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Anyhow, my comic is in a spoiler tag because it is veeerrryyy long! The panels are in a single line for convenience purposes. It can be one in a long line of episodes if I can get positive feedback.
EDIT:
Second part up!!!111one
Here you go- like a book:
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I appreciate your VAST array of compliments, Snakey! I hope to become your friend! *forced smile*
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*shot*
My apologies for the comment, I like your artistry here. Chill, alright?
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*brick'd*
... Okay.
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Otacon is Snake's friend, his 'best' friend.
Great start though, Fran seems too kind indeed... *cough*
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IRL, Otacon is my best friend (Ryu in CR forum). You should be friends with Otacon too, ask anyone else who has been in CR for more than 11 months & they know who Ryu is.
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Also, because felt the need to usethe 'Objection!' smiley... XD
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I was joking about the Ryu part, since I found that the user is famous around these parts (aka CR).
Well, hope to be buddies with everyone.
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I was joking about the Ryu part, since I found that the user is famous around these parts (aka CR).
Well, hope to be buddies with everyone.
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Ooh, a real drumroll. Nice.
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this is such a useless post
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Hmhmhm...
Let's not be too candid, shall we?
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Anyway, looks good so far. I'll be watching for updates.
A few pointers before I go:
1. Your comic would take considerable less room is it was linked off-site instead of spoiler-tagged.
2. It would also take less room if you re-arranged the panels. Like this one.
3. Watch for spelling errors. It distracts the reader from the story.
4. Make sure that canon characters don't act too out of character. Unlike my other pointers, this isn't something you've already done. i'm just letting you know.
Good luck with your comic!
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Anyway, looks good so far. I'll be watching for updates.
A few pointers before I go:
1. Your comic would take considerable less room is it was linked off-site instead of spoiler-tagged.
2. It would also take less room if you re-arranged the panels. Like this one.
3. Watch for spelling errors. It distracts the reader from the story.
4. Make sure that canon characters don't act too out of character. Unlike my other pointers, this isn't something you've already done. i'm just letting you know.
Good luck with your comic!
Thanks for the plug.
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Anyway, looks good so far. I'll be watching for updates.
A few pointers before I go:
1. Your comic would take considerable less room is it was linked off-site instead of spoiler-tagged.
2. It would also take less room if you re-arranged the panels. Like this one.
3. Watch for spelling errors. It distracts the reader from the story.
4. Make sure that canon characters don't act too out of character. Unlike my other pointers, this isn't something you've already done. i'm just letting you know.
Good luck with your comic!
Thanks for the plug.
Somehow, I knew that video belonged to you. Even though I didn't watch it.
Also, now, rather than bumping this topic up for months like it's a keep-up game, how about you actually make content or leave it be. Especially since there hasn't even been any since the first post.
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Anyway, looks good so far. I'll be watching for updates.
A few pointers before I go:
1. Your comic would take considerable less room is it was linked off-site instead of spoiler-tagged.
2. It would also take less room if you re-arranged the panels. Like this one.
3. Watch for spelling errors. It distracts the reader from the story.
4. Make sure that canon characters don't act too out of character. Unlike my other pointers, this isn't something you've already done. i'm just letting you know.
Good luck with your comic!
Thanks for the plug.
Somehow, I knew that video belonged to you. Even though I didn't watch it.
Also, now, rather than bumping this topic up for months like it's a keep-up game, how about you actually make content or leave it be. Especially since there hasn't even been any since the first post.
Well, excuuuuuuse me, Princess. I'm sorry I didn't read the date of posting before I made a legitimate post in this thread. That must be so annoying to you.
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Yeah, you did nothing wrong. She had bumped it shortly before.
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Alright. Sorry. I jumped the gun.
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You guys are SO CUTE! XD
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You guys are SO CUTE! XD
Thanks to Lind_L_Tailor for the badass sig!
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Anyway, looks good so far. I'll be watching for updates.
A few pointers before I go:
1. Your comic would take considerable less room is it was linked off-site instead of spoiler-tagged.
2. It would also take less room if you re-arranged the panels. Like this one.
3. Watch for spelling errors. It distracts the reader from the story.
4. Make sure that canon characters don't act too out of character. Unlike my other pointers, this isn't something you've already done. i'm just letting you know.
Good luck with your comic!
Now, now. Isn't it up to me to decide the style of my stuff?
1) I think I prefer it to be spoiler-tagged.
2) I arranged it in that manner because I, for one, find it tedious to scroll screen close-ups from left to right, then back to the left, then down, then to the right, etc. (Oka- where's the panels? O_o)
3) Where are the spelling errors?! I kill them!
4) I'll keep an eye out for that...
And it's in Sprite Comics, it's an illustration of a scene to be from my story, and it's how I prefer it to be. What more do you want from me?!
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You guys are SO CUTE! XD
XD So much fun! Not to sound megalomania, but it's like watching Meerkat Manor! Reading your posts to each other.
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Franzy's assistant says "Geeze". It's "Jeez" or "Geez". That one error actually tricked me into think there were multiple. But, no, it's just one.
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You wanna know something funny?
I meant to.
I guess I accidentally put the same link here as I did with the Edgey thread.
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Franzy's assistant says "Geeze". It's "Jeez" or "Geez". That one error actually tricked me into think there were multiple. But, no, it's just one.
I didn't think it mattered either way.
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You wanna know something funny?
I meant to.
I guess I accidentally put the same link here as I did with the Edgey thread.
I thought that might be the case.
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You wanna know something funny?
I meant to.
I guess I accidentally put the same link here as I did with the Edgey thread.
I thought that might be the case.
Either way, it's my decision. Right? Although, the trumpet thing was funny. XD
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I meant to.
I guess I accidentally put the same link here as I did with the Edgey thread.
I thought that might be the case.
Either way, it's my decision. Right? Although, the trumpet thing was funny. XD
It was.
But I meant set it up like this
But, like you said, it's your choice.
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'Geeze' might not be correct but it put a certain emphasis so I don't think it's a mistake. Geeze.
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'Geeze' might not be correct but it put a certain emphasis so I don't think it's a mistake. Geeze.
YOU ALWAYS DISPUTE ME, GREENY! WHY?
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'Geeze' might not be correct but it put a certain emphasis so I don't think it's a mistake. Geeze.
YOU ALWAYS DISPUTE ME, GREENY! WHY?
He's just like that. That's why he's my arch-nemesis!
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And both sides of the story are always appreciated in a dispute. Both the anti- and ante-subject.
Like... in a case!
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You mean you, or interesting, or... Well, it may take a while. Inspiration isn't easy. It has to slap me in the face. Well, maybe it does, but it probably doesn't have to. I'm really not so sure about it...
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