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-Colorize gs1,2,3 and 4 spoilers
-Original Character
Kaito no Mizu/ based on Hobo Phoenix
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But anyway, nice work.
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Godot unmasked
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But I would fix Kaito no Mizu little bit
(his eyebrows move little bit in animation and I dont mean the difference when eyes are close and open)
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But I would fix Kaito no Mizu little bit
(his eyebrows move little bit in animation and I dont mean the difference when eyes are close and open)
i saw the problem in Kaito no Mizu, thanks
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It's not too vivid and not too pale too~
2. This one needs to be revised... -->
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unmasked, SPOILER
unmasked 2 SPOILER
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....new spritezzzzzz
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Neil Marshall :neil:
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Hmmmm... whatever, it is time to (7o_o)7 Sprite Arts Game char Deja-vus? Chores AA char in 3D! Ryu ♥ CR!
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New spritez x3
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GS3 SPOILER
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(no way it could be eye blinkin XD)
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Hmmm... I can see you're trying a hard to make an Original OC Sprite... buuuuuuuuuut There's alot of room for Improvement.
First, His shoulders shouldn't look so Frumped down like that. Make them broader, so it looks like he's standing straight. His suit can use some fixing. It looks like he took some clothes off the ground and decided to put them on. There's a bit of Raggedyness to the vest so try and straighten the lines out. The Shadow around his collor looks too big, try shortening it. His Neck looks kinda wierd. Kinda remindes of a Hershey Kiss. Try and make it Staight instead of curving. Nose, should be placed down a Spec. To me, his eyes look a bit big, also, it looks like you took one eye, Copy pasted it, and flipped it horizontally. You should try and make both eyes seperatly. His Chin is wierd, try straighting it out.
Okay, now let's talk Shading. His face and Hair have a fair amount of colors to them, but his clothes are lacking. His Shirt is fine, BUT the shading on it doesn't look good. Try studying the shades and brightness on the Arms of Godot. The Hair's okay, but his face's shading is messy. The Shine on his cheeks are a bit big, so make them smaller. Instead of using black for the lining of his face and neck, you should use a darker shade of his skin color. that way it doesn't look like a drawing.
I'de go into more detail, but I'll wait until you've made those changes and see where i can go from there. Ace Attorney Sprites are HARD to make. It takes alot of time and patients to make just one pose, Hours or maybe days just to make one face/body. So don't give up.
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(no way it could be eye blinkin XD)
The visor, in 2.1 is blurred while in 2.2 no x3.
My oc: Leon Lawgood
Hmmm... I can see you're trying a hard to make an Original OC Sprite... buuuuuuuuuut There's alot of room for Improvement.
First, His shoulders shouldn't look so Frumped down like that. Make them broader, so it looks like he's standing straight. His suit can use some fixing. It looks like he took some clothes off the ground and decided to put them on. There's a bit of Raggedyness to the vest so try and straighten the lines out. The Shadow around his collor looks too big, try shortening it. His Neck looks kinda wierd. Kinda remindes of a Hershey Kiss. Try and make it Staight instead of curving. Nose, should be placed down a Spec. To me, his eyes look a bit big, also, it looks like you took one eye, Copy pasted it, and flipped it horizontally. You should try and make both eyes seperatly. His Chin is wierd, try straighting it out.
Okay, now let's talk Shading. His face and Hair have a fair amount of colors to them, but his clothes are lacking. His Shirt is fine, BUT the shading on it doesn't look good. Try studying the shades and brightness on the Arms of Godot. The Hair's okay, but his face's shading is messy. The Shine on his cheeks are a bit big, so make them smaller. Instead of using black for the lining of his face and neck, you should use a darker shade of his skin color. that way it doesn't look like a drawing.
I'de go into more detail, but I'll wait until you've made those changes and see where i can go from there. Ace Attorney Sprites are HARD to make. It takes alot of time and patients to make just one pose, Hours or maybe days just to make one face/body. So don't give up.
Thanks, thanks and once more thanks, I appreciate your comment with its advices.
Sorry for the bad english
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GS3 SPOILER
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I'd say with a little more work to the OC, you'll have an impressive sprite.
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New sprite:
Young Mia Fey
and some recolor (GS3 CASE 5 SPOILER)
Comments are welcome :D
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Hmmmm... whatever, it is time to (7o_o)7 Sprite Arts Game char Deja-vus? Chores AA char in 3D! Ryu ♥ CR!
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Instead I'm sure young Mia doesn't wore a bra *
*Thank you, amigo
Sure, no problem
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Will use it AFTER my BFF's birthdate.
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Keep up the great work!
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Instead I'm sure young Mia doesn't wore a bra *
*Ah Touché
It would appear that I had it all backwards.
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.... uh, Thank you... Godot visorless GS3 SPOILER (3-5)
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the first and last time i played with sprites resulted in my avvie.
i have no future in that area of expertise.
keep up the good work!
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And I love that spoiler pic, Darklance!
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But i think her breasts show too much (?)
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Comments are welcome
I'd say
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