blank expression clearly the doctor decided to give up, “Listen, Ms. Fey, acting as you don’t know what I’m talking about is all very well and good with me, but the police will be to question you once I give them the thumbs up on your health, they’re not so understanding as I.”

“No, I seriously don’t remember anything that’s happened in the last twenty-four hours, I’m sorry.”

“Riiiight, whatever you say…Ms. Fey…” he laughed, “wait, that rhymes!” he said, giving her a knowing wink which told Mia quite clearly he didn’t believe a word she said. He swung open the door to her room and left Mia alone for a moment, she tuned onto her side and suddenly was hit with a sharp pain in her head, she winced.

“Kitten, are you okay!?” the voice of Diego Armando came as she turned to see him rushing into the hospital room wearing a terrified expression on his face. “You- you don’t even know how worried I’ve been…my god; this is all my fault….if I’d only just not given you her address, none of this would have happened! I’m so sorry!” He was now gazing hugging her, his arms tight around her back.

Mia’s eyes were wide with shock and yet she felt very happy to see him, as if she’d not seen him in weeks rather than one day. “Diego…I’m fine thanks, what’s the big deal? Can you please tell me what I’m doing here? It’s pretty worrying when you wake up and no one wants to tell you what happened and why you’re here.” She felt light and happy as she said but she felt her stomach flip over as Diego’s expression turned from worried to uncomfortable.

“Kitten,” he began, she noted his careful use of her pet name, “You’re here because…well, we found you lying next to Penny’s body in her office. To cut a long story short they…think you killed her.”

“Penny’s dead?” she asked, the shock lessening as her own memory jogged a little.

“Yes, Mia, she is, now I need you to listed carefully, I know you’ve just woken up but I need to ask you if you remember anything at all about what happened at Penny’s.” his voice sounded deadly serious, as was his face as she could feel his gaze burning the top of her head which she had bowed down, wanting to avoid eye contact with him.

“I…I think some of it’s coming back now…” she said uncertainly shutting her eyes and allowing her long and rather matted hair to shield her face, casting dark shadows across it.

He nodded looking solemnly eager to hear what she had to say and so she recalled:

“You gave me her address didn’t you? I remember I felt glad I would be seeing her…even if she’d made it clear she never wanted to see me again, I needed to say goodbye and tell her I was sorry…one last time…” she felt tears in her eyes, after all, she’d never actually seen Penny alive on her visit. It seemed she’d truly lost her last chance to explain to her.

“Kitten,” she said placing his arm around her, a small comfort for her in the fog and darkness that seemed to haunt her memory and she strained t remember more, “I know this is really difficult for you to think about, I just hope you don’t hold yourself responsible…no matter what happens.”

“I think I arrived at her house a while after leaving work, as I got out of the car I heard…a terrible scream, and I think it came from Penny’s house! So…I ran over to the house with the red door and found it was locked, eventually I managed to break the door down and walk in. I...I think I called her name a few times but I didn’t hear a reply so I persevered a while…looking around and then found a closed wooden door...I opened it and found a room that was a complete mess, there was stuff everywhere and as I looked around I saw…I saw…” she was now shaking as she saw in her minds eye, Penny’s lifeless body.

“What did you see…Kitten?” Diego said as comfortingly as he could.

“Penny…” was all she could find in herself to choke out, “Dead…” gulping, she now sat silent as Diego rocked her as they hugged. “…After that…I-I don’t remember anything else, I’m sorry.”

“It’s okay, it’s not your fault…though I must say this doesn’t really add up, after all, they found you with a nasty head trauma; hence why you’re in here. Do you remember how you acquired that?”

“N-no, why?” he mind suddenly started working properly as she realized- “Y-you don’t think I did it right!?”

“What? - No of course I don’t. Mia, if there’s one thing I’m sure of in all this it’s that you’d never kill anyone, especially not Penny!” He said, obviously still pondering the event, “There may be…well, a lot of incriminating evidence against you but…well don’t you worry about it, I’ll sort this. I promise.”

“You’ll sort this? How are you going to do that!? They all think I killed someone and according to what I’ve heard since I woke up there’s a huge stack of evidence against me!”

“Kitten, there’s no need to get hysterical with me! It’ll all be okay…just trust me.” His tone was soft but commanding, Mia swore she saw a little tear in one of his eyes but she knew, no matter what Diego felt, Mia was feeling ten times as bad as him no matter how immature she felt thinking that.

All she could manage was a nod as he got up and left the room, turning round once more to glance at her, as he stood by the door.

“I’ll be back to see you soon, no doubt the police will want to see you but if the want to question you you’re able to request silence until your lawyer is present. When they do that…call me okay?”

“What? Surely you don’t mean…”

“Hmph, what else could I mean? I will defend you Mia Fey, right until the very end of all this...”

No matter what…




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Not much happened did it? Still, It was necessary in my mind to have that chapter. Hope people like it!

Diego says Kitten a lot in this chapter doesn't he?

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Wow, that was so cute. Diego is going to defend Mia till the end! Who will the prosecutor be? I can imagine his comments if it is Franziska. She's be 13 or older at that time.
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Nice job! Geez...Mia sure gets hit in the head a lot. She should wear a helmet whenever she goes somewhere. Nice job! I got kind of lost, but the I ealized that I forgot to read a chapter. Poor Penny in the chapter that I missed. I can't wait to see Diego defend Mia (or just hear what some character says about it). This should be good. Please update soon! *sigh* Penny was a good OC. I am going to miss her.
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Nice chapter, nothing particularily unrealistic apart from the incredabily unprofessional doctor!
It doesn't really answer any of the questions from the previous chapter but I guess I'll have to wait and see what happens next.
As for Penny's murderer not being the sharpest tool in the box, how did he manage to successful frame Mia for murder in a plot so convincing even the police are fooled?

As for the Prosecutor, please please PLEASE let it be Payne!
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*late to the pity party*
PENNY!! NOOOOOOO!!!
Okay, I'm done :edgy:

I must ask, is the person who's responsible for this someone we know? Or an OC? (you don't need to answer the question if you do not want to)

Anyhow, the Miego parts are definitely fluffy and cute; the drama parts are definitely shocking and... um, dramatic? :yuusaku: Lol, anyhow, but yes, enjoying this. And don't worry about quick updates. Better than waiting for three months for one update... *cough cough*
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I really like how their relationship is progressing. It is SO cute!
I wonder who's going to be the detective to question Mia..............
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OMG the plot thickens! Mia being suspected of murder is an interesting twist, and its so cute that Diego is going to defend her! I can't wait to find out who the mystery man is!!
I like your Penny-sprite btw! =)
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Ah, I haven't reviewed this chapter yet! Mia's been accused of murder and Diego's going to defend her, what a great twist! And I loved the way they interacted in this chapter, it was really sweet. Diego's totally going to kick the prosecution's ass!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Hurry up and update! I can't wait much longer for the next chapter! This is such a good story! Hurry! But make sure the chapter is excellent (sp?) like the others!
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Whoa, 14 days before an update is a record for me, I think...

I only writen about a page of the last chapter because I've had SO much work to do recently in English. Expect an update soon-ish. It taking a long time because I've never done a proper trial before and its pretty complicated as I have to make sure things actually make sense...


Amy: Thanks, It's not Franziska unfortunately. I find her quite difficult to write for.

Nacholover23: Your comment actually had me in stiches! Lmaooo, a helemt! Thanks for reading!

FlyingTotodile: There is a such thing as an unprofessional doctor! + His plan obviously doesn't really suceed does it sinse Mia certainly doesn't go to jail. I wouldn't go that off cannon storylines. :payne: Thanks for your kind reveiw though!

Caelestis: Thanks, hehe. I think I just lost my repuation for being a quick updater...

GDM: That's because Miego IS addorable! + You'll soon find out about the detective.

kitty_sneeze: Thanks, though she doesn't look exactly like that...well, less like Regina.

WittyVitale: Thank you, I always wanted to do a trial with Diego as the attorney!

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Chapter twenty seven

- District court -
- defendant lobby No. 2 -
- 10.30am -


It rained on the morning of Mia’s trial; needless to say this did nothing to improve her mood. Diego’s mood on the other hand still seemed quietly optimistic which though good prove to be annoying, allowed Mia to have a tiny glint of hope that she might actually be proved innocent.
Strange as it was being back in court –as there was a part of her which never wanted to see another trial again- things did not feel as uncomfortable as she had expected, after all, she was supposed to be a lawyer. She couldn’t help but feel pathetic and stupid because of this- A lawyer who hates being in court? That’s ridiculous…

“Kitten?” piped up a distant voice, “Kitten?”

She blinked, “What? Oh, Diego! Sorry…I was completely somewhere else…”

“Hmph, fair enough, you nervous?” he asked, his voice sounded slightly gruff as if he had a sore-throat.

“M-me, no, should I be!?” It’s is you defending me after all, not the other way round.

“No, don’t you worry Kitten; I’m quietly confident, don’t lose all hope yet!”

She nodded and gulped, “So is Maya coming today?”

“Ah, no…I’m sorry, she couldn’t make it today. I never actually got to speak to her on the phone anyway. Her aunt just said something about how she didn’t have time and I shouldn’t be disturbing her training.”

“Oh…” It was probably for the best anyway, she decided. For one Mia wasn’t sure she was really in mood for speaking to anyone right now. Also, it wasn’t exactly a great example to set for your younger sister.

“Don’t worry though; I’m sure your aunt will pass the message on though…”

Mia couldn’t help but highly doubt that…

“Ah, Mr. Armando, you’re due in court now.” The court Bailiff piped up from by the door.

“This is it, sink or swim...no matter what happens I’ll be there for you okay?”

She just nodded as he planted a quick kiss on her lips and they headed towards the courtroom. This really is it…if I’m found guilty…then that’s it…


- District court -
- Courtroom No.3
- 10.36am -

She sat up in the defendant’s chair, staring pensively down at the rest of the court; it was so awful to know that everyone in the room thought you were capable of killing someone –especially when it was someone who’d been your friend only weeks ago. She sighed and waited for the talking to stop and the trial to begin. Some where staring at her as if trying to gauge whether or not she was innocent or not merely by her looks, others just chatted among themselves about (from what she could hear) were their own lives, they probably cared little about what actually happened to her. Looking along the front row of the audience for the trial, Mia spied a blonde woman, probably middle aged. She was incredibly pretty but her face held the angst of a woman much older. Her bright blue eyes looked somewhat dulled and yet Mia had the feeling she’d seen her before, suddenly Mia realized who the woman was; She must be Penny’s mother… Mia thought sadly. Scanning across, she saw that she was sat next to a good looking man, his hair a light blonde, almost graying but in a very dignified way. His face was infinitely good looking but held a few tears streaming down his face slowly; no doubt he was Penny’s father. He looked up at Mia, his face turning from sad to angry as he caught her eye. She couldn’t help but feel guilty, even if she hadn’t murdered Penny. Obviously Penny’s death would have had huge repercussions but Mia had never really thought about how Penny’s death would affect her family. She felt a stab of guilt before turning away and deciding not to make eye-contact with the Robert’s again.

She jerked her head towards to judge as the gavel was pounded against his bench and attempted to push all thoughts of Penny’s family out of her head. Unfortunately, she couldn’t.

“The court is now in session for the trial of Mia fey.” His voice rasped, “I trust the prosecution is ready?”

Payne smiled greasily up at the judge, “Indeed we are your honor.”

“The defense is also ready your honor.” Diego said leaning over the defense desk and looking decidedly less slimy.

“Very well, then we shall begin. Ahem, Mr. Payne? A brief summary is in order I believe?”

Mia saw him smile nastily over at Diego, “It’s a fairly simple case so this shouldn’t take long. After all, they don’t call me the rookie killer for no reason.”

“Hmm,” Impressively, Diego seemed un-phased, “Well it’s lucky I’m not a rookie then isn’t it?”

“Indeed…” Payne trailed off sounding unconvinced,

“Gentlemen, the case please Payne?” the judge prompted them.

“The victim was found in her home office. Her wrists slit and tests showed she’d only been dead for around three quarters of an hour before she was found. The defendant was seen entering the flat with brute force on the day of the murder-“

“Hang on! That’s not true, I was only-“

“Ms. Fey, please try to control yourself!”

Mia, what came over you? Calm down! she thought, telling herself off as she saw Diego flash her a look as if to ask her the exact question she’d just asked herself.

“Thank you your honor-“ Payne said, shooting her a superior look, “Why it seems the defendant was unable to control herself on the day of the murder. Just by looking at this photo we can see there was clearly quite a struggle at the victims house.” He submitted the photo as evidence.

“Hmm, but Mr. Payne, I don’t see the problem. If the victim’s wrists were slit then that indicates no culprit as the victim likely killed themselves.”

“Ah, oh contraire your honor, my first witness will reveal all.” He nodded as the first witness headed towards the stand, her brown hair bobbing behind her as she wore a brown suit and carried a small notebook in her chest pocket. She brushed her hair from her eyes and Mia immediately recognized her to be her old friend from law school. Mia’s heart leapt. While she knew she’d get no special treatment, it was nice to see another familiar face what with Maya not being able to make it. She couldn’t quite tell but she swore she saw a small knowing smile grace Lana’s face as she stood on the witness stand.

“Your name and occupation?” the Judge asked.

“Detective Lana Skye, I work at the local precinct.”

“Very well, murder details please?”

She nodded and smiled up at the judge before starting-

- Murder details -

“The crime took place at the victim’s apartment in her office, at around 4.00pm.

Her body had been moved it seemed and the knife used lay next to her.

It bears the defendants fingerprints and none of the victim’s

Concerning the cause of death there are some unusual facts about the cause of death… ”

“Thank you Ms. Skye,” the Judge smiling back at her, “I assume Mr. Armando will be wanting to cross examine these statements now.”

“Ha…you know me to well your honor!” he said nodding.

- Cross examination –

“So Ms. Skye can the time of death be confirmed to that particular time?” he asked.

“Hmm, it’s not entirely confirmed but it’s clear the victim had been dead for around three quarters of an hour before an anonymous person reported it.”

“Anonymous you say?”

“Well, not exactly. He just wishes to be kept anonymous, that’s all.”

“Right, moving on then…the body had been moved?”

“Indeed. Here’s a map of the crime scene- Judging by the unnatural postion of the body and murder weapon, she was dragged from the indent on the wall over to the middle of the floor. The carpet marks also indicate this. Also we found some small blood marking on the floor and yet the marks on the wrists are relatively neat.”

“Right…” Diego seemed to be thinking now, “So…any idea of why she was moved?”

Giving him an incredulous look now she raised her eyebrows, “Hmm, Armando, isn’t that your job?”

“Uh, yeah right…good point.”

Mia noted the use of his second name. Perhaps the two of them had come across each other in court before?

“So…I have to ask, what are these unusual facts about the cause of death?”

“Well, though the victim’s wrists were slit there were no blood clots or signs of healing which mean the actual incisions were made after the victim was killed.”

There was a small uproar of talking now, Diego stayed clam as he clearly already knew this. “Permission to have the autopsy report updated your honor?”

“Permission granted.”

“So…if the victim didn’t die from killing herself or by having someone slit her wrists against her will…do you forensic people know how she actually did die?”

“Objection!” yelled Payne, “This line of questioning is not relevant!”

“Objection denied!” shouted the Judge back at him.

“How is that not relevant?” asked Diego, his voice high and irritable.

“Err, never mind…I just hadn’t said anything in a while…”

“Right, shh then!” he looked back at Lana, “So, back onto the actual line of questioning…”

“Ah, well, though I’m not actually in forensics myself it didn’t take the team long to find how she’d died. Apparently it was a heavy blunt trauma to the head.”

“Hmm, which does make me ask…while it is true that my clients fingerprints were found on the “murder weapon” -if we can still call it that- innless there’s proof that she hit the victim with the actual murder weapon then Mia Fey’s accusations should be revised!”

“Objection!” yelled Payne, his hair bouncing in front of his eyes for a moment, “Surely this only makes it clearer that Ms. Fey slit Ms. Robert’s wrists in order to make it seem like a suicide after hitting her in the head!”

“Objection! Prove it then…Payne!”

“Unfortunately, while we don’t have the actual murder weapon it seems that's impossible.”

Diego just smiled knowingly, “That’s were you’re wrong Payney-doodle,” he paused for suspense as the crowds began to talk among themselves, “Because I believe I have the true murder weapon…right here!”

“Is that so? Put us out of our misery then Mr. Armando.” The Judge chimed in. Mia could tell he was as excited as the crowd was.

“Fine…TAKE THAT!” he shouted out while presenting an old television which for just one moment Mia swore she recognized. “I believe that this particular television sat on the filing cabinet by the indent in Penny’s office. After doing a little forensic investigating of my own I found traces of blood and a dent. I later checked to see if said television worked and I found all the wires had been messed up likely from falling a high distance…well at least it would have been a high distance for something this heavy to fall anyway!”

“Objection! We have no reason to believe this considering how you seem to be lacking the piece of evidence that actually proves the television actually even sat on there on the day of the murder.”

“Ha…! How very naive of you to assume it claims something without backing it up…I’m not you Payne!”

“Go on then, do your worst!”

“I thought that was a given! TAKE THAT!” he now held out a photo that seemed to be of Penny’s office. “A photo of Penny’s office I found later that day-“

“Yes but how can we tell it was even taken around then-”

“Hmm, you’re sure becoming a Payne to me! If you’d let me finish you would know that on the back she scrawled the date it was taken, the very date of the murder!”

Payne paused a moment, “If we’re done with the puns Armando?” he spat the final word out as if it were dirt of the floor, “Then I’d like to see your proof that the Television was definitely there at the time the murder. While perhaps it was there on the day of the murder, can you prove she didn’t move it for some reason!?”

“I don’t need to though, do I!? Just proving it was there close to the time of the murder is enough paired with the evidence of the blood and the dent on the side where it would have hit her.”

Payne now seemed speechless for a moment, “Hmm, very well done Mr. Armando…but then…who’s to say our defendant here didn’t just push the television onto the victims head to kill her and then try to cover it up with “suicide”?

“If we’re playing the blame game…then maybe you’d like to back your claim up with some evidence. Let’s go riiiight back to the start shall we Payne? What motive does Mia Fey honestly have for taking Penny Robert’s life?”

“Ahehehehee, you’ll regret this I think Mr. Armando for you see, I do have evidence for a motive.”

“Wh-what?” Diego replied. This didn’t exactly fill Mia with confidence.

“Yes- I’d like to submit the defendants phone…I think you’ll all find one particular answering machine message very…interesting-“ he pressed a button and the message played-


“Mia, it’s Penny, Mr. Grossberg called me and told me you were looking for me. I just wanted to tell you to leave me alone please. You got what you wanted so I’m begging you, just leave me be, I-“


Mia cringed. She had to admit the message was pretty incriminating. She knew exactly how this all sounded.

“Hmph, “ Payne sniggered as the court room was in uproar, people shot her disgusted, shocked looks but the worst one was the one on Diego’s face. She knew he’d never believe she was guilty but his face once again did not inspire confidence. Surely he wasn’t out of evidence.

“I bet you all found that very interesting,” said Payne, his voice smug and self-satisfied, “But…it gets better. Especially when you pair the phone conversation with the large stash of money we found hidden at the crime scene. Anyone else think that perhaps the defendant was claiming what was hers…and more?”

Mia quietly face-palmed, It really is gonna be a long day…




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It was a long wait so I hope it was worth it! There might be loopholes but remeber I've never actually writen a convincing courtroom plot before so bear that in mind.
I know Payne comes off as abit of a jerk here but I have alot of love for the guy really! :payne:

I centered it to make it more Phoenix Wright like!

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Yay, new chapter!! :D And it was well worth the wait. I think this might be my favorite chapter of the story so far. It's detailed, well-written, and I love the way it's written like an actual PW trial. I feel so bad for Mia, being scrutinized by the crowd (and Penny's parents) like a common criminal, she must feel so horrible :( You really made me feel for her in this chapter. Also, I love Diego's interaction with Payne.

I've said this before, but I'll say it again: I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so into this trial!!
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Yeah I agree with WittyVitale.
I don't have much to add..

I wanna see Payne getting pwned by Diego! xD
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Do I sense some classmate rivalry between Lana and Mia? :godot:

Anyways, ANOTHER great chapter. I really like how you centered the text. It looks good!
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Nice...no, AWESOME job! Mia couldn't have done it! I wonder who did though... Yays! Lana cameo! Nicely awesome sweet job! I so cannot cait for the next chapter! This one was so worth the wait! Please please pretty please update soon!!!!!!!
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I'm really enjoying this story. Poor Mia. Nothing seems to go right for her, like EVER!
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“Objection!” yelled Payne, “This line of questioning is not relevant!”

“Objection denied!” shouted the Judge back at him.

“How is that not relevant?” asked Diego, his voice high and irritable.

“Err, never mind…I just hadn’t said anything in a while…”

“Right, shh then!” he looked back at Lana,


The bold line is quite possibly the funniest thing I've ever heard!

A brilliant chapter with my only critisism other than some grammer is that it finished!
I hope that you write the next bit soon and that you don't lose your rather excellent train of thought!
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I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed in a long time. I've been sick...Anyway, I'll read everything and review later, but, knowing you, I'm sure every chapter you added was awesome. XD
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Chapter Twenty eight

- District court -
- Courtroom No. 3 -
- 13.36pm -

“Objection!” Diego shouted from the bench, “Mia would never do something like that!”

“Objection overruled, please try and keep personal opinions outside of the courtroom, Mr. Armando.”

“Yes, but-“

But nothing, Mr. Armando. Can you show me concrete evidence that will prove, beyond shadow of a doubt that Miss. Fey would do such thing?” the Judge asked, Mia could see just how much Payne was enjoying this. His self-satisfied smirk had not yet faded.

“Well, no but-“ was Diego seemed to be able to splutter out.

“You know the saying, your honor,” Payne piped up, adding coal to the fire, “Only one person truly knows what your capable of…you!”

“Me?” the Judge exclaimed.

“Well, err yes your honor, but I mean only Mia Fey knows whether or not she’d do something like that. Mr. Armando here can’t possible prove she’d never take money off Ms. Roberts.”

“Ah, I see. For a moment there I thought you were accusing me of murdering Ms. Robert’s!”

“Okay,” Diego finally decided to speak (much to Mia’s relief) “Your honor, I’d like to cross examine the phone message left on the day of the murder please!”

The Judge sat and considered for a moment, “Very well- If the prosecution has no objections either-“

“I see only good things coming from this…good for my argument that it!”


- Cross examination -

“Mia, it’s Penny, Mr. Grossberg called me and told me you were looking for me.
I just wanted to tell you to leave me alone please.
You got what you wanted so I’m begging you, just leave me be, I-“



“Okay, now, may I just point out a few little things about this evidence?” Diego asked, after being silent for a few moments.

“Yes, of course you may. It is your job after all!” The judge said excitedly.

“Well, for starters the message isn’t even finished, is it? I mean really, nobody in this courtroom knows what it is that Ms. Robert’s goes on to say-“

“Anything else you’d like to point out or will that be it for your pointless conjecture?”

“Actually, no, that won’t be all- Also I think you’ll find there’s actually no real proof that Mia- I mean Ms. Fey had been blackmailing the witness for any money-“

“Yes, thank you Mr. Armando but-“

But nothing, I’m not done yet Payne because I haven’t mentioned the biggest problem with…well, with your theory about money, murder and blackmail and whatnot. I think what we really need to turn our attention to is perhaps the fact that the money that Ms. Fey was supposedly taking from Ms. Robert’s is still there.” Diego put particular emphasis on the end of the sentence. She was glad he was proving his point so forcefully, so glad she felt a little of the past fear she’d felt, go.

“Ah, perhaps you’d like to go right to the source of the questions to find your answers then, Armando? Maybe you should be cross-examining the defendant rather than a phone message?”

“Uh…well, that’s a great idea!” Diego answered, he now sounded very unsure though and Mia knew exactly how he felt. Catching his eye she attempted to gesture against this. Looking clueless as to what she was getting at, he swallowed.

“It is a great idea…but I think we’ve all tried very hard today…and so we…uh, deserve a rest don’t we!? Your honor, I request a small 15 minute recess.”

“Hmm, you’re right, we do all deserve rest. Personally, I’m all for postponing the trial for a few weeks. That’s give me a good, well earned rest!” the Judge exclaimed, enthusiastically.

“Ah, no you’re honor, I don’t think there’s any need for that!” Payne piped up. Mia noticed a particularly large amount of sweat pouring down his head at that moment, “But if you think it’s a good idea your honor, so do I.”

“Very well, I declare a short fifteen minute recess.”


- District court -
- Defendant lobby No. 2 -
- 14.02pm -


“Okay,” Diego began with a tried look on his face, “What’s the problem?”

“I know where this line of questioning with end…and it’s just as bad as the one it’s on at the moment. If you cross examine me, Diego, Payne will just expand on his point…it’ll make me look really guilty!”

“Right, well, that begs the question, what the hell do I do now?”

“I…don’t know. Listen; let’s imagine we’re Payne, okay?”

“Yuck!”

“So he listens to the phone conversation and then you point out how she doesn’t actually finish the conversation-“

“Yes, and?”

“Then, you cross-examine me about the “You got what you wanted” line in her message, now this would then lead to ^what^ exactly did I “get”?”

“Well, do you know what you got?”

“I’ve been thinking about this a lot and…I think I do.”

“Go on then-“

“You.” Mia said, shortly.

“What do you-“

“Shh, we both know I wasn’t blackmailing her for money, right? So what else could I take off her? It’s simple, her boyfriend.”

“Hmm, “take”? I’m no one’s to take, I’m my own man!” Diego said, looking a little offended at being spoken to as if her were a possession.

“You’re missing the point. Then, I predict Payne with say that I killed Penny incase she tried to take you back off me. Y’know, in an angry rage?”

“Err, no I don’t know but…Mia-“

“Diego, we cannot follow that line of questioning. You’ll be throwing the case away since It does make me sound guilty.”

“But Mia-“

She looked up into his eyes, earnestly, “Please don’t. I really don’t want to go to jail!”

“And you won’t-“

“Huh?” Mia asked, confused and her voice full of anxiety.

“Mia, I have the piece of evidence that will blow this whole trial wide open. It has potential to prove you’re innocent.”

“R-really?”

“Yes, Mia, I just want you to remember what I said- “I will defend you Mia Fey, right until the very end of all this...” No matter what, I will. Do you trust me?”

“Till the end…” Mia said, shocked at his romanticism at a time like this.

“Good, that’s all I need from you then.”

Then he kissed her gently, it seemed to last a lifetime for her. She couldn’t help but think how lucky she was. To have him; and now that she had him, she knew she could never let him go-

Ever.





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Okay, not as erm..."epic" as that last chapter but it still took me a while for some reason. Hope people like it...
Next one should be better, I suddenly got writers block at “Very well, I declare a short fifteen minute recess.”
Also I don't feel my descriptions were up to usual standard either...
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Ohh that's so sweet! I love Diego so freakin much. *cries*

I can't wait to see what his evidence is! What does that crafty devil know?? :javado:
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I liked the bit about the judge and his thinking he was being accused of murder. A bit uneventful after that and surely the cross examining of the phone message could have been expanded upon, you know, by analysing different sections? T o be frank, i felt this was severly rushed and the recess appears to have been put in mostly so Mia and Diego can snuggle. It's still good but not as good as the first court chapter. Grammer was better though.
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hmm... evidence you say?

Cross-examining the phone message? that's as pointless as cross-examining a parrot for goodness sake...

oh, wait a moment -phoenix actually does that.
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Okaaaaaaay! I fnally caughtup.
OhmyGodIcan'tbelieveyoukilledoffPennyandthenhadMiaaccusedofmurder!

But this story is epic! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Haha, nice. I like how the Jusge (that was what I was 'haha'-ing about) seems lazy and doesn't want to procede with the trial. Sounds like me! Haha. Awesome job! I can't for an update! I know the feeling of Writer's Block - it sucks. Awesome job though! I wonder what the evidence is...I guess I'll find out next chapter, hopefully! Awesome job again. Update soon!
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Oooo, this is really good. I can't wait to see the piece of evidence that will blow the trial wide open! And the sweetness between Mia and Diego at the end made me squee. Looking forward to the next part!!
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