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this probabaly isnt gonna be very good, but i have a begining here. tell me what you think... ema and klavier pairing.


Spoiler: prologue
i really dont know how it came to this. loyalty.trust.love. and now he has no chance to apologise. we are almost at equals now... but that wont bring it back. or him... klavier... why... why would you do that to me... i loved you.. i love you still...but.why??? these tears threaten to take me over... but no!!*shouting* i wont give in!

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Sounds like something interesting. I'm willing to give it a read!
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FlameInferno wrote:
Sounds like something interesting. I'm willing to give it a read!


meee toooo =D
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hey you guys are really nice!!!
i'll carry on writing it then - i was gonna forget about it cause it was lame!!
love you guys!!!
this isnt very much and isnt proofread as i just wrote thiss while posting. xx
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11:40
detention center.
(ema?? i dont get it. for once, it isnt only maya who is confused..)
maya: oi! whats that supposed to mean???
ema: hey! how are you?? hey maya! scientifically speaking, your top is a lovely beige!
(scientifically speaking?? more like 'i like your top'. though i must admit, its nice to see maya out of her acolytes uniform)
*ema starts biting on her lip,all troules remembered*
phoenix:ema, dont worry. im just going to ask you some questions and then go investigate and tomorrow we will get you a not guilty verdict!
ema: no, you wont.
phoenix: yes i will! i promise ema!!
ema: no. you. wont!
tears appear in emas eyes along with the psyche lock over her heart.
phoenix:oh.


oh i have started writing another fanfic by the ways. with the pairings of mia and diego and phoenix and maya. http://forums.court-records.net/present-testimony/wedding-fiasco-t16461.html please read!!!
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Last edited by ilygodot on Fri Jul 31, 2009 9:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
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This is getting interesting. I wonder what her psyche lock is about!
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here we go!!! more done!! this mght be the end, but i might add more. i dunno. its very short. almost proofread this. sort of proofread, but dont count on it being perfect.
Spoiler: all of it now!!!
monologue
I really dont know how it came to this. Loyalty.Trust.Love. And now he has no chance to apologise. We are almost at equals now... but that wont bring it back. Or him... Klavier... Why?... Why would you do that to me?... I loved you.. I love you still...But.Why??? These tears threaten to take me over... But no!!*Shouting* I wont give in!*

11:40
detention center.
(Ema?? I dont get it. For once, it isnt only Maya who is confused..)
Maya: Oi! Whats that supposed to mean???
ema: Hey! How are you?? Hey Maya! Scientifically speaking, your top is a lovely beige!
(Scientifically speaking?? More like 'i like your top'. Though i must admit, its nice to see maya out of her acolytes uniform)
*Ema starts biting on her lip,all troubles remembered*
Phoenix:Ema, dont worry. Im just going to ask you some questions and then go investigate and tomorrow we will get you a not guilty verdict!
Ema: No, you wont.
Phoenix: Yes i will! I promise Ema!!
Ema: No. You. Wont!
Tears appear in ema's eyes along with the psyche lock over her heart.
phoenix:Oh.


Phoenix:Ema. Look at me.Whats going on?
Ema:Nothing. Im in the detention center, what do you expect?
(She herself is entirely oblivious to this!)
Maya:Well, scientifically speaking, you should be feeling upset, confused and devestated because of your loss. is the food still good in there?
(Trust you, Maya!)
Ema:I wouldnt know. I havent eaten anything since i got here.
(Oh Ema...)
Maya:Well, its nice and warm in there isnt it Ema?
(Give it up Maya! you're just making it worse!)
Ema:Its warm in here but i am feeling cold... odd for a warm blooded animal...
Phoenix:dont worry ema!! we'll find klaviers killer and bring him to justice!!!
Ema: No, you wont... not a HIM anyway...
Phoenix: Ema? What do you mean?
Ema:You dont want to take my case.
Maya:What? Of course we want to take your case!Dont we Nick?
Phoenix: Yes, of course we do!
Ema:No, you dont. Not unless you want a guilty verdict...
!
Phoenix:Ema! We'll find the truth! Just trust us on this one!
Ema:The truth... thats the problem... because I DID IT. I killed him! I killed Klavier!
No you didnt Ema! You would never kill anyone, let alone Klavier!
I did... because he stole it..
Stole what?
He stole the last snackoo...!

what d'ya think??
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....That last sentence had me laughing for a bit for some odd reason! I could just imagine Phoenix's reaction to that. Great chapter!
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thank you!!!
you b da best!!!

i might put more on here in not sure yet. check out my other fanfic!!!(probably said that but i have no replies)
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He stole the last snackoo...!


XD LOL! she made a big deal about the snackoo xD
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yea,that was the idea,lol. heh heh. if i were ema,i would probably kill someone stealing snackoo.heh heh.i couldnt kill klav tho.
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:beef: wow....... This fic's cool ^^ I can just imagine the scene. Can't stop laughing when imagining the last part.
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:godot: ta! :godot:
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