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I cannot use the computer tomorrow, so I guess I'll write the next part now. This might be the last one. XD
Spoiler: Part 5
"Yes, I think it's about the right time," Ema said excitedly.
"That's great, Fraulien. Does that mean I can open my eyes now?" Klavier asked.
"Not yet. Just 2.5 more seconds, okay?" Ema replied.
"Um...I guess there's no point in arguing, ja?"
"Okay, now open your eyes!" Klavier opened his eyes and saw a lake that was shimmering all colors of the rainbow.
"Do you like it?"
"Ja."
"You see, the prism up there captures the light from the sun during the day, and the moon during the night. And at exactly the right time, the light hits perfectly, creating all the colors of the color spectrum and making this extraordinary scene. Isn't it beautiful?"
"So, this is scientific and scenic at the same time," Klavier said.
"Exactly. So, um..."
"Ema, I'm going to kiss you. Would you please not kick me this time?" Klavier asked. Ema's breath caught in her throat.
"Scientifically speaking...Yes," Ema replied. Klaver's face moved closer to hers. Ema's face moved closer to his. Then, Ema became aware her arm was moving toward her purse and pulling out the pepper spray.


I wanted to end on a funny note where I could continue if I wanted to. XD
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hehe. I loved it.
Great ending to great story. I don't think you need to continue it unless you want to.


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NO, EMA! NOT THE PEPPERSPRAY! XD Great story, as always! :draw: :sassy:
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Thanks, you guys.

Any suggestions on what I should attempt next? XD

By the way, I love your new avvie, GDM. :)
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Ehe, thanks Lida!

hmm.....what about a sports event? It could be anything from a tennis match or a shooting competition to a basketball or football game.

I just pulled that out of thin air and it's 11:30 pm where I live, so if it's really................'out there', I'll say, then please disregard it. First thing that came to mind after a debate, which would probably be to similar to a trial
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Hm...Basketball or tennis or something...

It may be "out there," but then again, so was the marathon idea. I think I can make it work anyway. I'll try coming up with something tomorrow.

Any other suggestions? XD
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Lolz pepper spray.

As for ideas... if we're going for a sporting event I vote paintball-lasertag-fight to the knockout to the death thing.

And do it Team Fortress 2 style. I want to see Edgeworth jump out with a baseball bat and beat someone whilst yelling "BOINK!"
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Ooh, paintball laser tag. Do or die. XD

Batdor_Trogman suggested a Star Wars parody or a random Facebook thing.

Too many ideas! Which ones do you guys like the most?
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I guess I'll let you enjoy this short while you think...
Spoiler: Phoenix/Edgeworth. Double Gasp!
The fan girls finally looked away from the window, distraught that there was nothing to see. Just then, they saw Edgeworth and Phoenix in the restaurant. Although they weren't sitting at the same table, or anywhere near each other, for that matter, the fan girls rushed at them. Both looked at each other and got up and ran in unison. They closed the door to the boys' bathroom, leaving the crowd of screaming women behind them. Too bad the boys got back from the whole "Mia taking her top off which is really a lie to distract you" thing, and soon boys were running after them. They quickly jumped through the hole in the window which was already there, and barely managed to escape. Once they stopped running, Phoenix panting and dripping with sweat, Edgeworth looked at him.
"Wright, no offense, but what do those people see in you?" Edgeworth asked.
"What?!" Phoenix replied.
"Do they really think I'd put my lips on something so...foul?" Edgeworth inquired.
"Objection!" Phoenix shouted. "You did that one time..."
"It was in elementary school, Wright! I was young and stupid." Edgeworth glowered. "Anyway, I hear shouting in the distance. Let's go."
Phoenix laughed in wheezes as Edgeworth dragged him along.

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Shorts rule! Especially those by Lida. XD

The paintball laser tag sounds like it could be interesting. I've only paintball'd or played laser tag. Not both together! lol.
I'd be interested to see what it is.

Facebook sounds like a great idea! That could turn out to be really hilarious. The usernames could turn out great, too!

I'll cast my vote for a Facebook "thing". XD
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D'awww, thanks, GDM.

Alright, one vote for Facebook.

What does everyone else think?
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So, I was reading your first fanfic.
And I laughed really hard at this line
"Wright," Edgeworth said, noticing Phoenix and apparently overhearing what he said. "Would you believe me if I told you Gumshoe drugged me and carried my unconscious body here?

Keep on writing, I'll be following your thread.
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Thank you, Z0idberg.
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lol! I love your events... nooo! not the pepper spray!
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Thanks a lot, edgeygavin. Do you have any suggestions or are you pulling for any of the ideas in particular?

I might wind up writing about a couple different events at once. XD
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Okay. Since nobody's responded except GDM, I guess I'll do both Facebook and Laser-Paintball Tag.
Spoiler: Battle Royale
"What crazy thing are we doing this time, Maya?" Phoenix asked as Maya dragged him along.
"We're playing Paint-Laser-Ball-Tag to win a tournament I saw on TV," Maya replied. Phoenix sighed. That did not sound fun or easy.
"What's the prize?" he inquired grudgingly.
"Free burgers for one whole year from this place! Isn't it incredible?" Maya responded dreamily. "But we can't win if we're not there on time, so hurry up!"
That would save us around $60,000... Phoenix thought as he walked slightly quicker.
"Are you sure you want to wear your suit, Nick? It'll get covered in paint."
"It's the only thing in my closet!" That fits, anyway...
"Your loss, then," Maya said. "I made sure Pearly stayed in Kurain and everything so she wouldn't be hurt."
"How did you convince her to do that?" Phoenix asked, shocked.
"I explained it was something "special someones" do when they need some alone time." Phoenix made a face. "What, Nick?"
"Nothing." Except for the fact that you enforced the ridiculous notion that we're in love when we're not...Wait. Does she love me? Nah. That can't happen, Phoenix thought.
Why is he giving me such a weird look? I didn't mean anything by it. It was the only way to get Pearly to leave us alone, Maya thought as they very non-romantically walked into the huge arcade.


Spoiler: Facebook (Since I Can't Come Up With A Better Title)
"Miles Edgeworth has commented on your status," the e-mail read. "Wright...I don't know anyone who hasn't been tortured at least once in their lives."
I wonder what Edgeworth's status is... Phoenix thought as he started typing.
"Whatcha doin', Nick?" Maya asked, peeking over his shoulder.
"Username: Phoenix Wright
Status: Being tortured again," the screen read.
"Nice, Nick. What is that anyway?"
"Well, Maya, this is facebook," Phoenix replied.
"What's facebook?"
"It's...Let me sign you up. It'll be so much easier than trying to explain. What do you want your username to be?"
"Hm...How about ULTRA MEGA HAMBURGER SAMURAI!?" Maya shouted.
"Um...Why?"
"Because it's cheesy to just put your name down, Nick."
"But that's what I did," Phoenix said.
"That's because you're no fun. And neither is Edgeworth, it seems," Maya said.
"Okay...Hamburger Samurai it is..."
"Yay! Thanks, Nick. Let me type my password. I don't want you to be able to use my account." Phoenix sighed and got out of the chair, allowing Maya to type her password.


There you have it. Two random things that have nothing to do with each other. Enjoy.
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LOLZ! Facebook is epicly true, even though i hate that sight with the passion of 1000 burning suns. That and myspace. ANd pretty much any site like that...

As for the battle Royale, I find it hilarious that Phoenix does everything in his suit. Also that Maya had to tell Pearls that they were doing special someone stuff. Even if she didn't mean it. (NickXMaya FTW)
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(Just wait. Even though I support Phoenix/Maya, I don't think I'll make a huge thing out of it.)

I don't really do facebook or myspace although lots of people tell me to join. I'm only basing it off of what little I've seen Mom and my brother do there...

As for the battle royale, I actually almost have a frame of reference based on my laser-tag experiences. It'll be awesome when I write the next part...Tomorrow. :D

I can't believe you managed to review before GDM. That only happens once in a blue moon. XD
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Spoiler: Facebook Part 2
"So, Nick, here's my status!" Maya exclaimed happily.
"Um...Eating hamburgers?" Phoenix asked.
"Yes, and I hope you make my status come true," Maya replied. Phoenix sighed.
"Anyway...Um...Oh, look, somebody commented on your status...Already. That's strange," Phoenix said.
"Laurice Shagginator said: 'Hey, baby. You can have a burger of mine any time,'" the computer read.
"W-what does that even mean?" Maya asked as Phoenix started typing.
"Is that you, Larry?" he typed.
"Dude, how did you know?"
"Because when something smells, it's usually the Butz," Phoenix typed furiously.
"Nick? Is that you? Duuuude, you're the Hamburger Samurai?!" Phoenix blushed from embarrassment and was glad Larry couldn't see him.
"No, Maya is. I'm just...temporarily using her account."
"Whatever you say, Nick. I won't judge you. If you think you're a girl, then that's not my problem." Phoenix turned bright red and furiously stormed off, away from the computer.


Spoiler: Battle Royale Part 2
"Wow, Nick! Look at this line. Looks like everybody wants to join the tournament," Maya said.
"Hey, pal," Gumshoe said excitedly. "Guess what? Edgeworth is going to be my partner! Not only that, he's paying for us to play. He' "s such a nice man."
"Indeed," Edgeworth said, clearly bored. "Wright, I'm only here because Gumshoe begged me to take him."
"Yeah, I figured as much. Same goes for me. Well-except you know-with Maya instead of Gumshoe," he added hastily. Then, he heard some commotion from the desk.
"Sir, a cup of coffee doesn't count as a partner," a familiar voice said.
"That voice...Will?" Phoenix asked.
"What kind of place is this?" Godot asked as he chugged his coffee. "Not allowing a man and his cup of Joe to enjoy themselves. You know, I think you would like to try this."
"I'm sorry, but I don't drink coffee," Will replied.
"You...Don't...Drink...COFFEE?!" Godot shouted, infuriated as he threw his Godot blend #275 at Will, who didn't have any time to get out of the way.
Oh, geez... Phoenix thought, remembering how Godot used to do that to him.
"...I'm afraid I'll have to disqualify you..." Will said. "What's a poor, underpaid actor supposed to do in this situation?'
"I'll pay for two people. That ought to be enough to make up for it. Right, Trite?" Godot asked Phoenix. How did he even know I was here?
"Um...Yes?"
"Okay," Will said, letting Godot beyond the counter. Phoenix gulped as the VonKarmas walked up next.
Poor Will... he thought.

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...Laurice Shagginator? Give me a second... *Grabs beating stick and attacks Larry*

Other then that lawlz.

As for Battle Royale, not suprised Godot would have his coffee be his partner.
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XD
Yeah, I tried to come up with a creative name for him to use since Larry: Hey Baby was taken. :D

I have a wicked awesome joke I'll throw in to the Battle Royale, but until then...*Smiles evilly*
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Lida_Rose wrote:
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Yeah, I tried to come up with a creative name for him to use since Larry: Hey Baby was taken. :D

I have a wicked awesome joke I'll throw in to the Battle Royale, but until then...*Smiles evilly*

Does it involve me, Cthulhu, Chuck Norris, Indiana Jones, or a grilled cheese sammich?

If not, then I'm outta guesses.
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XD
Don't worry, it doesn't involve you...Unless you manage to make me have to punish you again. :D

As for the other things...No. Sorry.

By the way...When will you continue your fanfic?
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I hope I don't do something punishment worthy... *Runs off and does something punishment worthy*

Once summer hits. At that point, as long as I don't have an ADHD moment and am off work, I should finish the next chapter.
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*Stares as you do something punishment worthy.* Meh. I'll let it slide.

Awesome!

So, when does summer hit for you? My vacation has already started. XD
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Hee, hee...Thank you, maddybob1.
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Sorry I'm late, again. I wasn't able to use my computer for two days and I've had a TON of things to do with school ending.

I've only gotten to read the first facebook part, but I can tell it's going to be good. A person's real self normally comes out on the internet, so I can't wait to see what Maya does!

I'll comment on the other three updates when I have more time. SO SORRY FOR BEING LATE!!!!! TT_TT
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Quote:
"You...Don't...Drink...COFFEE?!"

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"Whatever you say, Nick. I won't judge you. If you think you're a girl, then that's not my problem."

Hah! You have talent in a whole other league. I would love to read more.
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@GDM: It's okay, you're forgiven. XD And for a while, I thought something happened. :D

@JasmineJustice: Thank you very much. :D I'll put up the next parts soon. I just gotta get into the writers' zone.
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Wow. I just finished reading the other three chapters.

THIS IS GREAT! Poor Will, I feel so bad for the poor guy. I can't imagine what the Von Karmas will do to him.

I like Larry's username, too. Laurice Shagginator. It SO sounds like something he would put. Maya's was perfect, too.

I can't wait for more updates!!!
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D'aw, thanks, GDM. :D
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*Stares as you do something punishment worthy.* Meh. I'll let it slide.

Awesome!

So, when does summer hit for you? My vacation has already started. XD

Ahhhh....

Last day was today. I might have the next chapter up soon...
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Yayz! *parties*
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Spoiler: Battle Royale Part 3
"You two are together? That means you'd pay...$21.50" Will said to the VonKarmas.
"What is this foolishly foolish fool so foolishly saying? Twenty-one fifty isn't a perfect amount to spend on a perfect game!"
"We'll pay you exactly $20," Manfred said.
"I'm sorry, sir. I can't accept that..."
"Let us pass," Manfred interrupted, snapping his finger for emphasis. "NOW!"
"I can't," Will said pathetically. The following scene was horribly graphic, so I can't get into any details. Let's just say Will was transported to the hospital in an ambulance truck...Everyone was disappointed the tournament had to be on hold for a while...

Spoiler: Facebook Part 3
Maya screamed. Nick jumped ten feet into the air before running to the office, where Maya was sitting on the computer.
"What is it? What's wrong?!" Nick asked, shocked.
"I just took this quiz on which Steel Samurai character I'm most like, and it says I'm the Pink Princess!" Maya replied excitedly.
"But...Aren't the Pink Princes and the Steel Samurai two entirely different shows?"
"Come on, Nick. Nobody likes people who have to bring up pesky little details," Maya responded teasingly. Whatever, Maya. Whatever...
"So...uh...Can I use the computer, now?"
"In a minute, Nick. I'm busy talking with GummieMagpieLover. Something about the way he talks is just so familiar," Maya said. Phoenix took a peek.
"I wish I could have burgers more often, pal, but with my salary so low..." the computer read.
"Wait...Detective Gumshoe is GummieMagpieLover? Haha! What a ridiculous username," Phoenix said.
"There's also this Perfect_Karma lady who's status is: 'Whipping foolish fools for foolishly being foolish.'" Phoenix cringed.
"That sounds like Franziska VonKarma," Phoenix said.
"Yeah, I thought so, too. Isn't it weird how many friends of ours use Facebook?"
I wouldn't call Franziska a friend, but...It still is quite ironic...
"Just...Let me know when you're done, okay?" Phoenix asked.
"Fine," Maya answered. "See you in a few hours, Nick!"

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Hmm... I think you meant 'a few hours not 'ours' ^_~

Anyways, you update quick! I like that!

I feel so bad for Will. First Godot, and not he's at the hospital! I can only imagine what the Von Karma's did to him.... :ka-whip: :taser:

And I'm loving these usernames.... Perfect_Karma.....GummieMagpieLover......they're great!

I love Franziska's status, too. "Whipping foolish fools for foolishly being foolish." It almost sounds canon! I've seen other people try to come up with different ways to use her "word", but this is by far the greatest!

Please update soon!
which, with you, I know it will be :minuki: :maya: :pearl:
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You’re so small in such a big world...

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Whoops! Heh, heh...Alright, I fixed it.

Thanks, GDM.

And I will update soon. XD
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"Too Awesome to Die"

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I don't know why, but von Karma in Battle Royale reminded me of a quote from my friend on the fact that Druids don't have the silence spell and another friend's character is supposed to be annoying.

"I can drown an entire village in a matter of seconds, I can teleport anywhere in the universe, but whatever I do, I CAN'T SHUT YOU UP!"

As for facebook, lolz. I like Gumshoe's name. It's cute for him.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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You’re so small in such a big world...

Gender: Female

Location: In front of the computer, where else?

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Thanks, eliasbloodmoon. I'm glad you like it so far.
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Re: A Series of PW Events.Topic%20Title
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You’re so small in such a big world...

Gender: Female

Location: In front of the computer, where else?

Rank: Ace Attorney

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By the way, now I'm an Ace Attorney!
Spoiler: Facebook Part 4
"JSIJAISJIODJKLDNJKCNJAKnciuhuihdijgfhugfbiugdhksjhkjajdkqjhkjasjhqkjhaiojLJKLjkjAKLJSSAIDJSAIODSAIDHA"
the computer read.
"Nick! Help!" Maya screamed. "The computer's not working!"
"Have you tried restarting it?" Phoenix asked.
"No," Maya said, "But look at all the things I mistakenly typed! It's so embarrassing."
"Youmustbegreatinthesack!" the computer read on Laurice Shagginator's page.
"Maya!" Phoenix said, his face pale. "Why is this message from my account?"
"Well, after the computer started giving me problems, I thought it might have been something wrong with my account, so I..."
"You switched to my account! What else did you 'mistakenly' type?"
"Well...Here's Edgeworth's page..."
"we shouldgo Out sometime," the computer read.
"W-whaaaaaaaaaaaaat?!" Phoenix asked, shocked.
"And here's Perfect_Karma's page..."
"Whips. Kinky. ilike," the computer screen read.
Phoenix was silent, his face getting paler and paler.
"And here's GummyMagpieLover's page..."
"Please, no more," Phoenix groaned.
"i wanna**** youso Hard, maggie'd be jelus."
"...Noooooooooooooooooo!" Phoenix screamed. "Why did you submit these?"
"I didn't mean to, Nick. It just happened. I swear," Maya said.
"Somebody commented on your status:
Edgey-pooLover said: 'WHIPPERSNAPPER! You should be grateful for all the things life gives you, you selfish child!'" the computer read.
"...Oldbag is on Facebook? Noooooo! That's the worst thing that's happened so far!" Phoenix squeaked. "Quick! Turn off the computer!"
"What's the magic word, Nick?"
"PLEASE!" Phoenix screamed so loud Maya's ears were still ringing as she restarted the computer.


Spoiler: Battle Royale Part 4
"Ooh, la la. Who else wants to participate in ze competition?" Armstrong asked.
This is who they found to replace Will? Surely they could do better than that, Phoenix thought. Why must the writer of this fanfiction torture me this way? Phoenix got pinched by Maya.
"Ow!" he screamed.
"Quit breaking the fourth wall, Nick. Now pay up so we can enter the contest," Maya whispered in Phoenix's ear.
"Oh, right...How much?"
"For you, sir...I'm afraid you can't enter ze competition. Non," Armstrong said.
"Whaaaaaaat?! Why?" Phoenix asked.
"Since zat trial, I have been fired. I have never been hurt so much before. Non!"
"Um...I'm sorry? But...I mean, it's not a huge loss..."
"How could you say zat? Nooooon!" Armstrong screamed, crying as he ran away. The competition was postponed again until they got someone else to work the counter...

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