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Will Larry ever escape loserdom? I doubt it...The Larryesque never will, either.
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Will Larry ever escape loserdom? I doubt it...The Larryesque never will, either.
Nah, I don't think so. The next story is so gonna kill Larry.
Not literally, but Edgey just has to get his revenge on the buffoon for the events of 3-5. And before.
Yeah...you heard it, straight from me! The Author!
if I tell you that I hired someone to write it instead of me, would you believe it?
No, I really wrote the story myself, but, just asking.
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Lol jk......sort of.....
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So review chapter nine!
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The investigation stays true to the games in terms of characterization and how it's actually carried out but done professionally enough that it feels real. The plot appears to be thicking nicely.
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I liked how everyone was in character and how funny it was too.
PS: By the way, how do you use the smiley with
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I liked how everyone was in character and how funny it was too.
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Lol, you have to click "view more smilies"
But seriously, giving me Gants is telling me that my story sucks...bad...
And there's a sequel
present-testimony/time-happiness-sequel-indecision-phoenix-iris-t16594.html
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The investigation stays true to the games in terms of characterization and how it's actually carried out but done professionally enough that it feels real. The plot appears to be thicking nicely.
You give reviews specifying positive things that I wasn't even aware that I added. That makes me feel very good about myself.
Thanks!
Now...what's wrong with the chapter?
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It might be a week before I can update again, just because of time constraints.
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Just my thoughts though. I liked this. I'll go read your other story now. Nice work. :)
Clearly, this you have not read this fic.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4924538/1/C ... _the_Larry
Oh right, it's not mine. It's just something I like a lot
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Aw...not a detailed review?
Pfft, I don't believe there isn't something wrong. Come on, I actually need to improve my writing
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4924538/1/C ... _the_Larry
Oh right, it's not mine. It's just something I like a lot
Thanks for the review!
I have read it before actually. It's not a bad fic, but that doesn't mean that I agree with the author's interpretation of Larry.
And you're welcome. ^_^
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Pfft, I don't believe there isn't something wrong. Come on, I actually need to improve my writing
Well, Platinum Skye already brought up a number of the things that I would have complained about. There isn't much point in my repeating what's been said already.
But, I suppose that I can expand a bit (I will always take an invitation to talk too much :P).
Although the basics of the fic seem solid enough, I would like to see you work on your details and descriptions a bit. While the characters talk, what is happening? It just helps set the scene a bit better, at least it does for me. I've never been a fan of long strings of dialogue without any descriptions because it makes it harder to picture the scene.
There are some grammar errors, but none so bad that they really interfered with my enjoyment of the story. Still, it would be nice to see those fixed.
I don't have much else to say. I hope that this helps.
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I thought this one was pretty good too, hope you can update more!
Although comparing this to your first story is like comparing the First Phoenix Wright to Justice for All...
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I liked how everyone was in character and how funny it was too.
PS: By the way, how do you use the smiley with
clapping? Lol, you have to click "view more smilies"
But seriously, giving me Gants is telling me that my story sucks...bad...
And there's a sequel
present-testimony/time-happiness-sequel-indecision-phoenix-iris-t16594.html
Oh, but it's the only clapping smilie... And I think it deserved some applause.
And I haven't read Green Eggs and Ham since I was 5...
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Pfft, I don't believe there isn't something wrong. Come on, I actually need to improve my writing
Well, Platinum Skye already brought up a number of the things that I would have complained about. There isn't much point in my repeating what's been said already.
But, I suppose that I can expand a bit (I will always take an invitation to talk too much :P).
Although the basics of the fic seem solid enough, I would like to see you work on your details and descriptions a bit. While the characters talk, what is happening? It just helps set the scene a bit better, at least it does for me. I've never been a fan of long strings of dialogue without any descriptions because it makes it harder to picture the scene.
There are some grammar errors, but none so bad that they really interfered with my enjoyment of the story. Still, it would be nice to see those fixed.
I don't have much else to say. I hope that this helps.
It does, it really does.
I always knew that I had to describe the setting, but it just really never occured. And...honestly, I'm terrible at writing setting descriptions.
As for what Platinum Skye said, I attempted to rectify most of my errors from the third by giving explanations in the fourth.
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4924538/1/C ... _the_Larry
Oh right, it's not mine. It's just something I like a lot
Thanks for the review!
I have read it before actually. It's not a bad fic, but that doesn't mean that I agree with the author's interpretation of Larry.
And you're welcome. ^_^
Oh...OK.
Well, if you notice in my Fic, Iris never really directly rejects him, so he never actually gets the hint that she doesn't reciprocate, that, and the fact that he's dumb as a sack of bricks. (Which is why he couldn't defend himself in case 1-1. I mean, seriously, anyone with an IQ of 70 or above could beat 1-1)
And I think it deserved some applause.
And I haven't read Green Eggs and Ham since I was 5...
Honestly, Gant applauds at the absolute most terrible times possible.
Bad sentence grammar.
Well...uh...I think your last statement is quite an exxageration, but nevertheless thanks!
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The court sequences contained a couple of contradictions that I bypassed when I first proofread them and then caught later on. See if you can catch them.
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I mean it. It's not often we get new shippers.
So in order for the movement to stay alive, there must be a constant stream of new material for us to feast our voracious minds on.
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I mean it. It's not often we get new shippers.
So in order for the movement to stay alive, there must be a constant stream of new material for us to feast our voracious minds on.
Well I'll see what I can do Although it would probably take months and still be a terrible job...
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I mean it. It's not often we get new shippers.
So in order for the movement to stay alive, there must be a constant stream of new material for us to feast our voracious minds on.
Well I'll see what I can do Although it would probably take months and still be a terrible job...
Don't be so pessimistic.
In fact, you get automatically boost 400% extra credit from me just cuz I love the pairing so much.
Sorry, wrong laugh
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I mean it. It's not often we get new shippers.
So in order for the movement to stay alive, there must be a constant stream of new material for us to feast our voracious minds on.
Well I'll see what I can do Although it would probably take months and still be a terrible job...
Don't be so pessimistic.
In fact, you get automatically boost 400% extra credit from me just cuz I love the pairing so much.
Sorry, wrong laugh
Yay?
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OK, I prodded you too far. Sorry.
I think it's the latter.
I MADE UP THAT JOKE!!! =D
Not sure if I have to say this, but the avatar is not mine, it was made by Croik...
That is funny
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OK, I prodded you too far. Sorry.
Nah, it's OK.
I feel like writing one anyway.Life's a Happy Song when there's someone by your side to sing along!
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I'm looking forward to if it appears.
I finally found someone to pair him up with!! Life's a Happy Song when there's someone by your side to sing along!
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Here's a minor update. If you don't like angst, or if you don't like cliffhangers, or if your squeamish, I'd advise you to skip chapter five.
From now on there will be four types of warnings.
ANGST
CLIFFIES
NASTY
FLUFFY
I think you should be able to figure out what each is.
OK, have fun!
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