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Title: Pursuit
Author: Jushiro
Rating: PG 13
Genre: Thriller/Mystery/Romance
Status: In progress
Pairing: Nick/Maya Nick/Ema
Summary:Ema Skye has uncovered that the cadaverini family is controlling the largest bank in japan. When the police refuse to stop the Cadaverini's believing it to be to dangerous Ema goes in by herself with help from Phoenix (Who is currently having a relationship with Maya). But Ema becomes infatuated with Phoenix, getting in the way of what they set out to do.
ANYWAY! This is just a test run so just read the first bit and respond with your thoughts... PLEASE!!!
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Prologue
Phoenix walked along the seaside in yamashita park, Yokohama. The cold winter weather bit at him in the dark of the night. Sea water blew up into his face. He was tired.
He was walking toward the nearby italian restaurant for his dinner date with maya at 9:00. She had told him to go early and get a booth seat. He glanced at his watch. The green numbers read 8:47. He sighed as he hurried his walk.
Suddenly something shiny caught phoenix's eye. That something just happened to be in the water. Phoenix walked slowly to the railing separating him from the harbor. Then he saw it. It was a body. Decayed and beaten, cuts and gun holes all over the body. It was a male wearing a suit, or what was left of one. The corpse wore a rolex. That was what was shining.
Trembling, Phoenix pulled his phone from his pocket and dialed a number. "Ema... I found a body..."
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Thanx for reading feedback appreciated!
THANX Delsy
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Man, this is a great intro. Seems like an almost typical start for a detective show.
Please continue.
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DOH!? You have me intrigued! Can't wait for an update!
All my fan-fiction in one complete package!
OBJECTION......and....stuff
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Oh, boy. :D
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Heeey how does that last one fit in... 
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Then you won't have this problem ever again.
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Chapter 1
Detective Ema Skye lay in bed, sprawled out under her blanket. She was deep in her sleep. She slept a peaceful dreamless sleep. She deserved it, last night had left her exhausted. The bedroom of her apartment was fairly tidy. The shelves were packed full of hundreds and hundreds of books on every kind of science. In her bedside table she had a stash of romance novels for reading before bed. The bed itself was a queen size. She needed one, during her sleep she moved a whole heck of a lot.
Out of nowhere her alarm went off, the horrible annoying sound broke the tranquil silence of her bedroom. Her eyes flew open as she let out a devastating groan. "Work..." Ema moaned.
She drowsily got out of bed, stumbled to her closet and shrugged out of her baggy, size to big pajamas. Stretched, picked out her usual set of clothing, and got to changing.
Over a breakfast of bacon, and eggs (and no she's not that crazy about snackoos to eat them at breakfast) she thought about last night. The body was a John Doe, The clothing was of top quality and pretty expensive, at least ¥90,000 (about $900). The body must have been rotting for at least 6 months. "Well the report will be on my computer when I get to work." Ema thought to herself.
30 minutes of Tokyo rush hour traffic/2 bags of snackoos latter she was finally at work. The japanese police headquarters. When she was finally at her desk she printed off the report on our unknown body, which turned out to be Mr. Tokuzawa. The previous owner of JBank who went missing 8 months ago. JBank is the largest bank in all of japan. Her assignment was also there. Go do some recon on JBank.
"Hmmm, I better call Mr. Wright he'll love this!" Ema thought aloud to herself.
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Thanx for waiting. I'm planning to heat it up in the next few chapters with romance and mystery. HEH HEH HEH
Also if you go back to the first post you see I've changed the genre.
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and 
YES! HEH HEH HEH I've added more to the summary please check it out!
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Yay! Next chapter soon!
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I have been without access to court records the whole summer. I am finally back at school
and decided to start this back up again. I am really sorry. I'll try to get the next chapter up by tomorrow. please forgive me.
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Phoenix Wright sat at his apartment's kitchen table. He felt like his body was hanging off his bones. He had gotten a total of 2 hours sleep this morning.
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This fic' interesting. Yay...! keep writting ^^
Made by me :D
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