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the moral and legal issues that inevitably follow.
It's devided in three acts, I'm currently writing on the second one.
(yeah, it's still ongoing, sue me) Also, beware the textwall. xD
I've changed it all to link to the page at the Phoenix Wright Fanfiction Archive
since I had to repost it at the old forums. It simplifies things.
Summary: Trucy and Apollo each discover the feelings they both share, and one
thing leads to another... Takes place after Apollo Justice. Spoilers for the entire game.
Note that they don't know their 'real' relation yet.
Rating: 15-16+ (Mild adult themes, a single offensable scene)
Genre: Romance
Pairing: Trucy/Apollo
Page at the Phoenix Wright fanfic archive
Summary: Apollo finds himself in a difficult situation as a result of his relationship
with Trucy. Will he be able to turn this case around? Spoilers for GS4 and GS2.
Rating: 16+ (Adult themes, sexual references, offensive scene)
Genres: Drama, Law/Court
Pairings: Trucy/Apollo, some mild Phoenix/Franziska
Page at the Phoenix Wright fanfic archive
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“Hey Apollo-”
“I AM FIIIINE!!!” I screamed, only moments later realizing that I’d nearly
deafened my assistant, Trucy.
Like that. Makes it easier to read and comprehend. :3 Tackling it from a grammatical standpoint since incest squicks me.
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There's something unusual about it though; the POV now
switches to Trucy.
Oh, and sorry pariah, but I couldn't change my writing style
just like that. Well, I at least divided it into three paraghraphs...
Now I'm not quite usure if this is any good... I mean, it's not
every day that I have to think like a girl. xD
In any case, I'd appreciate comments or constructive critisism.
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I like this...and want the next chapter
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Well, could you look a young girl like that in the eyes and break her heart?
Especially if she's your daughter?
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Mehh oh well, carry on with the story lol i wanna know what happens next...
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but I liked it!
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Things are going to get interesting real soon, I think.
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Good chapter lol
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Presumably. Maybe. Eventually. What?
*ahem*
I wrote Chapter 4, and added it to the first post. (It's much easier that way IMO)
It's in Trucy's POV this time again. I thought it made an interesting
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Spelling is good. Still feels kind of 'wall of text' and hard to follow; see my tips from the first reply I made. Otherwise, looks decent.
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Despite the fact that hardly anyone even reads.
Or they just don't want to comment. Either way it's bad.
Well, at least there's still the joy of writing, wright?
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Cause they're perfect for each other
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Cause it's just awesome
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Cause it's so cute even though I don't really like incest
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And yeah, I know it might be a bit fast. I'm always way faster than I like to be. xD
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And yeahh i guess it would be a kinda strange fanfiction if one didn't like the other...
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Oh I can't quote your sig, but I think it contains a serious AJ spoiler:
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*ahem* Anyways, I'm going to have to have to think the next chapter over a bit
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some sort of cliffhanger or anything.... xD
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Anyways, chapter 6 is written and up in the first post.
I believe the last scene might- uh, how do I put this,
offend (?) some people, but I don't know anything about
ratings so I could use a little help there.
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Anyways, chapter 6 is written and up in the first post.
I believe the last scene might- uh, how do I put this,
offend (?) some people, but I don't know anything about
ratings so I could use a little help there.
It's not too offensive, PG should be fine.
In anycase, I like it.
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Anyways, as for the story, it was really good. I liked, was entertained, though the end of chapter six was kinda a moment of, "reading, reading, reading, readingHOLY CRAP WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT!" And I don't mean that in a bad way.
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I think I just boosted up the PG rating again. xD
Well, there's many big surprizes in this chapter!
We see a familiar face - and an all too familiar
location.
Also I spent a lot of time doing research on
wikipedia for this. xD
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Not that I'm complaining. I just didn't expect this to go from cute romance story to Apollo in court for statutory rape.
On the upside, it is an interesting twist, and a good story. One thing I gotta say though, always plan ahead when you rate these things. For example, in the trilogy that I was writing and never finished for I had backed myself into a hole that I hadn't planned ahead to dig myself out of, I had it planned on a first storyPG three curse words, extremely minor romance and undescriptive violence, second story PG, maybe PG-13 for more cursing, more somewhat stronger romance, and more violence with better descriptions, and the third story PG-13, probably R for tons of descriptive violence, mass amounts of drinking, tons of cursing, and one scene of sexual harassment. See, I planned ahead, and was therefore rewarded by not feeling bad about the rating.
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even if I wanted to; here in Europe we have an entirely diffirent
system and I don't get all the PG stuff. (What's it stand for anyways?)
But I did mention it had 'Adult Themes'. Wel, I'd say it's going to
be about PG 15 (?) tops... Or something. But I don't know much people
who've ever stopped at ratings. xD
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You really think so? :3
So, I've just finished chapter 8 (wow, already?) and added it to the
first post. (which is getting impossibly big right now xD)
And we get a surprize: This one's from Phoenix's POV! *cue melodramatic gasping*
I really enjoyed writing from his point of view. He is one
lucky man to have recieved the gift of such a beautiful daughter. *sniffle*
I'm getting all emotional because of it. It's just so moving. :3
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